As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh ! How Sweet !!! So Pitamah Was The First One To 'Notice' Arjun !!! Waiting For The Next Part...
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Brilliantly conceptualized ... love the title to begin with! ... the piercing eye of my heart!!
it is extremely heart warming and refreshing to read from a "child" Arjun ...


loved how you have binded the chapters ...

starting with bow being the most important and significant chapters of his life, his probably incomplete without it ...

blessing in disguise - significance of his father in his life

not being able to differentiate between raindrops and teardrops ... its so symbolic!

the beauty of this FF is how you have made it so realistic ... it works like a charm!

please continue ... would love to read further! ... amazing work!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
No word is enough to praise this dear!!!!!! I am overwhelmed to read this!!!!! A very very lively picture of Bhishma-Arjun relationship I could see & feel the scene, truly 😊
Please continue 👍🏼 May Lord Krishna Bless you always!
Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhaari Arjun!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

Brilliantly conceptualized ... love the title to begin with! ... the piercing eye of my heart!!
it is extremely heart warming and refreshing to read from a "child" Arjun ...



loved how you have binded the chapters ...

starting with bow being the most important and significant chapters of his life, his probably incomplete without it ...

blessing in disguise - significance of his father in his life

not being able to differentiate between raindrops and teardrops ... its so symbolic!

the beauty of this FF is how you have made it so realistic ... it works like a charm!

please continue ... would love to read further! ... amazing work!! 👏



Thank u so much 🤗 So nice to see you noticed all of it...the chapter names to the lines I wrote... thanks for reading and taking time out to comment!!!!😃
Much love..and I will be glad if u keep reading!!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Oh ! How Sweet !!! So Pitamah Was The First One To 'Notice' Arjun !!! Waiting For The Next Part...


:D :d Thanks Radhika :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Urmila11

No word is enough to praise this dear!!!!!! I am overwhelmed to read this!!!!! A very very lively picture of Bhishma-Arjun relationship I could see & feel the scene, truly 😊
Please continue 👍🏼 May Lord Krishna Bless you always!
Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhaari Arjun!



Wow.. so glad to know this.. all this really inspires me to write better..and more and more! Thanks Urmila for reading and commenting! 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What is this brish?!?! Did I see a glimpse of Harry - dumbledore in Arjun bhishma?!?!?! Wow wow wow cn anything on the whole damn world get better that that!!!!!!😃
Beautiful is an understatement for this brish...I m falling short of words...like I said yesterday, this is not a mere OS or FF, it has truely truely touched my heart n brought me peace!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shriya95

What is this brish?!?! Did I see a glimpse of Harry - dumbledore in Arjun bhishma?!?!?! Wow wow wow cn anything on the whole damn world get better that that!!!!!!😃

Beautiful is an understatement for this brish...I m falling short of words...like I said yesterday, this is not a mere OS or FF, it has truely truely touched my heart n brought me peace!!!!😊😊



Harry and Dumbledore can be found in the darkest of human beings, only if one remembers J.K Rowling. 😊
I cant believe this.. really it is that touching? :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is amazing!!!
i'm dumbstruck!! i mean!!
superb yaar!!!!
will give a long one after some time!!! i'm still in trance of this!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar



Harry and Dumbledore can be found in the darkest of human beings, only if one remembers J.K Rowling. 😊
I cant believe this.. really it is that touching? :P

it is!!!!!!! N tell me was it co incidence ir u planned this little thing??😉
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