Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 10

Originally posted by: nuckts

part 7:

ar-waah jyeshth mujhe nahi pata tha ki dharm mei kabhi kabhi shararat bhi basti hai

voice-kintu dharma mei aisa dand phir bhi nahi basta hai paarth

arjun turns and looks-MADHAV!!!!

arjun followed by other 5 of them rushes towards HIS madhav

and he hugs him

arju-madhav kaise ho aap?

Madhav-swasth hu paarth tum kaise ho?

arj-swast hu

and then madhav greets everyone

madha-kaise hai bhrata karna?

kar-swasth hu

madhav-suna hai ab paarth aur aap ke alawa ek kanya hai jisne dhanurvidya ka shikshan liya hai aur unka nishana aapka hriday hai

karna blushes hearing that kar-ji vasudev wo mai.. - 😳 ☺️

nakul interrupts-sirf hriday nahi vasudev balki hum charo bhaiyo ki haddiyan bhi unka nishana thi(still not recovered from the shock of his DARING BHABHISHREE) - 🤣 🤣

madh-ab natak mei hi sahi iss tarah ek kanya ke saath dushvyavhaar karoge to dand to milega bhrata nakul

kar-ha wo to hai

madh-kintu yeh mai yeh kya dekh raha hu? paarth aur pandavo mei sarva jyeshth mamashree ko itni duvidha mei daal rahe hai?

arjun then explains everything to him

madhav-hmmm.. dand dena ho to yogya dand de iss prakar asahaay vyakti par atchyachar dharma nahi hota hai

arj-kintu phir inhe kya dand diya jaaye?

lord krishna smiles naughtily,

madhav then goes to shakuni-aapko ek vachan dena hoga gandhaar raj

shak-kahiye vasudev kintu in dushto se mera rakshan kijiye

madh-apko swayam yeh nagar chodkar chale jaana hoga,aap gandhaar raj hai to kabhi gandhaar jaakar bhi rajya kijiye

iss tarah apni priya behena ke sansaar ko dushit karne ka kya aartha?

shak-kintu vasudev..

arj-anyathaa humme bhi adharma karna hoga mamshree

shak-eheehehe.. mere bachhe arjun tum kyu apna karma bigadoge? - Dury would have turned red by now 😆

mai swayam hi chala jaata hu

kar-aur kabhi bhi yaha waapas nahi aane ka vachan dena hoga

madhav-woh bhi swayam maharaj se duryodhan ka koi aansu,aapki behena ka koi dukh,aapka koi bhi chal kuch kaam nahi karega

shakuni(reluctantly)-thik hai

and then shakuni's matter is solved - 😆 Madhav ne toh Mamashree Shakuni ka Full-n-Final Pack up kar diya 🤣

Madhav and Karna scene now(roaming in garden)

madhav-to bhrata karna kya hua hai aapko shaadi ki koi chinta?

kar-nahi vasudev uski mujhe koi chinta nahi hai kintu mujhe choti arthaat panchali ki chinta hai

madhav-meri sakhi ki chinta ke liye mai hu ,uske pati hai

kar-ha hai awashya kintu meri chinta uski suraksha nahi se zyada uska adhikaar ke liye hai

mere vivaah ke baad vrushali meri patni ke roop mei patraani banegi,panchali ke tyaag ka kya laabh tha?

maine uska adhikaar kahi na kahi cheen liya hai

madh-koi kissika adhikaar nahi cheenta hai bhrata karna,yeh bhaagya ka kaarna purva janma ke karma hai

wo karna dusre janma mei uska bhaagya banta hai,to aap sakhi ki chinta na kare

and they look at side suddenly they spot arjun n bheeshma together

arjun had tears in his eyes

arju-jyeshth aapne paanchali ke baare mei itna vichaar kiya?mai baata nahi sakta ki mai kitna dhanya hu aapko bhrata ke roop mei paake

kar-nahi arjun dhanya to mai hu in sab rishto ko paakar,in sab rishto ki keemat mujhe ab hui hai

mere liye yeh bahut gaurav ki baat hai ki jo saamarth mujhe mere bhaagya ne diya hai uska mai dharma ke saath rehkar sadupyog karunga

madhav is very happy seeing them both like that

and now bheeshma-bheesh-ek nirnay liya hai maine jisse drupad kanya bhi patraani ban sakti hai aur karna bhi rajya kar paaye

kar-kya?

bhee-mere paas ek bada sa rajya hai angadesh,usse kafi samay se anushasan ki awashakta hai,mai to hastinapur ka sevak hokar usiko samarpit hu

kintu humare purkho ka yeh rajya mai tumhe saupta hu karna

kar-kintu wo to maharaj se anumati leni hogi na?

