A ZaYa TS||Consequences and Revelations (Final Part on Page 12!) - Page 12

Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: -Aashima-
LOL u started writing it when we were hoping that they will show redemption track and now redemption track is even over 😆 You are so lazy Sruthi 😆

Hey hey, I wrote like 90% of it ages ago, then I had this case of major writer's block 😆

Ask Saheba, she'll tell you! :P

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: saranvir
sruthi 😕 how come , i mean how how how in the world i dint look at this post, i mean how
m sory 😭 kan pakad ke

this is so beautiful , i mean you are good writer (shupe rustam ) 🤗

indeed beautiful , 👏 👏

😲 can't wait for next parts

Ahaha Sara, it's okay, you're forgiven 😆

Aww, thanks girl 😳 🤗

I'll update it soon :)

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: anaghazaya
Superb loved the teaser
Waiting for the chapter

Thank you 😳

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-Aashima-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: musicxolover

Hey hey, I wrote like 90% of it ages ago, then I had this case of major writer's block 😆
Ask Saheba, she'll tell you! :P

LOL I know u had it written since August -_-

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..Zainab..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Last time i commented it was on page 11, i am so far behind man, Sorry I promise to catch up soon! Pakka!

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: _Littles12_
Last time i commented it was on page 11, i am so far behind man, Sorry I promise to catch up soon! Pakka!

Yupp, you do that 😆

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Updated Part 2 on Page 12!

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Avii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Res. See don't scold me, i'll Unres within this week 😆

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

lol about time you finished it😆 but it was worth the wait.😃

Everything fit into place; his unbreakable faith in his bhanji, his unwavering belief that she was the one for him and most of all, his Dad's last word. Back then, he couldn't understand why he wasted his last breath on her name but it all made sense now. Dad must've known that she was innocent...and he was looking out for her like always. He felt sickened that he doubted his dad too, out of everyone. Hadn't he always done what was best for him? Now because of his own stupidity, he was about to lose the best thing in his life

this above is my favourite part. you have NO idea how much I wanted Zain to have a break down scene where he says this as a self-talk!! I wanted this so badly but alas This was so beautifully written Sruthi, I am short of words to compliment you and your work.👏

I am really looking forward to your next writing 😉

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Sruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
Res. See don't scold me, i'll Unres within this week 😆

Kay, if you say so 😆 *You better! :P*

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