As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 30

Loved each bit of it Brishti this incident from Arjun's eyes gave it a new charm 👏 I loved his thoughts that it was unfair bu😊t also fair, as he wants to learn from every single bit of life he is an ideal for any student 😊
Loved Yudhi's patience & tenderness with water 😃 he is in character 👍🏼 & inspiring Arjun as well 😊
Bheem was not very bad in mace fighting, you are giving Dury a special importance 😆 yes Dury had the more skill but show Bheem's interest at least, if you think it's OK 😊 personally I think that Bheem chose mace only for his rivalry with Dury as he was skilled with mace.
loved the last part of Dron's proud look 👍🏼
One thing, will you not show Karna now? I want to see him through Arjun's eyes, what will be his reaction when a student starts to hate him despite of no offense from his side? Will Arjun not get hurt by Karna's extreme rivalry & try to improve himself even more?
Just giving my suggestions, ignore them if you don't like them 😊
Carry on! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

wow !!! that was a fantastic update brish!! way to go girl !!

Loved Arjun's Dedication, And How His Perseverance Finally Led Him To Be The First Student !! Also Liked His Sharp Observation About His Brothers !

Hey Brish
The update was awesome
Ashwatthama and arjun had a kind of cold war among them
Keep it up
Wanna read more from you
So update soon
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Ashwi is a perfect example of how bad company n excessive parental love cn spoil u!!!

Oarth is cute, I m saying this fr the thousandth time I know but I love his learning spirit!!!

Accha I have a silly doubt (pls don't hit me!!) weren't bheem n dury taught by balram?!?!?!

that is later... their base was in Drona's Gurukul

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Loved each bit of it Brishti this incident from Arjun's eyes gave it a new charm 👏 I loved his thoughts that it was unfair bu😊t also fair, as he wants to learn from every single bit of life he is an ideal for any student 😊
Loved Yudhi's patience & tenderness with water he is in character 👍🏼 & inspiring Arjun as well 😊
Bheem was not very bad in mace fighting, you are giving Dury a special importance yes Dury had the more skill but show Bheem's interest at least, if you think it's OK 😊 personally I think that Bheem chose mace only for his rivalry with Dury as he was skilled with mace.
loved the last part of Dron's proud look
One thing, will you not show Karna now? I want to see him through Arjun's eyes, what will be his reaction when a student starts to hate him despite of no offense from his side? Will Arjun not get hurt by Karna's extreme rivalry & try to improve himself even more?
Just giving my suggestions, ignore them if you don't like them 😊
Carry on! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

@bold- I was waiting for somebody to say this.. But I had only seen too much Duryodhan love and people moaning at SP for not showing Duryodhan's character properly... So I showed Duryodhan in such light. But I will change the style now!
@Red- yes definitely.. I am trying to grow Drona's pride and confidence about Arjuna a bit..and I will introduce Karna very soon. In my story, he will be a part of Drona's Gurukul as it actually was. And will think deep about how to depict Arjun's emotions... I want that perfect...

Thanks for your suggestions Urmila.. keep giving them as I always try to take them into account while writing. Feel free to say whatever you don't like also... that only helps in improving.

Hey, you are not gonna make Drona reject Karna like they showed in the show, right?

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Hey, you are not gonna make Drona reject Karna like they showed in the show, right?

Karna was a student with all of them and learned basic archery from Drona, no? He was refused only when he asked for Brahmastra.

Yes. he will be a student. Drona did not even REJECT him like that. karna said that he wanted the Brahmastra to kill Arjuna. He demanded the knowledge without being capable for it and thus Droan said that it has to be earned he can't just give the knowledge of Brahmastra to anybody.
In my story it will be like it actually happened and he will only leave the Gurukul when the Brahmastra incident takes place.

Wonderful update Brishti😊.

I really liked the following part:

"Observing is getting to know yourself better than anybody else first."

you hit the nail on the head.

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Hey, you are not gonna make Drona reject Karna like they showed in the show, right?

Karna was a student with all of them and learned basic archery from Drona, no? He was refused only when he asked for Brahmastra.