ZaYa SS: Melodius Relationships! Collab by Tanya and Sumaiya (COMPLTD) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm enjoying it's so nice yaarπŸ€—
I loved both the updates ❀️
Can't wait to see both singing lol
Tnx 4 pm Sumaiya n @tanya plz send me the pm next time with the link I actually sent u the request too😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Hey peeps!
I'm really sorry for the late update...!
I've been busy with assignments n i have unit tests from tomm
Isiliye couldnt update it...!!
Tanya.. Sab se pehle.. Congrats on becoming a goldie*hugs*..!!
Do check the other thread where everybody is congratulating u ..!! πŸ˜ƒ
Okay enough of my bakwaas...
Here goes the update...!! πŸ˜ƒ

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Aaliya : lyk seriously?? Zain abdullah ke saath? Song?? Us phate dhol ko kuch aata bhi hai??*takes out a cadbury from her pocket n is abt to take a bite whn zain comes n eats it from her hand*
What the??*shocked*
Zain : thanx.. Bahut hi yum thi*smirks*
Aaliya : excuse me?? How could u ?*angry..zain smirks*
Zain : waise we've got to practice .. Dad ko final version sunane se pehle.. Hume bahut practice karni padegi.. Aur agar tum kaho toh hun raat ko bhi practice karsakte hai*winks*
Aaliya : ur such a creep*gives a disgusted look and walks away*
Allah.. Kahaan phasa diya aapne... Aisa lag rahaa hai jaise aaj se mere bure din shuru*luks up*
Zain : excuse me??bure din??tumhare??
Aaliya : haan.. Bure din .. Mere..
Zain : kyun?
Aaliya : tumhare saath gaana hai nuh isiliye
Zain : what the?? Ohh wait.. Hey gorgeous.. U luk beautiful.. Tumhari maa ne kya khaake paida kiya tumhe??*starts flirting with another girl*
Girl : *laughs*
Zain : aaah.. Tumhari muskuraahat.. Waise aaj raat busy na ho toh hotel orchid.. Sirf tum aut me*winks*
Aaliya : khabhi nahi sudrega..idiot*walks away*
Zain : bye gorgeous.. *kisses her hand*
Aree yeh kahaan jaa rahi hai*runs behind her*
Hello kahaan jaa rahi ho??hume practice karni hai.. Tum shreya goshal toh ho nahi ki direct jaake gaado.. Toh hume practice karni padegi
Aaliya : nahi.. Mujhe nahi karni.. Tum jao nuh.. Doosri ladkiyo ke haath kiss karo.. Unki taarif karo.. Unhe date par lekejaao..practice kyun karni hai tumhe*angry*
Zain : aaliya ghulam haider... R u jealous??*raises her eyebrow*
Aaliya : excuse me??jealous aur mei??pagAl ho kya?? Mei jealous kyun feel karungi??*embarassed*
Zain : kyunki maine tumhari tareef nahi ki.. Tumhare haath ko kiss nahi kiya.. Aur tumhe date pe invite nahi kiya isiliye..*smirks*
Aaliya : what the??r u out of ur ur mind??shakal dekhi apni??machis ki tilli lagte ho..aur flirt aise karte ho jaise ranbir kapoor ho*angry*
Zain : excuse me?? Mei ranbir kapoor ki tarah flirt karne ki koshish kartu ho??mei??Lyk seriously??*suprised*
Aaliya : yes u..*starts to leave*
Zain : wait.. Agar mei maacchis ki tilli hoon toh tum hanger hoon... Apne aap ko dekha?? Ek phoonk marunga aur udd jaogi tum*mentally pats his back*
Aaliya : maaro phoonk.. Uddhti hoon ya dekho*angry*
Zain : maar doon??sochlo?
usman : yeh kya hor rahaan hai yahaan??? Phirse se ladh rahe ho tum dono?
ZaYa : nahi toh..*they luk at each other*
Zain : dad mei isse practice karne ke liye keh rahaan tha.. Par yeh sunti kahaan hai?
Aaliya : uncle woh mei ..
Usman : bas.. Aaj koi practice nahi hogi.. Kar karlena tum dono practice.. Abhi ghar jao.. Bahut late hogaya hai.. Aaliya bete .. Zain drop kardega tumhe.. Bahut raaat hochuki hai..
Aaliya : kya?? Nahi mei khud chali jaungi..
Zain : nahi nahi.. Mei karta hoon nuh drop.. Waise bhi yahaan raat ko akeli ladki ka jaana safe nahi hai..
Aaliya : raat ko tumhare saath akele jaana bhi safe nahi hai*angry*
Usman : nahi aaliya.. Yeh drop kardega tumhe..allah hafiz*laughs n leaves*
Aaliya : mei chali jaungi.. Tumhe takleef uthaane ki koi zarurat nahi hai*walks away*
Zain : arre par mei drop kar rahaa hoon nuh*walks along with her*
Aaliya : maine kahaan nuh mei chali jaaungi*walks away*
zain : f9.. Chali jaao.. Jab gunde aake tumhe chedenge nuh tab yaad karna mujhe*walks away from her*

