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This story is based on Aliya and Zain...they used to hate each other and loved to disturb, fight, and argue among themselves...and Zain's father Osman Abdullah shifted to Mumbai with his family and Aliya lived in Bhopal with her family...and one day...

Character Sketch

Zain Abdullah - Zain is dear son of Mr. Osman Abdullah and Suraiya Abdullah, He is very smart, funny, handsome, clever but don't know about his religion properly...

Aliya Ghulaam Haider - Aliya is dear daughter of Ghulaam Haider and Shabana Haider , She's very kind hearted girl, caring, close to Allah, never tells lie, very beautiful, clever, believes in Love...

Chapter 1

Shabana told Aliya to go to market and bring some vegetables and Aliya took her cycle gone, Zain was returning to Mumbai from London but he got a call from Osman and the conversation was-

Zain - Hey Dad!! I'm returning to Mumbai missed you a lot...

Osman- Zain bete kya tum mera ek kaam kar sakte ho??

Zain- Dad ap hukum kijiye!!

Osman- Bete tumhari phuphi Shabana ko kuch paise dene thee kya tum please use Bhopal jake de sakte ho ???

Zain- Ji dad ap bas mujhe itna bata dijiye ki paise lene kisse hai??

Osman- Rizwaan tumhe airport pe milega aur uske paas paise honge..

Zain - ok dad bye

Osman- thank you bte..bye

Zain reached to Bhopal and he finds Rizwan and says- Hey Rizwan chal Phups intezaar kar rahi hogi...

And they both goes and sits in the bus

Aliya was driving the cycle and the bus was going and Zain was online on Facebook then he gets the pic of Aliya she looked a fairy very beautiful and Zain got memorized by her beauty and suddenly the bus stopped and Aliya's cycle stopped beside the bus and Zain looked out and found Aliya and he again look at ipad and says- Ye to Aliya hai!!! Phups ki beti...and she was about to shout Aliya but the signal came green and Aliya moved further...and looked at her and then shouts - Aliya!!!

Aliya stops her bicycle and looked back but an auto came in between and she didn't able to see Zain and she says- ye kisne chillaya wo bhi mera naam...then a car horn to Aliya and she gone and in the bus Zain says - Yar is auto ko bhi abhi beech main anaa tha and he too gone Aliya returned to home and ran inside the house and gone to Shabana and said- Ye lijiye ammi apki sabziyaa aa gayi

Shabana- Shukriya meri bachi cha lab jaldi se jake hath pair dhole

Aliya- Ji ammi!! Waise ammi aj jab me bazaar se laut rahi thi na to traffic pe kisi ne mera naam zor se chillaya pata nahi kaun tha

Shabana - hoga koi teri khubsoorti par fida ho gaya hoga

Aliya- Ammi!!! Ap bhi na

Shabana- Hahahaha acha ab ja

Aliya shook her head and left

Zain came out from the bus and he got Osman's call-

Osman- Ha to Zain pohuche??

Zain- Yes Dad me phups ke paas ja hi raha tha

Osman- Thik hai Zain

Zain- Bye

And they both ended the call

And entered the Home with Rizwan and Shabana was busy in making sabzi and Zain ran inside and said - Wow Phups sabzi to badhi la jawaab lagti hai...

Shabana seen and a big smile appeared on her face and she ran to Zain and hugged him and said- Arre Zain mera bacha itna badha ho gaya tu she caressed his face and said- Are ghulam sahaab dekhiye mera beta Zain aya hai...

Ghulam sahaab came and said- Arre Zain itna sallo baad aye!! kitna bada ho gaya hai tu he hugged him and Zain said- Phups phupha mujhe ap dono se bohut saari batein karni hai

Shabana- Arre beta abhi abhi to aye ho!! Ap aur ghulaam shahaab batein kijiye main abhi kuch khane pine ke liye mangwaati hun...

Zain - Ah phups ye rizwan hai meri bhabi ka bhai

Shabana hugged rizwan and gone and ghulaam said- Zain Rizwan tum dono upar jao Aliya tumhe tumhare kamre tak bhej degi

Zain said in his mind- Oh Aliya!!! Meri sabse badhi dushman chalo aj use bhi mukhatib ho leta hun and they both gone Aliya was drying her cloths in the balcony and Zain asked one girl- Aliya kaha hai she pointed to Aliya...Aliya's back was facing him and he moved towards her Aliya turned to take the next dress without looking up and her leg slipped due to water and was about to fall but Zain catches her waist and Aliya's hair covered her face and she catches Zain's Coat...Zain with other hand slowly removed her hairs from her face and Aliya's eyes were closed tightly...

Zain slowly lift Aliya up and made her stand...he while lifting her up moved her body closer to him and as they both stood properly their hearts were close to each other...their lips were inch apart...Aliya was breathing hard...Aliya's eyes were still close and she slowly opened her eyes and both couples had an eyelock for 2-3 mins...and the BGM Starts

Jane kaun ho par ho tum kahi

Hai dil ko mere yakeen...

Tera Sukoon ya Junoon tera

Teri Khushi ya tera gam

Jo bhi jiya aaa wo jiya maine

Jo bhi kiya tujhse kiya aaa

Beintehaa...aa..aa

Beintehaa...aa..aa

Then Aliya broke the silence and slowly Aliya removed Zain's hand from her waist and moved back and Zain just got stunned by her intense beauty and she said- Oh helloo!!! Kaun ho tum aur yaha kya kar rahe ho??? Zain was still standing quite...she continued- Kya hua Gunge ho??? She used her hand to express Behre ho?? Ho kaun tum!!!

She holds his shoulder and shook him...and Zain came to his senses and says- Aye!!!

Aliya- Kya aye kaun ho tum???

Zain- Wow!!! Mujhe bhool gayi

Aliya- tumhe janti hongi tabhi to bhulungi na...

Zain- Waise jab maine tumhe bus se awaaz lagayi to tumne suna kyu nahi????

Aliya- To wo tum thee...kyu bulaya mujhe pehle kya tum ye bataoge kit um ho kaun???

Zain offered his hand to her and said- Main Zain...Zain Abdullah...

Aliya gets shocked and said- Tum Zain ho!!! Itne badhe ho gaye

Zain - To kya chota hi rehta tum badhi nahi hui!!...! aur isme itna hairani wali kya baat hai

Aliya- Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha Zain Abdullah mera sabse bada dushman aj khud mere samne khada hai kabhi socha nahi tha ki tumse phir mulakat hogi...

Zain- To mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tumse milne ka...wo to phups se kuch zaruri kaam tha isliye anaa padha...

Aliya met her arm with his and said- To Aliya ke Bhopal main apka swagat hai Zain Abdullah@!!

She smirked and Zain said- Mujhe mera karma dikhao

Aliya- Kamra??? Tum yaha rehne wale ho??

Zain - itne sawaal to kabhi press conference walon ne bhi nahi pucha hoga jitna tum puchti ho...chup chap room me nahi leja sakti???

Aliya- Tum chahe jitney shareef aur bade ban jaoo...tumhari akl choti ki choti hi rahegi!!!

Zain- Shutup!!!

Aliya- You shutup!!

Rizwan came between these two and said- Tum dono ladhte hi rahoge ya chalo ge bhi???

And they three left...

Precap- Shabana said Aliya to share her room with Zain and Aliya ke nakhre...

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