As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Rushika

This is beautiful n heavenly...I'm lost in ur update Brish...how beautiful it is to read it from Arjun's POV...

U better make it a novel plzzz 😊

Just a suggestion wid every update can u plzz update the title too wid chp number along wid page number? 😊

Novel? I m so glad to know u loved it so much darling...😊🤗 I try my best to relate to Arjuna and write this,.. i read KMG translation and other books on him before writing an update... i m so delighted to know I m so successful!

YEs Rushi... i am updating the title... :D :D

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Awesome Brish -- Hey now I really wanna know why you didnt wrote about Arjuns birth and B'day bash -- I know you cant write it from Arjunas POV but come on write it as a prologue or something Pweaaaseee 😭

Okay.. Arjun's birth... I will edit my first post and just write it.. a short prolouge on his birth.. 😊

Brishti - the update is fabulous!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Brishti - the update is fabulous!! 👍🏼

The whole idea of Airavat protecting Arjun is completely endearing!! 😃

It lends a kind of closeness to the Indra-Arjun relation...😳

And I agree with Medha - If the story needs a prologue, it has got to be Arjun's birth

And this can be from the POV of Kunti / Pandu / Indra...😊

Thanks Divya !! But I am not a saint like StarB CVs.. it will involve Indra and Kunti... 😉 Pandu will not have much to do.😆. will edit my first post and write a prolouge! 😊

Hahahah or it can from the point of view of some mysterious lovable supreme power who resides in each and every thing in this world😛 --- there is that story too, where before Arjunas birth, Vishnu asks Indra to grant him a wish and asks that he be an intimate friend with Nara for ever.

i just read the both chappies in one go ... wow brish di... this s such an awesome idea... loved it to the core...such a treat to arjun fans... u write so well like professional writer...

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Hahahah or it can from the point of view of some mysterious lovable supreme power who resides in each and every thing in this world😛 --- there is that story too, where before Arjunas birth, Vishnu asks Indra to grant him a wish and asks that he be an intimate friend with Nara for ever.

Come on, i know you can do it Brish -- give me goosebumps and blow me away

Check out.. prolouge updated 😊

Just checked out the prologue 😊

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Just checked out the prologue 😊

Wonderful work Brishti 👏

"...as if the world was waiting to see them pick up the most celebrated piece of wood and bone that would ever be remembered in history."

Loved the ending!!! 👍🏼

DIvya darling, thank you so much for taking time, reading and appreciating my work so much. It really helps me improve, and write more and more... 😊 Keep reading and helping me with your comments!

Brish I loved the prologue