A ZaYa TS||Consequences and Revelations (Final Part on Page 12!) - Page 14

Wow awsm ending

it was faboulus
really luved it
tysm 4 d pm :)

Long it was really awesome...
Beautifully written...
Thanks for the pm...

Shruuu 🤗I LOVE LOVE LOVED it! You write so beautifully. I felt i was a part of the story and experiencing the same emotions and feelings as them. Not many stories make me feel that way LOL. Look forward to reading more xx

Wow
That was amazing
Thanks for completing this ts
And also thanks for the pm
Amazing ending
I loved the dialogue about the storm and the cloud at the end
Just amazing
And part 2 was quite emotional aswel
When aliya is talking to usman grave and Zain is listening.. I was crying lol
Write lots more on zaya soon
Will look forward to more of or work
And do pm me when u write on zaya next
Once again..thanks for such an amazing ts

Superb Ts!!!!👏👏
brilliantly written..⭐️
loved it❤️
thanks for pm...

SUPERB!
AWESOME!
WONDERFUL!

I am out of words to describe this TS.
This is simply amazing.
And next time you write something, pleaj can you pm me?
Thnks for writing this.

-Tanu...!

Originally posted by: -Aashima-

SRUTHIII Girl that was awesome !!!! I loved how you made it all happen on Usman's graveyard because their relation broke at that place and it mended at that place only. I loved how u made Zain listen to her monologue 😃😃 The best part is that how everything was so connected 😊 As usual you wrote it beautifully and I was able to imagine all the scenes in my head. I loved how Aliya didn't give up easily 😆 Do come up with OS now 😃

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written...

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply superb
loved it