As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 11

my detailed comment dear!!

i loved it to the core. you keep your readers hung on to each chappy!!!
loved they way you explained Pandavas entry to Hastinapur!! 😃
and observation of Arjun about Dhrit!! thts great!! 🤓

you portrayed the special bond of Pithamah n Arjun. i loved it!! well said!! nothing less and nothing more!! 👏
the talk abt eyes!! 👏

Wow wow!!!!!!! D way u potray d feelings and thoughts of arjun... awesum brish di... hats off 2 u...arjun d such an observin child...Loved arjun and bheeshm relationship... his feelings 2wards his grandfather was so well written... loved d update so very much... update soon

Amazing chappie Brish 😃 so the bunch of bulies is here 😡

Duri!!! Our kela man is here!!!!!!! N so is ur favy dusshy!!😉😉

Lovely chapter Brishti...😊

Read all the 4 Chapters in one go. Love it. Great going. 😊

Wonderful chapters. I have no words to describe the way you use Rupakam. A request... can you post it on FF.net so that I can save it for posterity?

Wonderful Brishti 👏 saved it ti file as well 😃
So Arjun got his Devdutta conch, right? Or are you thinking any normal conch 😊
I loved loved loved how the seller replied to Duri this shows the pure love of prajas for Pandavas I liked that part very much. Also the different things received by different Pandavas is very beautiful 😊 Nakul got a mirror 😆 & Yudhi got a feather reminded me Krishna's mor pankh please write more on their relationships with common people, it will be a new beauty 😊 I want to see these kids for a long period so please keep then little for some more chapters 😆 don't make a hurry to make them adults 😳
May Krishna Bless you always to carry on 😊

B... juz one word Perfect!!! 👏

loved the way you presented Pandavas!! yup they are the five daggers!!
and the couchshell!! good symbolism!!! 👍🏼


i'm saving all these chappies!!
loved it loved it loved it loved it!! to the core!! ❤️

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Sorry first Brish
Like I am reading late and i am reading both the chappys together
CHAPTER4
Awesome dear
The Arjun-bheeshma meet made me emotional
But loved the chapter

CHAPTER5
Villain ki entry yes😆
Duryodhan 😡😡😡
Emotions personified 😉
Waiting for the next update 😃
Thanks for the PM 😃