oh wow did i really miss this. i loved itπ. you described arjuna's emotions so well. he feeling sorry for his elder brother yudi because he dint get what all 4 of them had. his feelings for karna inspite of his son being killed by the opp camp. every line is so meaningful
and the last part wasπ³
"His friend sits beside him, consoling him with his own comforting silence and aloof smile, gazing at the sunset, waiting for the blanket of darkness to engulf them in its cold embrace. Somewhere, temple bells are making beautiful tinkering sounds in great distance, cold breeze of air stroking their skin reminding him of the still wet tracks of tear going down his face. He feels it drying up though, and it assures his heart somewhat. At least he still has this Man right next to him and he knows it in his heart that he always had and he always will - in this life or another."πππ
i just loveee these two Parth-madhavπ³. the way they can just be there for each other & that is enough for them. just loved how you descried it, the purity in their bondπ
would like to know what was in your mind when you wrote the part after that. the convo between madhav & parth. it looks like there is more to it.
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