bheeshma-nahi putra yeh mera nirnay hai

with this he leaves

madhav-waise kya aapko yakeen hai ki sirf iss baat ki aap ko chinta hai?

aur kissi nahi?vivah bhi nahi?

kar-vivaah se kyu chinta hogi vasudev?

vasudev-vivaah ek alag hi moh jaal hai karna

kar-parantu aapne bhi to 16008 vivah kiye hai na?

vasudev-isiliye to(naughtily) anubhav se keh raha hu,vivah ka anubhav,ek stri ke aane se jeevan ke badal jaane ka anubhav - Yes Madhav has a record number of experiences in this matter 😆 😆

karna now gets confused

arjun gets it now that madhav is upto something naughty this time

madhav-arthaat striya jab vivaad(difference of opinion or fight) karti hai,triyacharitram karti hai(manipulation)

jab unhe aapse ruthna ho,aur wo yeh apeksha kare ki aap unhe manao,jab aap unhe yogya samay na de pao..

arj-fir chahe wo yogya samay dhanurvidya ki abhyaas hi kyu na ho..

madhav-bilkul paarth yatharth kaha hai tumne

kar-hey bhagwaan kya itna sabkuch sehen karna padta hai vivah ke baad

arju-ha jyeshth

karna-mai kuch samay ke liye mere kakash me jaata hu vishram karne ke liye

and he leaves

arju-chaliye madhav mai bhi aagya leta hu

madhav-arre tum kaha chale paarth?

arju-apne jyeshth ko chidane ka itna anokha awasar mai kaise kho sakta hu

and paarav laugh on that

karna spots other 4 pandavas

bhee-arre jyeshth chintit lag rahe hai

arjun comes from behind-kyunki madhav ne inhe vivaahik jeevan ke kuch rahasya baatei hai(indicates other 4)

pandavas(original 5)-to karna

bhee-vivah mei to purna swatantrata chin jaati hai jyeshth

naku-ha aur baar baar apni patni ke krodh ko shant karna padta hai

arj-unke aasuo ki dhaara to teer se bhi adhik gati ki hoti hai

kar-to kya hua meri vrushali aisi nahi hai hai na yudhishthir?(expecting a truthful reply)

yudhi-mera dharma humesha satya kehna hai to satya yeh hai ki "purushsya bhagyam aur triyacharitram jaane na koi"(men's fate and women's changing tendency cannot be known by anyone)

aur bhabhishree ko hum jaante hi kitna hai aur to aur wo hai ek stri to stri ke baare mei yeh sab baatein laago hoti hai

kar-kya panchali ke waqt bhi..(then realizes about her being wife of 5 so to avoid any further awkwardness).. arthaat bheem kya hidimba bhabhishree ke saath bhi aisa hi hua tha?

bhee-ha jyeshth wo to kai baar bina wajah roti thi

arju-aur to aur chitrangada ko agar krosh aaye to haath mei talwaar aate der nahi lagti thi

nakul-kai baar apni patni ka shringaar bhi khud karna padta hai maine to kesh bhi banaye hai - No wonder he is the Fashion Consultant & now a hair stylist of the Pandavas 🤣

kar-KYA!!! yeh sab mujhe nahi aata

sah-to aap unke kesh pe teer chala dijiye - Yes that will be the only last resort for Karna 😆 😆

and all pandavas laugh on that

here vrushali is tensed about wedding(wedding jitters)-she is in palaca for wedding ceremony

voice-lagta hai kisika man vyakul hai

vru-ji

voi-mai panchali hu

vru-oh pranipaat

drau-pranipaat

vrushali was highly nervous this high society was very new for her she felt how draupadi must be feeling to talk to her

drau-duvidha mei hai ki humare beech kya rishta hai?

vru-hmm..

drau-to aap nishchint rahiye humare beech devrani aur jethani ka rishta hai

aur usse bhi gehra saheli hone ka

vru-mai...aapki saheli?

drau-ha kyu nahi? jyeshth bhrata se maine seekha hai ki jaati,kul ka saamarth ke liye koi mahatwa nahi hota

aur maine govind se seekha hai ki mitrata ki bhasha prem hai aur kuch bhi nahi

satya kahu to mana ki yaha sab suvidhaye hai ,kintu mere 5 pati hone ke karan koi stri mujhse mitrata nahi karti,ya to kartavya ke karan mujhse baat karti hai

jaise daasiya ya phir sab mataye

koi hum umr ki saheli jo humare hi ling(gender) ki ho to jeevan mei alag anand hota hai

jaha mitrata ka koi swarth nai bus prem ho

to kahiye banengi aap meri saheli?bataogi mujhe ki baalpan mei kya hota hai?

