As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 26

aww brish another brilliant update..what i love the most about this FF is that uve stuck to the original as much as possible..usually when ppl write from a character's pov..the story is changed to fit the characters need..but the story itself as i already said is about him..besides that uve got arjuns emotions, link with nature, innocence..and especially his craving for love done beautifully 😳 his policy of live and let live ,his charm too is perfect..when authors write about arjun they tend to overload on the charm part..knowing arjun to be very charming...but arjuns charm was very subtle looks and smiles are all our mahanyak needs before people fall to their knees..anyway i hadnt even come to terms with the previous update and ur ready with the next one...its brilliant gurl .. and its getting better and better keep up the good work sweetz

bowing down b...
awesome!!!

Arjun's energy is superlicious... his urge for knowledge and wisdom and above all to be a successful person!! wow!!

loved the promise arjun gave and the assurance dron gave!!

and brish i know its waaayyy to early to say this but wen arjun goes to heaven and meets urvashi..please dont hold back 🤣 😳 😆

Thanks guys.. I will reply all one by one!!!

Originally posted by: supri1607

and brish i know its waaayyy to early to say this but wen arjun goes to heaven and meets urvashi..please dont hold back🤣😳😆

Ooohh no no no!!! I won't hold back!!! I will..pour out 😉

Wow Brishti...like i said before, your writing has improved by leaps n bounds... 👏

I can feel every emotion of Arjun through your writing...

Please continue...

It was brilliant Brishti! Arjuna was always confident without being arrogant. You managed to bring that trait up very beautifully. You have caught the essence of each and every character perfectly. I can already tell that this is going to be the best story I've read on Mahabharata.

Beautiful!!!!! The first convo between Guru shishya is beyond words 👏 there is no doubt that any Guru will be very very happy to get such a boy as his disciple 😊 so obedient, so dedicated & so sensitive to others love Arjun 😃 waiting to see his effort to make Gurudev pleased 👍🏼
Saved this chapter as well 😊 great going indeed 👍🏼
Carry on dear! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

I added the Yudhi portion for you Urmila :):) Hope u looked that too.his sensitivity is what I actually wanted to show..
And yea.. Kunti was very much helpless.. And I can't wait to make her proud for her sons..Arjun especially!!! 😉

Yes Brishti I looked the Yudhi part 😊 oh I am feeling so blessed to know that you added it keeping my liking in your mind 😃 thank you dear 🤗 you know what, I never miss even a single glance of Yudhi 😳 😆I love him from the core but did not mention it because the main part was Kunti-Arjun scene which was very beautiful & emotional 👏 there will be much more scopes in future updates in which I hope to get a nice brotherly bonding between Yudhi & Arjun 😃 specially Arjun's effort to make him the crown prince (despite of being the greatest student of Drona he never wanted the throne for himself, he only wanted to see Yudhi on the throne), his care for eldest brother etc.

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Beautiful!!!!! The first convo between Guru shishya is beyond words👏 there is no doubt that any Guru will be very very happy to get such a boy as his disciple😊 so obedient, so dedicated & so sensitive to others love Arjun 😃 waiting to see his effort to make Gurudev pleased 👍🏼
Saved this chapter as well 😊 great going indeed 👍🏼
Carry on dear! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

Thanks Urmila...:):)
Arjun's best phase of life is as a student..and that's why I try my best to portray him that way.. Soo happy to know you liked it:):) and even more delighted to know you are saving my chappies 😃