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ROAD


Aaliya : ohh god.. Yahaan koi auto/rickshaw kyun nahi hai?? Ab mei ghar kaise pahunchungi?gets scared as she sees 2 men on a bike approaching her*
Allah..plzz bachaa lena..
Mein : aaye haaye.. Main mar jawaan.. Kahaan jaana hai jaaneman?? Batao.. Hum chhod dete hai tumhe.. Aur waise bhi itni raat ko akele aise kapdo mei sumsaan sadak par akele rehna dangerous hota hai*laugh.. Aaliya ignores n walks away..they follow her on the bike*
Aaliya : allah plzzz ..
Men : arre... Kahaan jaa rahi hoon*whistle*
aaliya : allah nahi plzz.. Ek aur nahi plzz*sees a car approaching her*
Men : lagta hai koi aur bhi hamare saath aana waala hai*laugh.. Aaliya gets superscared*
Aaliya : thankgod..*runs n hugs zain...who comes out of the car*
Thanku soo much aane ke liye*hugs him tightly*
Zain : kahan tha nuh.. Yaad karogi mujhe*smirks*
Well.. Aap log ko kya kaam hai inse??
Men : abbe tu kaun hai??
Zain : mein... Mei iska fiance hoon*pulls her by her waist and kisses her cheek.. Aaliya shocked*
Kuch hi mahino mei hum shaadi karne waale hai.. Aap aayenge??
Men : nahi.. Nahi.. Aapki biwi aapko mubarak*they go away*
Aaliya : what the hell?? How dare u ??*pushes him..angry*
Zain : excuse me??ek toh maine tumhari kaan bachayi aur tum mujhe sunaa rahi ho?*irritated*
Aaliya : tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?*embarassed*
Zain : kyunki mujhe tumhara yeh laal laal gol gol sa cheek bahut acha lagta hai*pulls her cheeks.. Aaliya shocked*
Ab chale?? Ya unke aane ka wait kar rahi ho?
Aaliya : chalo*both of em get into the car..*
Thanx mujhe drop karne ke liye
Zain : sirf thanx se kaam nahi chalega.. Aur coffee peene nahi bulaogi mujhe?*smirks*
Aaliya : woh mei..
Zain : kidding.. Kal studio mei milte hai.. Bye
Aaliya : bye..*both of them leave*

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NIGHT - IN THEIR RESPESCTIVE ROOMS


Aaliya : itna bura bhi nahi hai yeh.. Flirt karta hai.. Badtameez hai par dil ka acha hai..*smiles n lies down*
Zain : kaafi achi ladki hai.. Uski awaaz toh Masha Allah.. Dad se sahin kahaan tha.. Woh laakhoun mei ek hai.. Thodi jhalli hai.. Pagal hai par cute hai*smiles n dozes off to sleep*

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STUDIO


Zain : practice shuru kare??
Aaliya : hmm haan theek hai..par gaana kaunsa?
Zain : english obviously.. Mujhe hindi gaane ache nahi lagte..*shrugs*
Aaliya : excuse me??hindi gaane nahi pasand to phir india mei kyun rehte ho?
Zain : aree yaar ladhne ka mood nahi hai mera.. Lets start.. Ek hindi gaana aur ek english..theek hai??*sits on a chair beside aaliya*
Aaliya : okay..*adjusts her guitar..*
Zain : shall we start??*knock knock*
Who's it?
Worker : sir chaai..*brings in 2 cups of tea*
Zain : yahaan rakh do*points towards a table.. He keeps it goes away*
Zain : coffee??
Aaliya : yeah*zain hands over her a cup n takes his..*
Zain : tum sugar nahi leti?*puts sugar in his coffee*
Aaliya : uhmm nahi...
Zain : kyun??
Aaliya : aise hi
zain : ohkay..*they drink and thn start practicing*

