As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 34

Originally posted by: naq5

👏👍🏼loved the way you so poetically & beautifully described arjun practicing in the dark & him aiming at the pole star.

Thank u so much... Do keep reading and commenting :):)

I love Arjuna. thank you for writing from Arjuna's POV. you are doing great... thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Arushii

I love Arjuna. thank you for writing from Arjuna's POV. you are doing great... thank you 😊

Thanks and welcome 😊

@Brishti:

Totally apt fr teachers day brish!!! N again a hp line!!!! U know I love finding hp lines in betwn this dwapar yug tale!!! I loved d gudakesha part!!! Keep going strong brish!!!!

Great going Brishti👏. Loved^10 times the Gudakesha part. And.. u have started utilizing cliffhangers...

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Totally apt fr teachers day brish!!! N again a hp line!!!! U know I love finding hp lines in betwn this dwapar yug tale!!! I loved d gudakesha part!!! Keep going strong brish!!!!

WONDERFUL Brishti 👏👏👏 you made the picture lively in front of my eyes loved each bit of it, the different expressions of different persons, SUPERB 👏👏 & loved how Arjun is talking to himself about his main aim 😊 that is the concentration, love him ❤️ loved Guru Dron's explanations to each student. Can't wait to see how Arjun made his Guru proud 😃
Carry on! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

brishh !! first off that update was BANG ! wow ! but i'm still angry for d cliffe ! 😡 😡..anyway i must say that gudakesh part was simply ultra adorable ... gudakesh is the sorta name madhav would come up with for arjun .. its nice to see the way you've portrayed ... well everything ... i loved d day starting with anger part and the karna arjun rivalry its portrayed very realistically and naturally ! im loving bheem and yudhi too ! but none of this changes the fact i'm angry with u for the cliffe ! u better update fast ... im loving each and every bit of it

Originally posted by: supri1607

brishh !! first off that update was BANG ! wow ! but i'm still angry for d cliffe ! 😡 😡..anyway i must say that gudakesh part was simply ultra adorable ... gudakesh is the sorta name madhav would come up with for arjun .. its nice to see the way you've portrayed ... well everything ... i loved d day starting with anger part and the karna arjun rivalry its portrayed very realistically and naturally ! im loving bheem and yudhi too ! but none of this changes the fact i'm angry with u for the cliffe ! u better update fast ... im loving each and every bit of it