Zaya os-You Are Mine - Page 3

meerab

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: craziness05
First of all welcome to the forum...and btw my name is also aastha😆
It was so beautifully written...👏 I am already in love with your writing skills...😉 hope u will write some more...I know I am bit greedy but after seeing such great writers I can't control myself...and dear at one place u have written astha plzz edit it...it seems like I am romancing with zain...!!😆

Awww...thank u sooo much sweety for the lovely response...loved ur name astha...😛😛😛😛😛
And i edited ur name from os😆😆😆😆😆...dont worry now zain is only romancing with aliya😳😳😳😳😳😳

Once again a big thanks sweety😳

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meerab

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
first welcome in this forum and its really a beautiful os.love Zain surprise and last their scene was so much romantic and passionate.keep writing more and hope to see u active in forum.thanks for pm me.

Awww...thank u sooo much dear🤗

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ZayaShiz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Awesome...that was just fabulous I must say...

Welcome to the forum dear!!🤗

I really liked that surprise Zain gave her...and u have written this beautifully I must say...loved the OS.

P.S.-Can i expect more of your work on ZaYa??😃

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geet0910

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Welcome to the forum 🤗 and loved ur os veryy much... beautifully written bt only one thing i didnt like.. the song.. dil ka rishta.. i dnt like that song much... otherwise os ws perfect to the tee... pls continue writing such beautiful os which r a real treat to read and thanks for pm.. 😊

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