THE WORD THAT BINDS US TOGETHER-A ZAYA SS(Chapter 15,updt-30.08.14,pg: - Page 6

javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

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its so sad that they lost their baby. the five stages of grief are very well written. i hope now that they ahve accepted the loss they will move forward in their lives and something good awaits for them.

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laysluv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Emotional update,nice story👏

Do continue.

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aashiqua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Oh God...ur writing...its brilliant...loved every bit of the same...and d last 2 chapters...well executed...i always felt that in such situation everybody cares about the mother...all see her tears...but the father i mean d male counterpart...he cannot even express his feeling by crying...as it is a norm that big boys don't cry..and they will have to console and be the support for his wife...
loved d way u pictured it..
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katmaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Superb ...awesome ...fabulous ...u wrote it so welll... Pls update soon

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Anisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Such a heart wrenching update

It was so sad that they lost their first baby

loved the way how you have portrayed their pain and emotions... specially Aliyas poor girl... my heart went out to her

but life has to go on nah hope Aliya understands that soon... ddnt like the way how she spoke to Zain that baby was also his... he was also in grief at the loss of his baby

Anyway loved the last bit of the update

Im sure they'll together help each other overcome their grief

waiting for the next part

thanks for the PM

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shiprabiswas92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

wow jst wow u wrote so well d emotions d pain it really touched me every word which is written is so bang on ...amazing u deserve a bow frm my side fr such an amazing chapter

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