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Beautifully written...👏
In fact, I should say BRILLIANTLY written...👏
Honestly, I am not exactly a Karna admirer, for various reasons, and reservations, but I must say, you made me feel a lot about him, through your writing...
The starting is BRILLIANT...Indeed, the names of so many characters are lost in history, and epic.
I was skimming through the pages as a new member, and the title drew me to read it...I was wondering which 'wife' you were referring to...
I would like to say this...n please note, I am quite a critic about Mahabharat writers, but what made me comment here, is ur unbiased approach towards all the characters...
I loved how you made Karna realize his mistakes, and his wife understand it. You did not try to defile any other character of the epic, owing to your admiration towards Karna, which is something I admire from the bottom of my heart. Usually, authors tend to make villains out of characters of Mahabharat, who were not friends of the protagonist...But you showed an unbiased approach. I believe, almost every character of the epic has a perspective...noone was completely bad or great. U brought it out well. I wish there were more writers like you, who could deal with the characters with such an unbiased mindset.
I loved the subtle sarcasm with which you expressed Karna's wife's thoughts on the society...
It is so heart-touching...
And the ending was awesome...👏
Your unbiased approach and subtle sarcasm, mixed with the right emotions, and brilliant writing style forced me to comment here...In fact, the first thing I read here is ur OS, and that also in such a short time...and came up to comment immediately!! Brilliant work...
Keep writing...👏
In fact, I should say BRILLIANTLY written...👏
Honestly, I am not exactly a Karna admirer, for various reasons, and reservations, but I must say, you made me feel a lot about him, through your writing...
The starting is BRILLIANT...Indeed, the names of so many characters are lost in history, and epic.
I was skimming through the pages as a new member, and the title drew me to read it...I was wondering which 'wife' you were referring to...
I would like to say this...n please note, I am quite a critic about Mahabharat writers, but what made me comment here, is ur unbiased approach towards all the characters...
I loved how you made Karna realize his mistakes, and his wife understand it. You did not try to defile any other character of the epic, owing to your admiration towards Karna, which is something I admire from the bottom of my heart. Usually, authors tend to make villains out of characters of Mahabharat, who were not friends of the protagonist...But you showed an unbiased approach. I believe, almost every character of the epic has a perspective...noone was completely bad or great. U brought it out well. I wish there were more writers like you, who could deal with the characters with such an unbiased mindset.
I loved the subtle sarcasm with which you expressed Karna's wife's thoughts on the society...
It is so heart-touching...
And the ending was awesome...👏
Your unbiased approach and subtle sarcasm, mixed with the right emotions, and brilliant writing style forced me to comment here...In fact, the first thing I read here is ur OS, and that also in such a short time...and came up to comment immediately!! Brilliant work...
Keep writing...👏
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