vrush-relaxed now-ji awashya

and draupadi then shows her full palace

then they come across karna's room the soon to be her room

vrushali is highly nervous about that

and then panchali gets a naughty idea

vru-ghabrahat ho rahi hai vivaah se purv

drau-kyu?

vru-soch rahi hu ek dhanurdhaari ki patni hona kaisa lagta hoga?saubhagya hota hoga na?

drau-saubhagya nahi durbhagya

vru-kyu?

drau-kyunki dhanurdhari ki patni unki pehli patni nahi hoti -

vru-matlab?

drau-matlab dhanurdhari ki pehli patni unka dhanush hota hai - Good one & its true 😆 😆

vru-kya? nahi nahi wo aise nahi hai

drau-ha ha abhi vivaah se purv bol lo ke wo aise nahi hai,waise nahi hai,band lo taareefo ke pul

kintu jab tumhe chodkar apne abhyaas mei vyast ho jaenge,apne purushi ahankaar(male ego)se jab vivaad karenge kehke ki wohi sahi hai

jab tum unki unhi aadato se ub(bored) jaogi tab kehna ki wo aise nahi hai

kya hai purush kaise bhi ho kahi na kahi sab ek jaise hi hai

vrushali gets now more tensed

pandavas

yudhi-nahi nahi jyeshth itna bhi bura anubhav nahi hota hai vivaah

bus thodi choti choti baatein sambhaalni padti hai

naku-ha aur phir hum sab to hai hi,agar bhabhishree ne apne aabhushan fek ke maare to hum bachane ka poorna prayaas karenge

kar-nakul...

and he runs behind him with pandavas laughing

here vrushali with draupadi

drau-arre jiji mai to majaak kar rahi thi

aap chinta na kare,jyeshth bhrata bahut acche insaan hai wo humesha aapko khush rakhenge

vru-aur agar unhone dusra vivaah kia to..

drau-fir to triyacharitram koi na jaane lolzzz

and suddenly both of them get dashed by running nakul and vrushali is just about to fall but then she is caught by strong arms of her man!

and then karna vrushali are lost in each other's arms,in each other's eyes

now pandavas also gather there - Aww what a scene... Karna-Vru embracing each other in front of Pandavs & Drau 😆 😆

yudhishther as usual is very shy about such stuff of his elder brother

so he looks down

whereas rest of them are having a good time seeing that

nak-ahm..ahm..

sahdev-cough cough..

drau-whispers.jiji jiji

sahdev-lagta hai bhrata arjun ko dhyaan hatane waala koi baan chalana padega - Agar aur kuch der tak Karna-Vru aise hi rehte toh Dhyaan Hatane wala Divyastra ka nirman bhi ho jata 😆

bhee-kyu na hum sab nadi tat par chale

listening to nadi tat both of them get shy but then they come back to senses

and they stand stright

vru-ab wo mai.. and she just rushes out of there going completely red

nak-lagta hai ab vivaah jaldi hi aarambh karna hoga jyeshth

karna again runs behind nakul and they all have a laugh

soon karna vrushali get married - ❤️

karna then rules agandesh - 😊

pandavas are given khandavaprasth which turn into indraprasth later

indraprasth n angadesh are neighbouring kingdoms(just imagine like that)

with yudhishthir ruling indraprasth n karna as angaraj karna - 😃

all 6 brothers and panchali n vrushali meet each other quite frequently

and with this its a

HAPPY END! - 😊 😊 😃

guys i hope you all liked the story

and ya this manipulation part and all was just for fun😆

i hope you have no objection with any of the parts of story

it was a sweet n short tale with a romantic yet naughty twist😉

thanks for supporting me through your wonderful feedbacks!😊

love you all

take care!😊

It was a pleasure reading your sweet Pandavas & Kar-Vru ❤️story. I have thoroughy enjoyed reading each & every update some of them made me go 🤣 & imagining the ⭐️MB starcast in these scenes where cherry on the top 😊 😆

Hope u come up with more happy & wonderful OS.😊
Take care 😊

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

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Originally posted by: shavii

one word awesome👏

i was laughing 🤣 this much reading spl shakuni mama mere bachhe arjuuun duri sunta to he would have got angry..

loved brothers teasing karn on getting married

best part nakul saying he have to make her hair too😆

bheem saying bina waje rona haila...

dp complaining they consider the dhanush as their first love😆 that is truth 😆

karn ko trouble karne ka mauka oh god these brothers are crazyy😆

oh god totally rocking happy superb end👏👏👏

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

thnks for the pm

love the story

try to write another story and plz in that story plz include kunti and pandu also...

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Such wonderful story :-) kash mahabharat me aisa hi hua hota ! Kash karn zinda rehta pandav k sath :-( sigh :-(