Your my happiness ss zaya <3 on current track chapter 4 pg 7

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YOUR MY HAPPINESS

"TALAAK! TALAAK! TALAAK!!!!" zain yelled at Aliyah in front of everyone in Barkat villa. Aliyah stood there in shock, it was true, zain wanted aliyah out of his life. She knew without a zain there is no Aliyah.
"zain... please listen to me" Aliyah said while crying non stop
zain grabbed aliyah's arm and dragged her out of the house, unti he was stopped by rehaan.
"zain, calm down, you can't just divorce her, you have to say talaak 3 times for the next three months" rehaan said while getting aliyah's hand free
'' help her all you want,just get the divorce papers ready, for then she can stay in the guest room" zain said looking down
" no need... i rather leave then be in a separate room then you" aliyah said
"aliyah, please stop talking non sense" rehaan interrupted
"WHAT ELSE AM I SUPPOSE TO DO, MY LIFE IS RUINED"
"BECAUSE OF YOU MY DAD'S LIFE IS GONE!!!!!!" ZAIN YELLED BACK
zain walked off, but aliyah ran after him,
"zain please".Aliyah stopped her head was spinning. "zain"
aliyah fell on the ground, zain still walking up the stairs, when he heard screams.
"aliyah!!!" rehaan, shabana and gulam screamed
he turned around and saw aliyah on the ground and everyone heading toward her except suraiyaa shaziya, nafeesa.
zain ran down but stopped by the images of his fathers death, he went back up, but again stopped by rehaan.
"zain your wife has fallen, and you don't care, your love for her can not vanish that easily"
"it vanished when i lost my dad", zain went up stairs and called the servant he gave him some medicines and told him to give to aliyah
"and remember, don't tell anyone i gave you"
the servant nodded and went out of he room. zain sat on his bed and looked at aliyah's pic
" i know i still love you, but i also hate you, whatever did today not going to happen again, i will only hate you." zain said looking at the pic and then throwing it away along with other pics of aliyah. Downstairs "aliyah wake up" cried shabana
"sir here is medicine" said the srevant, rehaan took the medicine
"wait, who gave you" rehaan said in confusion
"aliyah mame is very good, i'll do anything for her"
"okay, thank you"
" rehaan beta, she isn't waking up" said shabana while holding her daughters hand
" lets take her from here" said rehaan while lifting aliyah, the haider family along with rehaan walked out of barkhat villa
zain watched the family go out of barkat villa, he noticed aliyah unconcious. he got worried
"she didn't wake up, zain what are you doing, remember what she did". zain closed his eyes and shut off is emotions for aliyah for good.
"Goodbye Aliyah Gulam Haider" zain said while closing his curtains.



Okay so guys i haven't written a ss before please leave your comments, and say if i should continue, sorry for errors, message me for pm and buddy
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Ch 1 Pg1
Ch 2 Pg 4
Ch 3 Pg 5
Teaser pg 6
ch 4 pg 7

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Yea! Me first!
The strt is amazing... i really want to know how he resists himself from her and it is very well written...plz continue and update soon!
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Beautiful ...do continue and pm me
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Wow this was great!! do continue please :)
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Beautifully written !!
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awesome start !!!...very well written...plzz continue soon..😊
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This was amazing :D update soon x
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Amazing...so beautiful...
Will Aaliya be ok??
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This is Awesome!
Please continue soon!
Loved it to the bits!
Zain told the Servant to give the medicines!
I thought Servant was line marring on Aaliya! :P
Continue soon please and do you mind sending me a PM next time please?
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