Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so adorable...πŸ˜³πŸ‘
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part 6:
vru-ji wo ha mai bhi aapse prem karti hu with this she closes her eyes and confesses that
kar-sachme vrushaliπŸ˜›
and then they look at surya above them
his father blessed them today
but unknown to them mamashree shakuni who had come for hunting had gained a big news then and he silently moved away from thereπŸ˜•
HP:
kunti's room:
shak-devi kunti! devi kunti!
kun-gandhaar raj aap yaha iss kshan?
shak-baat hi kuch aisi hai devi kunti,ab aap to meri priya behen ke hi jaisi hai mujhe to aapka dard mujhse dekha nahi jaata
kun-spashth kahiye gandhaar raj
shak-aapke sabse jyeshth putra prem jaal mei phas chuke hai
kunt-kya? yeh to bahut acchi baat hai kaun hai wo?puri baat kahiye na
shak-wo ek sutkanya hai rajmaata
eheheh..kaisa bhagya hai aapka mujhe to taras aata hai
ek bahu wo jo paanch purusho se vivah karti hai aur dusri wo jo ek sutkanya hai
lagta hai aapke putro ne apna dharma tyaag diya hai..eheheh..
kun-sutkanya???? to kya hua? agar mere putra ko usse prem hai to phir mujhe isme koi apatti nahi hogi
outside her room by chance KaJu were walking and they heard the whole convo.
karna-iss baar mamashree ne apni had paar ki hai,choti ke baare mei itna apshabd,
arjun-aur hone waali bhabhishree ke liye aisi baat
KaJu-humme kuch karna hi hoga
kar-kintu abhi nahi kal subah,abhi humme sona chahiyeπŸ₯±
arj-aapko sona kyu?πŸ˜‰
kar-matlab?πŸ˜•
arj-arre matlab bhabhishree ka smaran(memories) aapko sone dengi tab naπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
kar-arjun tum to and he starts running behind him and arjun dashes with someone
and guess who is that its shubhadraπŸ˜ƒ
arj-arre shubhadra tum yaha pe?😳
shub blushingly -ji aaj hi humne yaha pravesh kiya hai😳
arj-humne arthaat kya madhav bhi yaha aaye hai?πŸ˜ƒ
shubh-ji ha yahi par haiπŸ˜ƒ
arj-mai unse milne jaa raha hu
kar-arre arjun kaha chale baat kar lo shubhdra se kuch samay baat nahi karoge?πŸ˜‰
kar-pranipaat shubhadraπŸ˜›
shub-pranipaat rajkumar karnaπŸ˜›
kar-wo kya hai na arjun ko bahut samay se nidra hi nahi aa rahi hai to mai to sone jaa raha hu tum dono baatein karo thik haiπŸ˜‰
shubh-ji awashya
and while going karna winks at arjunπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
arjun laughs in mindπŸ˜†
next day:
kun-putra karna mujhe gandhar raj ne bataya ki tumhe prem ho chuka hai
kar-ji ha aur wo ek sutkanya hai mata
bheeshma enters the picture
bhe-ha humme bataya pandu putro ne tum dono ki gaathayein and laughs
karna blushes -mahamahim aap bhi 😳
bhee-mahamahim nahi putra mujhe pitamah kaho tumhe ab tumhare adhikaar se vanchit nahi rakha jaega
karna then touches his feet and says pitamah and they hug each other
kunti has tears in her eyes
and then karna goes out and sees pandavas over there and except yudhishthir the rest of them were grinning naughtily at him
kar-kya hua?
naku-kya kaha pitamaah ne?πŸ˜‰
kar-arre ha usse yaad aaya tum logo ne uske baare mei pitamah tak ko bata diya?😑
bhee-uske yeh uske kiske jyeshth(acting confused)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
sah-ha uske matlab kaun jyesth?πŸ˜†
