As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 27

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Yes Brishti I looked the Yudhi part 😊 oh I am feeling so blessed to know that you added it keeping my liking in your mind 😃 thank you dear 🤗 you know what, I never miss even a single glance of Yudhi 😳 😆I love him from the core but did not mention it because the main part was Kunti-Arjun scene which was very beautiful & emotional 👏 there will be much more scopes in future updates in which I hope to get a nice brotherly bonding between Yudhi & Arjun 😃 specially Arjun's effort to make him the crown prince (despite of being the greatest student of Drona he never wanted the throne for himself, he only wanted to see Yudhi on the throne), his care for eldest brother etc.

Yes I kept ur liking for Yudhi in mind and wrote that.. Yudhi actually understood Arjun :):) that's a true fact!!
And I will try my best in future to depict their brotherly love...and understanding. :):)
Feeling Too happy reading ur words...that u noticed and liked it :D

I am late as usual

Too Good !!! Really Love The Part Where Arjun's Mood Is Shifting Between Excitement And Melancholy...And HisPromise Of Course !! You Also Portrayed The Tinge Of Jealousy In Ashwathwama !!

Originally posted by: frappie

I am late as usual

The description of peacock feather by pitamaha was very simple yet informative for a young lad ...I liked the way you developed a relationship between Bheesma and Arjuna...I mean I liked the way he taught a complex thing in a simple way...Besides I like the manner you are dealing with Dronacharya and Paarth ...

For me the chery on the cake was introducing himself as Kaunteya ...

@bold- Actually i don't really like to call any of the Pandavs or Arjun "Son of Pandu" I somehow dont feel nice So I introduced him as Kaunteya.. and not "Third pandav Arjuna"

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Too Good !!! Really Love The Part Where Arjun's Mood Is Shifting Between Excitement And Melancholy...And HisPromise Of Course !! You Also Portrayed The Tinge Of Jealousy In Ashwathwama !!

He was feeling jealous.. hopeless because his father surely did not have any faith in him.. that is why he was looking for shishyas in diff kingdoms.. and also he had never been the reaso for his father's tears of joy... that was the reason for the last bit on Ashwathama :)

Originally posted by: Crazypheonix008

It was brilliant Brishti! Arjuna was always confident without being arrogant. You managed to bring that trait up very beautifully. You have caught the essence of each and every character perfectly. I can already tell that this is going to be the best story I've read on Mahabharata.

Really Aish? I am so blessed..that you wrote the last line( in bold)... 😃

Originally posted by: amritat

Wow Brishti...like i said before, your writing has improved by leaps n bounds... 👏

I can feel every emotion of Arjun through your writing...

Please continue...

Thanks Amrita for your lovely words.

Originally posted by: raj_a_p

Wonderful update Brishti. I really liked the way you have described Arjun's connection with nature👏.

What I liked even more is how he introduced himself "Son of Kunti". When I had first read Mahabharta, this was what set him apart from all other characters. Thank you for taking me back to those times again

I feel Kunti played a much important role in his life than Pandu did. I would later refer to him as IndraPutra.. but I dont like to refer to him as Pandu Putra.. just dont. Its not that I hate Pandu or anything.. just dont get along with that way of introduction.

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Ok wow, just wow...the entire promise part blew me away, seriously...

Ashwathama's insecurity hs started😕

Drona 's tears have a very deep meaning...this is like preparation ground fr drupad war!!! Continue soon brish!!

Sure Shriyu... :D
@bold- yes it has.. the fact that he could not make his father that happy ever.. (as much as Arjun made) made him hopeless angry and disgusted. The fact hat his father was looking for shishyas in different countries when he had a son itself is a very insecuring fact Shriyu... any son will feel that way! It shows that his father had no hope in him..🤢

Wonderful!!!! 👏 So Ashwi is already in side of Dury & Co 😡
Loved how Arjun respects everyone 👍🏼 such a cute obedient boy
Can't wait for reading his practice session 😃 update soon 😳

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Wonderful!!!! 👏 So Ashwi is already in side of Dury & Co 😡
Loved how Arjun respects everyone 👍🏼 such a cute obedient boy
Can't wait for reading his practice session 😃 update soon 😳

edited a little... check out 😊

This one is awesome B

Originally posted by: frappie

This one is awesome B

but when are you updating the bird's eye chappy?????

Update asap

the epic line of this part was

The sun was setting in the far West.

I loved the way you portrayed an obidient but inquisitive Arjuna but besides that I loved the portrayal of Dury's superioirty over Bheema in case of mace fighting...

Bird's eye comes later.. I have something great in mind Birds eye will coem after the eating in the dark, the water collecting..and I will be distorting abit... Eklavya incident will be after bird's eye 😊