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Aaliya : pehle hindi..
Zain : no .. English
Aaliya : hindi
Zain : english
Aaliya : hindi
Zain : yahaan boss kaun hai?*starts moving towards her.. Aaliya moves back*
Aaliya : tum.. Par mei singer hoon toh hum hindi pehle*stammers.. She keeps moving back.. He keeps coming forward..knock knock*
Zain : kaun hai yaar??*irritated.. Moves away*
Worker : sir aapke liye call hai..
Zain : mujhe nahi Attend karni koi call..*the worker leaves*
Ab koi disturb nahi karega*locks the door*
Shall we start?
Aaliya : uhmm ... Haan...

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Aaliya :
I've been living with a shadow overhead,
I've been sleeping with a cloud above my bed,
I've been lonely for so long,
Trapped in the past,
I just can't seem to move on!


Zain :
I've been hiding all my hopes and dreams away,
Just in case I ever need 'em again someday,
I've been setting aside time,
To clear a little space in the corners of my mind!


Both:
All I wanna do is find a way back into love.
I can't make it through without a way back into love.
All I wanna do is find a way back into love.
I can't make it through without a way back into love.
And if I open my heart again,
I guess I'm hoping you'll be there for me in the end!


Aaliya :
There are moments when I don't know if it's real
Or if anybody feels the way I feel
I need inspiration
Not just another negotiation


Both:
All I wanna do is find a way back into love,
I can't make it through without a way back into love,
And if I open my heart to you,
I'm hoping you'll show me what to do,
And if you help me to start again,
You know that I'll be there for you in the end!
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Both of them keep staring at each other...they're totally lost in each others eyes.. Aaliya realises n breaks the eyelock...
Aaliya : uhmmm mei zara bahaar dekh kar aati hoon*goes to open the door*
Yeh khul kyun nahi rahaa??*tries to open the door*
Zain: ohh wait..*comes n tries to open the door but fail..*
Shi*t.. Mei kaise bhool gaya*slaps his forhead*
Aaliya : kyabhoolgayye?
Zain : yahi ki yeh ek baar andar se band hojaaye toh khulta nahi.. Isse bahar se hi kholaa jaasakta hai..
Aaliya : what??*shocked*
Toh phir kisi ko call karo aur kholne ke liye bolo... 'Mujhe ghar jaana hai.. Already shaam hochuki practicse karte karte*
Zain : haan .. Mei karta hoon call..*takes out his phne from his pocket*
Sh*t..
aaliya : kya huwa??
Zain : balance nahi hai phne mei..
Aaliya : MNC ke owner ke bete ke phne mei call karne ke liye ek rupiya nahi hai??*angry*
Zain : arre yaar recharge karna tha.. Bhool gaya.. Tum apna phne nikaalo nuh..
Aaliya : haan.. Ek minute*takes out her phne from her pocket*
Crap..*luks at her phne with horror*
Zain : kya huwa??*shocked*
Tumhare paas bhi balance nahi hai??
Aaliya : nahi .. Battery dead hai..
Ab kya kare??
Zain : kya kare??wait marna padega aur kya?
Aaliya : par kab tak??
Zain : jab tak hume koi bahaar se nikaalta nahi jab tak
Aaliya : aur agar puri raat koi nahi aaya toh?
Zain : toh hamare beech aaj raat kya huwa woh kisi ko nahi pata chalega*winks*
Aaliya : chiii...*gives a disgusted luk n moves away.. She goes n sits on the couch*
Zain : mummy mummy*comes running n laptofies to aaliya*
Aalliya : kya huwa??*scared*
Zain : mujhe thundering se darr lagta hai*tightens their hug*
Aaliya : seriously? Tum 28yrs ke ho??
Zain : thunder se darr aur age mei kya similarity hai?*moves away*
Ab plzz light mat chali jaana*light goes off.. This time both of them freak out together... They hug each other tightly n sit on the couch.. His hands tightly wrapped arnd her waist n her hands wrapped arnd his neck...they keep hugging each other...*
Aaliya : zain...*he tightens his grip on her*
Zain.. Light aagayyi*embarassed*
Zain : huh??
aaliya : light aagayi
zain : ohhh*moves away.. Both if them sit n r embarassed..*
Zain : uhmm.. Mei door ka kuch karta hoon..
Aaliya : hmmm*zain gets up n starts kicking the door*
Aaliya : yeh kya kar rahe ho???lag jaayegi tumhe*stops him*
Zain : toh aur kya karun?? Yeh stupid door khul hi nahi rahaan*angry*
Aaliya : khul jaayega.. Lets wait..! Kal subah tak koi na koi toh khol hi dega...
Zain : idea... Apna pin nikaalo*points towards her hair*
Aaliya : kya?? Mera pin??kyun?
Zain : arre nikaalo yaar*comes forward to remove it*
Aaliya : nahi.. Mera pouff kharab hojaayega*dosent let him remove*
Zain : tumhe apne pouff ki padi hai??*shocked*
Aaliya : arre.. Mere baal*zain pushes her towards the wall.. Holds her wrists tightly above her head n kisses her passionately...he keeps kissing her... Finally he moves n stares at her.. Aaliya is shocked and embarassed at the same time*
Zain : sorry.. Bahut control kiya khud ko.. Ab aur nahi hota mujhse..*with that he kissed her again...*
Aaliya : zain..
Zain : sshh*puts finger on her lips...they hear someone unlocking the door n move away from each other*
Manager : arre sir.. Aap dono yahaan kaise?aur aap dono ka yeh haal?kaise??*suprised*
Zain : uhmmm woh.. Hum yahaan lock hogayye the.. Aur hum ladh rahe the.. Isiliye...*adjusts his blazer n hair.. Aaliya also adjusts her hair n dress..*
Manager : ohha acha... Sir
Zain : haan.. Bahar aane se pehle zara aapke hoonth ke paas se lipstick ka mark hata le*smirks n goes away.. Aaliya and zain both r embarassed n they follow him and leave*


