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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
this is really nice
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very nice update!!!!
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#34
Wow awsm updates
Loved it
Read all the chaps now
Sorry I couldn't reply b4
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good jldi jldi update but update thoda long next tym 😉
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Hi! So isse bhi update krne ka soch rhi hu? Kr du? LOL. Chalo I am back with another update. Hope you all like it! :)

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Mount College
Annual Prom
Narrator's POV

"Aallliiiyyyaaa!" Meghna said as she came running to Aaliya. "Oh hi Zain!"

"Hi!" Zain said smiling at her... weirdness.

"Can I borrow Aaliya for a second?"

"Oh sure!" He said as he extracted his hand from hers. Aaliya smiled at him before leaving with Meghna.

"Tune Zain Abdullah ko pta liya? Yaar tu toh... Tune yeh kiya kese?" [You impressed Zain Abdullah? You are.. How did you do it?]

"Kuch nhi hai yaar. Ek baar mujhe aadi raat ko sadak pe mila tha. I gave him a lift. Aur phir woh mere ghar pe ruka-" [Its nothing. One day I saw him on the road at midnight. So I gave him a lift. And then he stayed at my home-]

"Woah Woah Woah Woah! HE 'STAYED' AT YOUR HOME??"

"Yeah it isn't such big deal" She said while she was busy admiring Zain who was laughing with his friends.

"You used to be enemies Aaliya? What happened?"

"Mujhe nhi pta! Jo hua... Bas hogya!" [I don't know. What happened... Just happened]

"First of all... STOP STARING AT HIM. Aur idhar dekh" [Look here]

"Yaar I have to go!"

Other end:

"Tune Aaliya ko kese pta liya yaar. Tu jaanta nhi par college ka har ladka uspe marta hai. Aur tune use pta liya? Itni hot hai yaar!" Shawn, Zain's friend, told him surprised that they had entered to the prom... hand in hand. [How did you impress Aaliya? Do you even know that every boy of this college dies after Aaliya. And YOU impressed her? She is too hot!]

"Shut up! I have to go!"

They met in between their tracks. "They were asking question-" Both said together and burst into laughter. Just then the music started.

"Dance?" Zain asked like a gentleman offering his hand.

"Would love to!" Aaliya said as Zain smiled and took her to the dance floor. Zain pulled her closer and put an arm around her waist. The music played was "Teri Galliyan".

O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena... x2

Zain brushed past a strand of her hair. Then slowly crept his hand down her cheek to her waist. Her hands slowly found their way to his shoulder and then his neck.

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...

He twirled her around and dipped her head down. Pulled her up, this time getting her more closer. Then lifted her up breathing her scent fully. Putting her down he pulled her closer again.

"Kal coffee pe chalogi?" Zain asked as they swirled to the music. [Would you go for coffee with me tomorrow?]

"Will think about it! Dad has rules!" Aaliya said.

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka

Lifted her up yet again. This time fully. And then putting her down on to flush her hard against his chest.

"If your dad has them. Then leave it to me!" Zain said smirking.

"What will you do?"

"You don't know about my talents!"

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se
Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse
Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le..
Abr se juda na ho

Teri galliyan... galliyan teri galliyan..
Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..

Galliyan...
Teri galliyan..
Tadpaavein...

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I am pretty sure ki accha toh bilkul bhi nhi hoga? Hai kya? Please tell me your reviews. I selected the most common song. And you another thing. My school is preparing for Annual Prom for Seniors. Hey, I am a JUNIOR. So I have to help them. Class in an hour. Till then have to update everything. Tell me ur reviews.

Thanks a lot and take care.
Lots of love,
-Tanu.



Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow thnks for updating so soon and would love to know wat zain does ahead to take her for a coffee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow !!!!!..that ws super cute and super romantic update😳😳...beautifully written...loved it❤️...plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
amazing update
I loved it
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#40
lovely update
waiting 4 d next part:)
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