ZaYa SS: Melodius Relationships! Collab by Tanya and Sumaiya (COMPLTD) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
awesome update
love it โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Tht was MAGICAL and the way he realised she had spark in her voice was potryed so well...hope he soon realises tht hes fallen for her as well...nd ha update jaldi karna nahi toh tu nahi bachegi...hehehehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Aww he's falling for her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved the update to the core
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Lovely - can't wait for next update ๐Ÿ‘


Hi can you pls change the title to SS or FF because an OS is one shot which means the story must have only one part. As a reader it confuses me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
fabulous update !!!๐Ÿ‘
wonderfully written
loved itโค๏ธ
waiting for d next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome Awesome and Awesome
cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
wow superb story ๐Ÿ‘
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Hey Peeps!
Back with another update...!
cliche it is.. but nevertheless..
Do Read And Comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†

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Aaliya : are.. Bhaiya paani do nuh..*takes a glass of water n hands it over too zain...*

Zain : yeh??yeh---cough---mei---cough--nahi-----cough---*tears rolling down his cheeks due to the mirchi*

Aaliya : peelo.. Kuch nahi hoga..*gives the glass*

Zain :---cough--- nahi*shakes his head*

Aaliya : zain..*holds him by his hair.. Gets on her toes n makes him drink it forcefully...*

Zain : chee.. Yeh ganda unhygenic paani peela diya tumne mujhe*gives a disgusted look and wipes his mouth*

Aaliya : aur kya karti??halat dekhi apni??aur iss paani mei kya kharabi hai?? Bisleri water bhi khabhi safe nahi hota.. Zindagi mei risks lene chahiye

Zain : oh hello.. Mei yahaan paani par research karne nahi aaya.. Chalo yahaan se*goes away.. Aaliya follows him*


CAR


Aaliya : woh kya hai?*points towards a park*

Zain : uhmmm woh park hai.. Aur kuch nahi..*keeps driving*

Aaliya : roko nuh.. Mujhe dekhna hai

Zain : nahi... Yeh bhi koi dekhni ki cheez hai?? Kahin aur le chalta hoon tumhe

Aaliya : nahi.. Mujhe yeh waale park mei hi jaana hai*angry*

Zain : arre yaar.. Zidd kyun kar rahi ho? Nahi kahaan nuh..*angry*

Aaliya : par kyun?

Zain : kyunki... Kyunki..

Aaliya : kyunki kya??*super angry*

Zain : acha meri maa..rok rahaan hoon*parks the car .. *

Aaliya rukoo*screams as she runs away*

Oh god.. Kaise samjho iss ladki ko ki yahaan kaise log aate hai?*goes behind aaliya*

PARK


Aaliya : wow.. Kitni greenary hai yahaan*luks arnd the trees*

Zain : aise bol rahi ho jaise khabhi greenary nahi dekhi.. Bhopal ki kitni better greenary hai..*booth of them walk together.. Zain has his hands in his pocket*

Aaliya : ohhh plzz.. Bhopal ki toh baat hi alag hai.. Par mumbai bhi kuch kam nahi hai..*smiles.. They keep walking.. People were coming from the opposite side so they had to move behind a tree.. Aaliya was super embarassed to c a couple kissing behind the tree.. She turned away.. But to her embarassement.. She saw zain luking at them.. Trning red n thn turn towards her..*

Aaliya : chale??*embarassed*

Zain : haan chalo*super embarassed.. None of them spoke.. They kept walking and kept bumping into the "PDA" couples...


MONOLOGUE

AALIYA :
Allah.. Yeh log aise khullam khulla.. Agreed yaar tum bahut bechain ho.. Par public place mei kiss?? God uske uppar se zain.. Isne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki yeh family park kam aur lovers point zyaada hai.. Mujhe toh free mei emraan hashmi ki movie dekhne ko mil rahi hai.. Jahaan dekho wahaan koi nai koi ek doosre ko chipak kar tehra hai.. God itna embarassing hai yeh.. Ek ki place mei do log.. Allah tauba allah tauba.. Pata nahi zain kya soch rahaan hoga.. Ya pata nahi.. Yeh bhi aise hi kisi ladki ke saath tree ke peeche.. nahi.. Chee.. Yeh kya soch rahi hoon mei?? Mujhe kya farak padhta hai.. Yeh jahaan jaaye.. Jiske saath jaaye.. Jo kare mujhe kya?

