A ZaYa TS||Consequences and Revelations (Final Part on Page 12!) - Page 10

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

superbbb update 👏👏
brilliantly penned...👍🏼
loved it..❤️
plzz continue soon...

Originally posted by: -SH-

Wonderfully written Shruti!! I could visualize it. Waiting for the most awaited part..

PS - Can we have Zaroorat when he's on his knees... pretty plz.. 😆

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

Did i say take ur tym? 😕
I take back my words, update fast fast 😆
Nd how did you qoute people together, tell me please 😊

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

vry beautifully written
loved it

Originally posted by: AashimaK

Sruthi Gawddd this was superb, amazing, awesome, mind blowing and fantabulous👏👏👏 I guess I haven't left any adjective 😆 Dude you are a genius. U just showed Zain a dream that made him realize Aliya's worth !!! U ma nigga 🤣 My favourite lines were these"Sometimes, a break from reality was what a person needed. Sadly, that break couldn't last for too long otherwise I'd be tempted to stay oblivious forever." I just loved it. It is actually so true. When you are in Aliya's condition I think staying oblivious is the best option to remain sane. Don't u want sth same to happen 😆 like Zain hearing Nafeeza confessing about her deeds 😉 I want the same to happen. I actually want everything in this update to actually happen in the show. Aliya took a right decision by leaving Beintehaa. I can't wait for Zain to ask for forgiveness from her. I am so happy that this update got long 😆 I got to read something amazing. Waiting for the next update now😊

Originally posted by: -Saheba-

Well Sruthi I don't need to tell you how I feel about this update as you know all about it.

But still I LOVED IT!!!❤️

Girl you are gifted writer.

And as I told you, I can actually honestly visualize the scenes when I read your writing and this is something which very rarely happens with me.

You pen down both Zain and Aaliya's feelings perfectly. You make me feel the for them.

It's almost like I'm watching the show itself!

Totally love this story and I'm bookmarking this forever!