As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Thank you. Actually when I update, hardly people read that's why I don't :p anyways will update

We all read and wait for your updates. We love the way you weave the story.
Waiting for your next update- nidhi

kudos...brishti... tell me when u r turning this into a book... OK...


Now coming to your chappy... as usual it was a brilliant update... I like the way u show the hate relation between Arjun and Karna... And Arjun's thoughts... Does he come in your dreams and tell u what he thought of at that particular situation... 😆


PS :: I am still waiting for an arjun-yudi convo... STAR Bharat never actually clearly showed their relation... You know those two were close...I really want to know... So please...

Really awesome update, Brishti. Really liked these lines "I trusted my mind, my eyes, my dedication. It would always show me what I achieved, in order to achieve more. Achieve knowledge. Not power."👏👏👏

Awaiting next update eagerly.

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏 You passed the bird eye test in your FF as well 😃 it was the most difficult task to explain it from Arjun's POV. You showed it perfectly 👍🏼
& Karna's hatred, I liked how you show Karna's true color unlike SP 👏
I guess Ekalavya is coming very soon. I wish you to explain the actual reason behind Arjun's involvement in it. Many people use to misunderstand him for this incident. You should clarify what was going within his inner mind after finding Ekalavya. I know you will do it very beautifully 😊
Carry on & update soon. Why do you update after such a long gap? We the lovers of your writing can't wait for new chapters 😃
Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

i was eagerly waiting for the bird's eye part... yur writing is awesome 👏

Really Loved Your Update !! Especially That Black Dot Waala Point, I Felt Like I Was Watching A Serial !

brishti, i read this FF in two days...

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

A black spot in the middle of my vision. It was a black spot, I would not say right in the middle, but it was there, capturing the most attention in my vision. It was a tiny spot. Just like a tiny spot I was in this universe. All I could see was actually two spots. The tip of my arrow, and a black spot. My endless dedication, determination has been formed into a spot. My aim.

I trusted my mind, my eyes, my dedication. It would always show me what I achieved, in order to achieve more. Achieve knowledge. Not power.

kudos b.. wow...
you are weaving images with your words... loved it...


@red the focus of arjun in full strength. 👏 👏 👏 👏
@blue salute you dear.. the essence of arjun.. his simplicity 👏 😳 😃

@ brish