Bas hogaya!! Finally πŸ˜†
Next part will be updated by Tanya!

Link to the Song!

Way Back Into Love
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow ..superbbb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonderfully written..πŸ‘.
loved it a lottt❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its awesome sumaiya
vry beautifully written
waiting 4 d next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really cute one Sumaiya.
Ab itna accha update krke mujhe phasa diya hai!
Mei kese kr paungi?
Phassa diya na mujhe!

Par bahaut accha tha!
And thank you so much! I will check the other thread too!
Ab Goldie ban gyi hu toh Dazzler bhi jald hi ban jaungi!
Thank you so so much!

Lots of love,
-Tanu.
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Hi! Pehle toh mei bahaut ghussa hu! Itna lamba aur accha update kr diya aur mujhe phassa diya! I am sure yeh aapke intentions the! Ab mera part accha nhi lgega! Also people kal aur parso plus Sunday (Raksha Bandhan) mei nhi online aaungi! So no updates. Sorry. Accha back to the update. Hope you all like it! :)

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7:00 am
Recording Studio
Aaliya's POV

Zain! Mujhe kal chilla chilla ke bol rha tha ki mei aaj jaldi aa jau! This jerk! Mei aaj subah 6 baje se yaha hu aur iska namo nishan nhi hai! Bloody creep!

"Lets start!" A voice came from behind me. Zain!

"Bahaut jaldi yaad aagyi!" I said settling myself on the stool kept in front of the mike. He came and sat next to me. "Mei yaha 6 baje se bheti hu!"

"Its not my fault! Meine kaha tha 'jaldi' aana. Ye nhi kaha tha ki subah subah aana!"

"Oh just shut up!" I said as the music started.

Zain's voice: Blue.
Aaliya's voice: Pink.
Duet: Purple.

If the heart is always searching,
Can you ever find a home?

I've been looking for that someone,
I'll never make it on my own
Dreams can't take the place of loving you,
There's gotta be a million reasons why it's true.

When you look me in the eyes,
And tell me that you love me.
Everything's alright,
When you're right here by my side.
When you look me in the eyes,
I catch a glimpse of heaven.
I find my paradise,
When you look me in the eyes.