karna now really tries hard to control his blush(ha to boys bhi blush karte hai yaar)
arju-ohohoho koi jyeshth ko to dekhoπŸ˜‰
naku-kaise stri ki tarah sharma rahe hai jyeshth
kar-nakul maun raho
yudhi-kintu jyeshth iss baat pe nakul ki to koi galti nahi haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
and all pandavas are like-jyeshth aap bhi!!!!!!!😲😲😲
bhee-lagta hai maine subah subah duryodhan ka mukh dekh liya haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£
yudh-arre mai humesha se jyeshth raha hu mujhe bhi to awsar prapt hona chahiye na ki kabhi kabhi mai anuj ki tarah baat karu
sahdev-nahi bhrata bheem shayad maine mamashree shakuni ka mukh dekha hoga🀣
KaJu together-naam mat lo uska!😑
yudhi-kyu kya ho gaya hai?πŸ˜•
Ka-choti ke baare mei apshabd kahe hai unhone😑
ar-aur hone waali bhabhishree ke baare mei bhi bahut galat kaha hai unhone 😑
bhee-mere pass ek sujhaw haiπŸ˜‰
and they discuss somethingπŸ˜†
next we see is shakuni is tied on a board now with his hands cuffed with 2 arrows on each hand
kar-arjun mujhe tum apna parakram dikhao na kya ispe aag barsa sakte ho?πŸ˜†
arju-awashya and he does that shakuni is in aag ki barsaat now
aur jyeshth aur kya aap inhe burf se jama sakte ho?πŸ˜†
kar-awashya
now the fire around him is replaced by snowfall and eventually he gets covered in snow only his face is free
and they laugh now-ehehehehe... and close their one one eyeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
shakuni-mere bachee...😭
bhee-arre mamashree kya aap duryodhan ko bulate ho dekhiye kitne thak gaye honge aap yeh li jiye ek ladoo
and he throws one ladoo in his mouth so that shakuni could not speak🀣
kar-arre waah bheem tum to acche dhanurdhari ho sakte ho nishana uttam tha
nak-bhrata bheem ladoo ke vishaya mei kabhi chuk nahi sakteπŸ˜†
bhee-aur waise bhi hum bhaiyo mei do dhanurdhari kaafi hai mera karya to mastak ko ukhadna hai
all laugh🀣
ar-jyeshth kya aap inn par kadhi dhoop la sakte hai?πŸ˜‰
kar-awashya😈
and he does that
shakuni's ice is now melted and he gets sweaty
kar-arre mamashree ko garmi ho rahi hai arjun zara inpe varsha kara do
ar-jo aagya jyeshth😈
and whenever shakuni tries to open his mouth a ladoo is inside his mouthπŸ˜†
sah-ashcharya ki baat hai aaj bhrata bheem pehli baar kissi aur ko khud ke haath se ladoo khila rahe hai🀒
shakuni gets an idea-he bacche bheem yeh to bahut ajeeb baat hai tum rajbhavan ke saare ladoo kya mujhpar vyarth kar doge?πŸ˜†
bheem-arre ha yeh to maine socha hi nahi to ab kya kare bhrata yudhishthir koi upay bataiye?
yudhi-mai tum logo ke iss karya se sehmat nahi hu yeh jo tum kar rahe ho wo adharm hai
kintu agar inpe ek stri waar kare to inhe inka dand prapt hoga
bhee-kya kaunsi stri bhrata?πŸ˜•
yudhi-hone waali bhabhishree 😈
shakuni was like -ek sutkanya mera kya bigad legi?
pandavas laugh looking at each other
ar-waah jyeshth mujhe nahi pata tha ki dharm mei kabhi kabhi shararat bhi basti hai
voice-kintu dharma mei aisa dand phir bhi nahi basta hai paarth
arjun turns and looks-MADHAV!!!!πŸ˜›πŸ₯³
precap:
lord krishna-dand dena ho to yogya dand de iss prakar asahaay vyakti par atchyachar dharma nahi hota hai
arj-kintu phir inhe kya dand diya jaaye?
lord krishna smiles naughtily,πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