Zain :
kahaan tha maine ki yahaan nahi chalte hai.. But nahi.. Isko toh sunni nahi thi meri.. Pehle hi isse dekhte hi mere dimaag ke gande gande khayal aate hai.. Aur aaj yeh.. Lyk seriously Allah?? Isske saath aaj woh scene kyun dikhaya aapne mujhe? 2 min ke liye mujhe aisa laga ki woh dono mei aur aaliya .. Shi*t what am i talking?Kissing Aaliya Ghulam Haider.. Jab se yeh ladki meri zindadi mei aayi hai.. Sab ajeeb sa hogaya hai.. Pata nahi iske baaare mei main itna kyun sochta hoon??aur har baar jab mei isse dekhta hoon toh baar baar meri nazar uske honth ki taraf kyun chali jaati hai?? Kyun mujhe isse abhi issi waqt pagalo ki tarah kiss karne ko dil kar rahaan hai??kyun?? Y am i not able to control myself??

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*Zain sees another couple kissing... Luks at aaliya.. She had her head down.. She was luking at jer toes??uhmm maybe..!! But hell he couldnt control himself anymore...*

Aaliya : zain kya..*he grabs her by her waist n pushes her against a tree n kisses her hard.. Real hard... He didnt force himself onto her at first and was a lil gentle.. Aaliya was a shocked for sumtym for she eventually let it go.. She held onto his shoulders n kissed him with the same passion.. Her Hands tangled in his hair.. His hands on her waist trying to pull her close... His body pressed against hers.. Zain pulls back due to lack of oxygen.. He luked at aaliya.. Her lips were swollen n hair were all messed up n her cheeks red.. Gosh she luked lyk a freaking cute tomatoe!! Aaliya didnt luk at him.. She kept staring at her toes.. She couldnt beleive that she was kissed by the-oh-so-hot Zain Abdullah behind a tree.. A freaking tree.. Zain on the other hand.. Wondered y she didnt slap n kissed him back lyk it was the best thing ever..?

This was confusing.. They didnt utter a word.. Zain was the one who broke their silence...*

Zain : tum theek ho??*whispers... Aaliya nods.. She still dosent luk at him*

Uhmm theek hai.. Mei paani lekar aata hoon*moves a lil*

Aaliya : wait.. Woh..*points towards his face.. She was all red*

Zain : kya??*wipes his cheek*

Aaliya : wahan nahi.. Wahaan*points towards his mouth*

Zain : gaya?*wipes his mouth*

Aaliya : nahi.. Wait i'll do it.. *moves close to him.. Takes out a tissue paper from her bag n wipes the mark of her lipstick from the corner of his mouth.. She was burning red.. Zain chuckled to hide his embarassement..*

Zain : tum yahaan roko.. Yahaan paas mei mumbai ki sabse achi kulfi milti hai.. Mei lekar aata hoon*goes while aaliya moves to see the greenary arnd her... *


MONOLOGUE

Zain :

Shi*t sh*t sh*t.. Yeh maine kya kardiya? I kissed her?? And did she actually kiss me back?? Am i dreaming?mujhe laga eoh mujhe thappad maaregi.. Par isne toh mujhe wapaas kiss kiya aur woh bhi itna passionately.. Kahin usse mujhse .. Lyk seriously?? Aaliya Ghulam haider Loves me?? Uska chodo.. Maine usse kiss kyun kiya? Well yes i am attracted to her.. But aaj achanak public place mei jhaad ke neeche?? First kiss?? Flirt toh maine bahut kiya par kisi ladki ko kiss aaj maine pehle baar kiya... Woh bhi Aaliya Ghulam Haider?? Yeh mujhe hokya gaya hai?? Kahin mujhe usse ?? Nahi.. I cant fall for her.. Its just attraction.. Thode din mei khatam hojaayega.. Par uski aankhein.. Uske honth.. Uske baal.. Uske gaal.. Nahi nahi.. Yeh mei kya soch rahaan hoon.. *sees an old couple walking hand in hand..*

How cute.. Mei aur aaliya bhi aise hi.. Wait.. Mei aur aaliya aise?? God what the hell is wrong with me?? Allah kahin mujhe sach mei usse pyaar toh nahi hogaya??



