MG FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya pt 12 n note pg 107 11/may/17

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guyz
remember this ff.due to some reasons I discont. it
but now i m restarting it again

Credit : -chamkilli- 


old banner Credit : Bhanu (Cherishh)



Prologue
ye kahani hai do ajnabiyo ki jo ek atoot bandhan main bandhane ja rhe hai...lekin ye faisla unka nhi...unke parivar walo ka tha...wo kya chahte hai ye toh unke parivarwalo ne kabhi unse pucha bhi nhi...ab dono apni puri zindagi ek doosre k sath bitane ja rhe hai dono ek dusre k naam aur chere k ilawa ek dusre k baare main kuch nhi jaante...sirf dono yahi umeed rakh kar apni nyi zindagi main kadam rakh rhe hai..."sukh main dukh main Saath Nibhana Sathiya"

kya dono ne jo ek dusre par umeed rakhi hai kya dono ek dusre ki umeed par kadhhe ho payenge

Index :
prologue,CS,Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 & 3 - pg 7
Part 4 & 5 - pg 11
Part 6 - pg 17
Part 7 - pg 20
Part 8 - pg 26
Part 9 - pg 35
Part 10 - pg 46
Part 11 - pg 103

Disclaimer-Any similarity in any scene or dialague of this FF with any FF or SS or OS is marely a coincidence.

for now ignore this note \/

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Posted: 9 years ago
character sketch...


Maan Singh Khurana (27) :

elder son of Khurana Family,MD of Khurana Empire after his Father retirement..sweet in nature but sometimes naughty...but in business world he's terror...his staff is afraid of his anger...he hate cheater and liars...mascular body...girls drool over him but he don't paid any attention because of the morals and values teach by his mother never say no to his mother never ever argue with his mother...his mother words is god's words...

Geet Handa (20) :(soon to be khurana)

Younger daughter of Handa family...always wear suits...no jeans and skirts allowed in her home..very sweet never raise her voice against anyone...want to do M.B.B.S...but her family never allowed..and only her last hope is her soon to be husband will he allow and her in laws allow her to do M.B.B.S...also believe in old tradition and values just like her family.

Harleen Handa :

Geet Grandmother belives in old values and tradition and also teachs his son the same.her  words is the gods words for the handa's.

Mohinder Handa :

Chairman of Handa Enterprises and belives in old values and tradition.

Rano Handa   :

wife of mohinder believes in old values and tradition and also teaches her daughter the  same...never raises her voice against her husband her husband words is gods words.

Anjali Brij Singh(21) :
elder daughter of mohinder...wife of brij singh never raises her voice and her eyes     against his father and Husband just like her mother.She also want to do the M.B.BS but before marriage her family never allows...and after marriage her husband and her dreams shattered.

Brij Singh (28):

orphan,husband of anjali and works with mohinder as a partner...first he's a favorite employe  of mohinder then mohinder  chooses him for anjali and he accepted his proposal then after marriage he gave him the big house to live and makes him the partner in his business.believes in old tradition and values.short tempered.more to know about him later.

Manvi Handa (19):
Cousin of Geet and Anjali...Daughter of shashank younger brother , her parents died in a car accident...and she lives with her badi ma and bade papa (mohinder and rano).

Savitri Khurana :
Grandmother of maan and just like geet's grand mother and childhood friend of harleen.

Ranjeet Singh Khuarana :

ex-chairman of Khurana empires.and just like mohinder believes in old traditions and values.

Ananya Ranjeet Singh Khurana :
believes in old tradition and values and always keep one thing in her mind that no one no one in her home de-respect this tradition and values loves her elder son maan and maan's also a mumaa's boy.

Virat(vicky) Singh Khurana (23) :

younger brother of maan and work as a major employee in KE.

