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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: iturkhahs

Beautifully Expressed ... it brought 😭😭😭 in my eyes


Thanks dear --- sorry for making you cry, i wasn't trying to write emotional, just intense -- don't know what happened, everyone is crying now!😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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is amazing yaar...its really deep... and emotional too .. 😭 😭 😭 nd loved d convo in the end...if im allowed to read between the lines ??πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: supri1607

is amazing yaar...its really deep... and emotional too .. 😭 😭 😭 nd loved d convo in the end...if im allowed to read between the lines ??πŸ˜‰


Thank you sweets! Yes, you are definitely allowed -- that is the beauty of literature πŸ˜†-- you are allowed to interpret it with your own perspective -- and tell me what you make out of it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Wow! What a great analysis
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: catalan

Wow! What a great analysis

Thanks a lot, dear. Yeah, you can call it an analysis! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Medha.S


Thank you sweets! Yes, you are definitely allowed -- that is the beauty of literature πŸ˜†-- you are allowed to interpret it with your own perspective -- and tell me what you make out of it!


😳 yes thats literature for u...its not the story or anything else u read..its ur attitude and ur interpretation regarding the facts... and on a lighter note i love him pampering arjun he does it quite a lot !! πŸ˜† i dont blame him really
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice & emotional one. Well written πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Very nice & emotional one. Well written πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks dear!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh wow did i really miss this. i loved itπŸ‘. you described arjuna's emotions so well. he feeling sorry for his elder brother yudi because he dint get what all 4 of them had. his feelings for karna inspite of his son being killed by the opp camp. every line is so meaningful


and the last part was😳
"His friend sits beside him, consoling him with his own comforting silence and aloof smile, gazing at the sunset, waiting for the blanket of darkness to engulf them in its cold embrace. Somewhere, temple bells are making beautiful tinkering sounds in great distance, cold breeze of air stroking their skin reminding him of the still wet tracks of tear going down his face. He feels it drying up though, and it assures his heart somewhat. At least he still has this Man right next to him and he knows it in his heart that he always had and he always will - in this life or another."πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

i just loveee these two Parth-madhav😳. the way they can just be there for each other & that is enough for them. just loved how you descried it, the purity in their bondπŸ‘

would like to know what was in your mind when you wrote the part after that. the convo between madhav & parth. it looks like there is more to it.

Edited by naq5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Very well written, Arjuna's emotions have been describes so well 😭 great job!
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