ZaYa SS: Complications. (PART-2 UPDATED ON PAGE 5/ NO PM'S!) - Page 4

Sounds interesting tanya! Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika

Aaah..
I'm super late 😆
Amazing Tanya!! 👏
Luved it
Thanx for the PM

Like really late dear...!!
Doesn't matter..!! Glad u r finally here..!!😃 😃
Thanks a lot and take care..!! 😉 😉

Hayyy O Ram! Story kaha se kaha pahaunch gyi and I am still stuck at this! ab shuru kiya hai toh khatam toh krna hoga na? So here you go with my update. Also no PM's this time for THIS update. Next update jab bhi hogi, I will tell you about it. Also I haven't read the recent part so don't remember the story that well. Please try to relate this with the previous part. Sorry but no proof-reading. Here you go with the update, hope you all like it! :)

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2:30 am at night
Zain's POV

I wasn't falling asleep. No! Not at all. Thinking that if Gauhars prank would have affected me and if I had been the father of that baby. What humiliation will Aaliya have gone through. I am so depressed even thinking about it. I couldn't even think of having a child other than with Aaliya. "NO!" I suddenly shouted out.

Aaliya woke up too and hugged me suddenly realizing I either had a bad dream or was scared. I hugged her tightly equally. "Did you have a nightmare?" She asked softly, her voice crying.

"No! I was just thinking that if I would have been Gauhar's baby's father. You would never have forgiven me. Or yourself!" I said still shaking. She lightly soothed my hair and I only hugged her tighter.

"Zain trust in Allah! He will make everything go perfectly fine!" She said.

"Are you sure?" I said still shaking and hugging her.

"200%" She said as she kissed the side of my head still hugging me. "Now sleep!" She laid me down on the bed, snuggled closer to me and we slept. Peacefully!

Next Morning
Kitchen
Narrator's POV

"Maami should I help you?" Aaliya said as she walked in the kitchen seeing Surraiya cooking food.

"Nahi! Mumma cooks herself!" Shazia came in with her evil smile plastered on her face. Does anyone notice it even? Aaliya thought.

"Bhaabhi its nothing like that, I just-"

"Oh please Aaliya! I get all the ways you are trying to snatch away Zain from me!" Surraiya said turning around. Gauhar, who was standing outside watching this all quickly dialed up Zain's number.

"Hello?" Zain said on the phone.

"Hello Zain" Gauhar slightly whispered "There is something I need you to hear!" Gauhar turned the phone on loudspeaker and held it it in front of the kitchen door.

"So what do you think of yourself you Bhopali bloody creep! You people are just staying here for money aren't you? You married Zain for money. And don't show this i-married-zain-coz-i-love-him attitude in front of me! Coz it ain't gonna work!" Surraiya said while Zain was hearing it all. Mom? Zain thought.

"And Aaliya! Don't use that dirty voice of yours to call my name ever again. You are a burden on all our lives. Papa is only tolerating you because you are his bhaanji. And Zain is on the sake of Papa. And I am on the sake of Mummi and the reputation this house carries. So just shut up and do whatever WE want!" Shazia included. This was it! Zain was getting tired of all this!

"Fahad Bhai I have some important work at home that needs to be done RIGHT NOW!" Saying this Zain flew out of the door grabbing his bag and coat.

"But Zain-" Fahad was left alone.

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So I know this is a bit different from the teaser I gave you people no? But please bear with it. And also I would like to request you people to write something constructive. I know I "write beautifully" and "you loved it!" But please write something else too basing on how you think I could make the further parts better and suggestions for future works!

Next part... I don't know when. Till then, Keep Calm and Watch Beintehaa!!😉😉

Thanks a lot and take care.
Lots and lots of love,
-Tanu.

Res..
Will unres tonight pucca lol

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That was 👏 👏
Luved the ZaYa Scene...
I could actually picturise them lyk that 😳
N go Zain.. Cant wait for the next part..
Btw y arent u sending PMs? 😲

great job
I loved it
superb dear

Very beautifully penned down...
Godzilla ki sacai zain ke samne aagayi...
Update soon..

so suri gng to exposed
btw very nicely written
love it

vry nice tanya
haha ab lagegi suri ki class 😆
btw cont soon