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Hey plzzz plzzz update the second part i cant wait to read plzzz do it fast
Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
OMG Shruti! You did not tell about this to me?
Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
😲 when did u write this?
i am in ur list no? Ek pm toh banta hai 😭
but actually acha hua pm nai kia.. otherwise i wouldn't have read ye bolke ki i have the link 😛
it is written very very beautifully shru 😊
this is ur first tym 😲
bahut acha likhti hai yaar tu
I am telling you. You are an amazing writer.
I read each word carefully. I was enraptured.
you should write more. U will write more. I'll make sure of it 😆
and pm me the next tym u write k? 😡
Originally posted by: -Saheba-
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AM FIRST!!--------------------------------OMG Sruthi this was so beautifully written.you had me hooked throughout the whole thing.I love the way you penned every single detail from how zain senses Aliya's behaviour and slight expressions to his pain and both zaya's struggle to put up a mask.The way you describe how he caused her pain by grabbing her wrist and how Aaliya's hope is crumbling down day by day..man too good!i want to read more!!!This was so heartwrenching. and you described it so well that i can visually picture it!!Please update ASAP!!!
Originally posted by: AashimaK
UNRES
Yayy I am third 😆😆😆 I loved it. It was awesome. Great job Sruthi 👏👏👏 You are an awesome writer. You expressed Zaya's feelings so beautifully. Zain is so gonna regret this. I feel bad for Aliya. She is going through so much. That ointment scene was the best. He still cares for her and he always will 😳 I was able to visualize everything. Update Soon 😊
Originally posted by: Mentalmaths
Its amazing...I was like...
in a crying situation...😭
You are just awesome...👏
Plz PM me whenever you write the next part...🤗😉
Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
OMG Shruti! You did not tell about this to me?
--------------------------------------------------------------This was very beautifully written Shruti 👏This was Amazing,The Hurt,The emotions are well written!Mein rorahi thi! in this part.Nowadays, the most she did was nod or shake her head and pray, or sit on the windowsill with her arms wrapped around her knees. She was getting quieter and quieter with every passing day, and it was scaring him.This is awesome! Update next part soon!
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