Brishti, first of all, thanks for keeping my suggestion in mind 😊 actually I did not suggest this for the reason that I love Bheem very much, but said because ARJUN LOVED BHEEM, & I could see some reluctance in him for Bheem, which I think he did not have. Yudhi was his Guru & ideal, but he respected Bheem as well, whenever Bheem fought with any rakshas alone he wanted to help him always, they together performed many things in epic. You have read Dr. Bhadury's research book so I know that you are aware of this fact 😊
Read chap 16, loved Bheem's improvement & Dury's envy 👏 now they are in character for me 😃
Arjun's explanation about observation is very very attractive & creative 👏 I loved his thoughts after Dury's reply a perfect class now, also Karna is in 👍🏼 this is from Arjun's POV so I hope you will not make Karna a saint like SP version 😆 I will suggest you to read Dr. Bhadury's 'Krishnaa Kunti ebong Kaunteya' for a better understanding. See the chap 'Arjun', at the starting of Gurukul Dr, Bhadury has narrated Karna's true mentality to him very clearly. Also that book will give you some good ideas about Yudhi-Arjun😊 & Bheem-Arjun relationships 😊
I want you to publish this as a novel so that people can love a beautiful character like Arjun 😊 that's why I am trying to help you in this noble aim 😊
Carry on. Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!
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