As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Its really good, brish! I love the way you write it. Someone who doesnt like reading the old english would love to read this -- it is mature and simple enough at the same time. Give me MORE!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Me too πŸ˜†

Brishti, I pressed the "Like" button even before I received your pm 🀣

Coming to the story...our priye mamashree has finally made his entry. Will this one also say "mere bachche"? πŸ˜†

Speaking about mamashree, I just realized how much love he has for Arjun...that he actually broke his own bow to avoid fighting against him in yesterday's epi!! 🀣

Please continue...😊


@bold- No. 🀣 this mama will be dark, because Arjun is not a very funny person so.. πŸ˜†

@red- yeah..you will see soon what love he holds for the actual Arjun in my story Divya 🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brish!!!! Meri bacchi!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Loved it as usual!!! So d poison incident has started!!!! Mama is playing his tricks huh??πŸ˜† I cn only imagine how awesome eill d next ones be!!! With first finding out that bheem is dead n wen he returns!!!!!!! Dont make me mad brish, update sooonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Medha.S

Its really good, brish! I love the way you write it. Someone who doesnt like reading the old english would love to read this -- it is mature and simple enough at the same time. Give me MORE!!!



Thanks Medha.. so that means it looks like the real Mahabharat 😊 Wow! And I am also dying to update πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Brish!!!! Meri bacchi!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Loved it as usual!!! So d poison incident has started!!!! Mama is playing his tricks huh??πŸ˜† I cn only imagine how awesome eill d next ones be!!! With first finding out that bheem is dead n wen he returns!!!!!!! Dont make me mad brish, update sooonπŸ˜ƒ



Sure!! And baby, Mama is not playing any tricks...but he is playing his biggest trick πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ You have caught it right darling!
Yeah, Bheem will return soon and die soon too :P:P
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like your story..please continue soon..^^
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brish I am hell late I know..i read 3 chapters at a go...all d chapters r phenomenally awesome...i am jst loving ur story...and our mamashree has entered..and so his Chals...continue soon..brish..cant wait Fr d next chapter..:))
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arjun's pov greatly depicted in this story, and i truly love how you portray his innocence and virtues
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Brish πŸ˜ƒ
What have you done dear 😲
It's awesomeπŸ˜ƒ
Was waiting for your update since a long timeπŸ‘
Arjun's feelings were well depicted πŸ˜ƒ
You are one of the best FF writers here on IFπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
Especially on Mahabharat πŸ˜ƒ
I am worried for Bheem 😲
Please update ASAP πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for the PM πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ! Loved How You Portrayed The Suspense And Tension Of The Brothers Balanced By Yudhishthir's Calm Persona !!
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