Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
this is amazing!!!
i'm dumbstruck!! i mean!!
superb yaar!!!!
will give a long one after some time!!! i'm still in trance of this!!
Wow just awesum. ..loved the entire convo of Pitamah n Arjun...I'm running short of words to appreciate this chapter!!
Thnks for writing Arjun's POV so beautifully ⭐️
Brish...I am in love with u...no...I am in love with ur SS...hats off man...👏
Awww...Brishti...you've got to make a book out of this!! 👏
Arjun is so keenly observant of his surroundings!!And Bhishma calling him "Phalguna" 😳"You have your mother's eyes" reminded me of Lily and Harry 😳😳The most heart-warming sentence -"I wanted to be special, and Grandfather's arms were really one corner, which I will long for, forever. "I want to hug both Arjun and you!! 🤗🤗🤗
Originally posted by: luv_sakshi
Now that's some Brilliant piece of writing Brish!👏...Awesome...Loved reading every bit of it!😃...I could actually imagine those scenes before my eyes as i read thru' ur writing!👏👏👏...Great Work yaar!😳
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