bheesh-ek nirnay liya hai maine jisse drupad kanya bhi patraani ban sakti hai aur karna bhi rajya kar paaye
draupadi and vrushali's official meet
vru-ghabrahat ho rahi hai vivaah se purv πŸ˜•
drau-kyu?πŸ˜•
vru-soch rahi hu ek dhanurdhaari ki patni hona kaisa lagta hoga?saubhagya hota hoga na?
drau-saubhagya nahi durbhagya
vru-kyu?
drau-kyunki dhanurdhari ki patni unki pehli patni nahi hotiπŸ˜‰


pandavas(original 5)-to karna
bhee-vivah mei to purna swatantrata chin jaati hai jyeshth
naku-ha aur baar baar apni patni ke krodh ko shant karna padta hai
arj-unke aasuo ki dhaara to teer se bhi adhik gati ki hoti hai

karna-vrushali marriage (along with wedding jitters and leg pulling) and everyone settle in their own way
next part is mostly the last part of this story as it gets difficult to post a long story😊
thank you so much for loving this story
i hope you liked this chatpatti tedhi medhi si love story ke tadke waali pandav gathaπŸ˜‰
please give your feedback about it😊
love you all


















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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
omg awesome awesome awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

kaju shooting mamashri πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ with their take of chances πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
and bheem and ladoo🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 shutting mamashri πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
hai hain subhi and arjun ka love story beech mein.. for sure karn hi madat akrne wala hain kyunki ab madhav bhi achuke hain🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
k clan ki band bajne wali hain along with karn's wedding 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

awesome.. i was laughing🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
pls update next part sooon
because i am waitingπŸ˜‰
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Nikhita, very well written, perfect humour, and shakuni's part was mast!!
Loved brother's bonding, yudi and bheeshma part, and madhav part!!
Great going, and marriage talks too, lol.

Continue soon, would like to read b4 weekend/
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: -bharti

This is so adorable...πŸ˜³πŸ‘

thank you so much dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: unishaz

cute n funny.. LOved it..

thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nikhita, very well written, perfect humour, and shakuni's part was mast!!

Loved brother's bonding, yudi and bheeshma part, and madhav part!!
Great going, and marriage talks too, lol.

Continue soon, would like to read b4 weekend/

thank you so much dear😊
glad you loved it ,happy to know you loved naughty yudi n bheeshma who are never shown naughtyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please update soon.. anyways loved this os and update before the forum close. u get fab ideas and the way u write it and execution everything is fab... gonna miss this forum and the show yaar but love u wonderful os..πŸ˜ƒ mamashree scene karn arjun natkatpan and yudi's shararathi andaas was fab and nakul sahadev the twins are also fab...waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was eagerly waiting for ur next update. Thanx for the PM.

It was hilarious... πŸ‘ πŸ˜† KaJu ne toh Shakuni Mama ki Band baja di... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Aag, Baraf, Surya, Barsaat... bechare Shakku mama ko toh Zukham ho gaya hoga. Ab woh unke bachcho ko kaise bulayenge...😭
and Bheem attacking with Laadoos🀣 🀣. I love ur Bheem's attacking skills... everytime anyone attacks them by talking non-sense... Bheem attacks them by popping laadoos in their mouth... too good 🀣🀣

OMG Pandavas pulling leg & Karna blushing.. 😳☺️ ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Loved the way u hav interpreted Bheesma & Yudi's sweet role in this Tedhi Medhi si ❀️ story.

Hhmmm... ab toh Madhav aa gaye hai... ab Madhav apne priye Shakku Mama ko kaun sa uchit dand denge...As Madhav Says... hum sab iss vishay par vichar kar rahe hai ?? πŸ˜†

Karna-Vru Wedding Jitters... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Panchali pulling leg of her Jethani Vru... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰.

Do update the next part soon... 😊




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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Nucts sooo sorry I am very very very late to read this.I had got ur pm once but at dat tjme I was at wrk so I thought I will read it later but forgot.Now I read all the parts in a single go and my stomach is aching due to too much of laughing.Ireally laughed like crazy.I am sooo happy to see the 5Ps and Karna sharing such a warm bond and all of them in such a light environment and pleasant mood.You did a very good job I am very happy that I have read this atleast now.Its hilarious.Sad to hear nxt part will be the last
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