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Originally posted by: -Saheba-
lol about time you finished it😆 but it was worth the wait.😃
Writer's block, 'nuff said. You would know. 😆 *Phew* Yayy :DEverything fit into place; his unbreakable faith in his bhanji, his unwavering belief that she was the one for him and most of all, his Dad's last word. Back then, he couldn't understand why he wasted his last breath on her name but it all made sense now. Dad must've known that she was innocent...and he was looking out for her like always. He felt sickened that he doubted his dad too, out of everyone. Hadn't he always done what was best for him? Now because of his own stupidity, he was about to lose the best thing in his lifethis above is my favourite part. you have NO idea how much I wanted Zain to have a break down scene where he says this as a self-talk!! I wanted this so badly but alas This was so beautifully written Sruthi, I am short of words to compliment you and your work.👏I really did too! Especially a scene where he remembers his dad's last breath, but it didn't happen...so I was like 'oh, what the heck, might as well write about it..." Hopefully we get a scene like that soon!Thank you so much, Saheba 😳 🤗I am really looking forward to your next writing 😉God knows when I'll update another one 😆 But thanks :D
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