Aaliya :

Allah.. Yeh kya kardiya maine??y did i kiss him back?? Hell .. Y did he kiss me in the first place?? Kya woh mujhse?? Nahi.. Woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta.. Woh toh aise hi.. Par uski aankhoun mei maine apne liye kuch dekha.. But i'm not sure woh kya tha.. Allah itni bechaini kyun horahi hai mujhe?? Aisa lagrahaan hai jaise mere paith mei butterflies ho.. Kya mujhe usse ?? Nahi.. Mei zain abdullah se pyaar nahi karti... Par agar mei usse pyaar nahi karti toh phir maine usse kiss karne kyun diya?? Kiss karne diya hi diya.. Khud bhi pagalo ki tarah maine usse kiss kiya.. Kyun?? Allah kahin sach mei mujhe usse pyaar toh nahi hogaya??

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*She feels uncomfortable coz a gang of 3 boys were staring at her hungrily*

Aaliya : allah.. Yeh mere peeche peeche kyun aarahe hai??

Gang of boys : oye.. Ruk jaa janeman.. Kahaan bhaag rahi hoo*whistle n follow her*

Aaliya : haath chodo..*yells at one of them as he comes n holds her hand*

Gang of boys : chodne ke liye thodi pakda hai jaaneman.. Waise maanna padega... Kya item hai boss.. Ek dum kadak..*gives gande gande luks to her*

Aaliya : u creep*slaps with the other hand*

Gang of boys : teri itni himmat?? Tune mujhe thappad maara.. Ab toh tujhe iski keenat chukaani hi padegi..*angry.. Hold her hand tightly*

Aaliya : nahi.. Chodo mujhe .. Chodo chodo*one of them picks her up.. She is hanging on his shoulder.. She's trying everythng to get down but his grip was too tight.. She was scared... *

Zain : aree.. Yahi toh chod kar gaya tha.. Kahan chali gayyi??*luks arnd*

Arre bhai saab aap ne ek ladki ko dekha?? Usne red color ki blazer aur white pant pehno thi.. Lambi si.. Gori si.. Dubli si..*asks a passerby*

Bhai saab : haan.. Woh 3 gunde usse uthaakar legayye.. Bechaari bahut dari huwi thi

Zain : what?? Uthaa kar le gayye??kahaan ?? Kab*panicks*

Bhai saab : pata nahi.. Woh log uske saath badtameezi kar rahe the.. Usne haath uthaaya aur woh usse lekar chale gayye

Zain : par yahaan toh itne saare log hai.. Aise kaise sab ke saamne se uthaa kar le gaye*angry/panicks*

Bhai saab : aap unhe jaante nahi.. Unse sab log darte hai..

Zain : pata nahi kahaan hogi.. Akeli.. Kisi ko jaanti bhi nahi.. Bwakoof.. Kya zarurat thi thappad maarne ki.. Mei aa hi raahaan tha nuh*searchers the entire park for her*

Aaliya : zain .. Tum kahaan ho?? Plzz aao.. Mujhe bacha lo..*she was in a dark room.. Her hands and legs tied with a rope.. She was sitting down on the floor n had a piece of cloth stuffed in her mouth*

Gang of boys : bhai.. Aaj toh isko halaal kar hi dete hai.. Kya kehte ho.. Scissors laana nuh bhai plzz*laughs.. Aaliya is scared.. One of them sits down*

Sharafati se kehrahaan tha tab tumnr meri baat nahi maani.. Ulta mujhe thappad maardiya.. Iska badla toh mei leke rahunga*tears the sleeve of her blazer.. Aaliya wriggles n tries to move .. She had tears in her eyes.. The other 2 get down n hold her tightly.. He removes her blazer.. N is abt to tear her t-shirt whn sumone comes n hits him hard on his head.. Aaliya who had tears in her eyes breathed a sigh if relief coz now her hero.. Her man was here to safe her from the goons..!!*


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Bas.. itna paisa mei itna ich milenga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Next Part Shall be Updated By Tanya๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by ZayaHarshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
wow! That was amazing
loved it
waiting 4 d next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
OMGGG ...tht ws awesome update...too good!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
amazingly written๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...loveddd it a lotttโค๏ธ
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