As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 4

Originally posted by: frappie

Brish this is very beautiful ...firstly I loved the way you described naive Arjuna secondly the line which says your hands are made for qoods was just awesome indeed as a wanderer he spent his entire life in forests ...And his first encounter with the weapon called bow which later became his life was very well described ..,And lastly I loved the way you subtly described the reason for him being referred Paarth ...The paarth pritha dynamics were well described ...Now I,am looking forward for Arjuns journey from Paarth to Parantapa / Jishnu ...Great start B...

I won't say thank you to you.. 😆 but before being Paarth I think Kaunteya will be opt. I did not refer to him as Maheshwasha right now because I want to describe his journey first.. Keep reading baby 😳

brishti really good initiative u took! I always want to read from arjun pov. plz continue and complete it. starting has me hooked

plz keep updating brishti i loved it

wow it was just awesome brish continue soon

Aww...Bheem-Arjun Quarrel !! Good For Arjun That Airavat Came In Time !

This one is a master peice Brish

Originally posted by: frappie

This one is a master peice Brish

I loved the whole concept of Airavata protecting baby Arjuna..

also Nishadha warriors conversation...

I wish he lead a calm life in forests ...

and the innocence is very commendable..

GLAD U LIKED IT.. I wa just not feeling like bringing him to Hastinapur so soon.. that is why i added one more chappy before pandu's death.. now he will die.. in the next chappy... and then arjun nd all will come to HP... 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aww...Bheem-Arjun Quarrel !! Good For Arjun That Airavat Came In Time !

yeah.. Thanks to Indradev 😉

This is beautiful n heavenly...I'm lost in ur update Brish...how beautiful it is to read it from Arjun's POV...

Awesome Brish -- Hey now I really wanna know why you didnt wrote about Arjuns birth and B'day bash -- I know you cant write it from Arjunas POV but come on write it as a prologue or something Pweaaaseee 😭