How long will I be waiting
To be with you again?
Gonna tell you that I love you,
In the best way that I can.
I can't take a day without you here,
You're the light that makes my darkness disappear.

When you look me in the eyes,
And tell me that you love me.
Everything's alright,
When you're right here by my side.
When you look me in the eyes,
I catch a glimpse of heaven.
I find my paradise,
When you look me in the eyes.


And we finished looking at each other. I would never have broken that eye-contact unless Maamu would have come in. Maamu!

"Wow! You see, this is what I call perfection. Good job kids!" Maamu said clapping.

Zain's POV

Okay! Okay she sings really well. And our voice together sounded... um... magical? But there is something in her voice. No its not only that she sings well. I have met 50 girls (or more) who sing well. But they don't have the spark she has in her voice. Wait! Are you falling for her Abdullah? NO!

"Where are you lost?" She asked. In your thoughts girl!

"Huh? No, nothing. Dad, do we have to get another done now?"

"Ya son! Aaliya you are okay with it no?" Dad said.

"Yeah I am!" She said smiling.

"Who is going to ask me? I also have to be asked whether I am okay with it or not?" I saw the music director speak something in Dad's ears. He nodded.

"Okay kids, there is one more recording that needs to be done. So you people, um... meet here at 6. Is it cool?" Dad said.

"Cool!" We said almost together. We went out of the room to the cafeteria.

Cafeteria
Aaliya's POV

So we sat down on the chairs. I ordered a low fat coffee while he ordered a choco fantasy. Men!

"So what's you plan for today?" He asked.

"Well, I was planning to go for a sightseeing trip. But, my friend is not coming with me, she has some work. Don't know whom to go with!" I said sipping my coffee.

"Come with me!" My eyes widened "I mean to say that roaming around alone will not be safe for you. You don't know anything about Mumbai besides".

"Yeah! But going sightseeing with a big flirt isn't safe too!" I said.

"Zain, take Aaliya to the Haji Ali Dargah!" Maamu said as he came from behind.

"That's what I am saying too dad!"

"Okay!" I said agreeing to go with this flirt. But, I have my pepper spray with me, just in case!

Haji Ali Dargah
Zain's POV



After dua, me and her were walking outside. "You should definitely visit Bhopal sometime you know. Its a wonderful place" She said. I have remember!

"Well I came to Bhopal to get you but I didn't roam around sightseeing" I completely only to see her more interested in a shop nearby which was probably.. "Gol Gappe!" She shouted out as she ran off to the stall.

"Aaliya are you out of your senses? This is unhygienic!" I said making a face looking at the way the man was filling those gol gappas!

"Oh now I get it!"

"Get what?" I said not in mood.

"That why you didn't roam around in Bhopal" She turned to me "Zain Abdullah, open up a little bit. This is NOT unhygienic. Taste it first!" She put one in my mouth. Omg! This is so BIG. How are people supposed to eat this in one go? I ate it over slowly.

"Like it?" She asked. I nodded smiling. She really was something! And I guess I liked that something... Hope so...

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So do you all like it? Well I know it isn't like Sumaiya's update which was LONG and NICE. But I tried my best. Please leave your comments and likes. And if you have got the time to read it, like toh banta hai na! Please hit the 'like' button. And we are lagging behind. Please keep making posts so that we reach page 650. Its only 640 right now! Please make posts. And leave your suggestions as to how to make this even better.

Next update by Sumaiya. Don't trouble me for that. PM Sumaiya to make her update. Will update other works soon too. Thanks a lot and take care!
Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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First of all,What about giving some long updates??I crave for more!

So i read all the previous chapters too! And the concept is totally awesome!πŸ‘πŸΌ

So this part was,As usual - Ah-mazing! I loved the last few lines πŸ˜†

Continue soon and Most Important - Give Long Updates! Pretty Please!
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its amazing
can't wait 4 d next part
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Res..
Sorry will unres later..

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Tanya... I love you 😳 πŸ˜†
Yeh kya tha?? 😲
This was πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Visiting Haaji ali.. His realisation.. Haaye superb update 😳
N cheating tanya.. Maine two two updates diye.. Pehlatoh woh2nd partn next one on pg 6..
Maine back to back2 updates diye.. Now its ur turn πŸ˜†
Aur ek update do.. Uske bbaad i'll updAte πŸ˜†
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