Anwesha Khurana (19):

little sister of maan and vicky..they both loves her very much and she loves her bros too..she's the only one in the family who not believe in these old culture...she have to follow them because of her mother...and want to beacome a dancer but have no courage to tell har mother her desire she knows if she open her mouth about this her mother marries her with some random old tradion guy...and she dislike her mother so much why...I'll disclose in further updates

more characters will be revealed later on in the story if its necessary...

Common thing in both families:
1)Both believes in old tradition and values
2)They teaches their children the same.
3)All daughter in laws puts the dupatta on their head when they are with elders.

Edited by Devil_kriti - 9 years ago
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Part 1

Its Maaneet wedding day 

In Handa Mansion

all are busy in the last minute preparation...and in any minute barat will be arrived...
In one of the room...
A girl sitting in her wedding attire and her face colour shows her shyness and nervousness for future and then the girl come in saree and her head is covered with pallu...

Girl:geet tu tayar ho gyi...wah meri gudiya toh kitni payari lag rh hai kisi ki nazar na lage meri gudiya ko...and put the kajal behind her ear to protect her from evil eyes...

Geet:Anjali di mujhe bohot gabrahat ho rhi hai...nyi zindagi naye log main kaise manage kar paungi aur koi galti ho gyi toh...ananya maa toh mujhe kabhi maaf nhi karegi...aur main iinke saath kaise nibha paungi...humne ekdusre se kabhi baat bhi nhi ki...sirf ek dusre ki shakal dekhi hai...aur maine koi galti kar k inhe naraz kardiya toh...di mujhe bohot gabrahat ho rhi hai...meri toh kisi k saamne awaz bhi nhi nikalti aur aapne ka tha main ek baar inse apni M.B.BS ki baat karu...di batao na main kya karu...itni der se main hi chapar chapar kari ja rhi ho aap kuch bolti kyi nhi...

Anjali  :tu mujhe bolne ka moka de toh main bolu..

Geet:oh sorry acha di batao na main kya karu..

Anjali  :geetu ye nervousness shaddi k din har ladki ko hoti hai...mujhe bhi hui thi bas shaddi k baat apne pati ka saath mil jaaye toh har muskil aasan ho jaati hai...aur rhi baat teri M.B.A ki...toh maan ji khud itne pade likhe hai...itna bada business chala rhe hai...toh wo kyo teri M.B.BS k liye mana karenge...

Geet:lekin di agar ye bhi in baato par maante huue ki ladki ki jagha sirf rasoi aur pati ki seva main hai toh mere M.B.BS k sapne ka kay hoga...

Anjali  :geetu think positive aise kuch nhi hoga...(I hope so...In mind)

Geet:paka na di...

Anjali  :ha meri payari behan.par geet ek baat yaad rakiyo abse tere pati hi tere sab kuch hai...samjhi...(geet nodded)

Anjali  : chal in baatao ko chod aur is moment ko ache se jee aaj teri shaddi hai...aur shaddi k baad *ahem ahem* u know...(she said teasingly to distract her mind from the M.B.B.S topic)

Geet:Di aap bhi na..(and she blushes)...(then worry takes place on her face)...di ek pati ki  apni patni se bohot saari umeede hoti hai kya main unki ummedo par khari utar paungi kahi maine unhe neerash kar diya toh...

Anjali  :Geetu tu itni tension kyo le rhi hai...aur saath main mujhe bhi tension de rhi hai...acha acha soch sab acha hi hoga...aur chal main ye teri chunri dhang se sar par set kar dun...(afterdoing)...hm hogya...bohot payari lag rhi hai meri behan...(now her face is covered with long veil)

On the other side a other mansion is decorated THIS MANSION is KHURANA MANSION and in one of the room a guy standing in front of the mirror and set his hair and he's looking extreamly hot in his wedding attire...and then another guy comes in the room with the sehara/pagdi in his hand...

Guy     :(with pagdi)bhai aapki pagdi aagyi...(and yes the mirror guy is maan)(he turn towards the pagdi guy)

Maan :pehnade vicky...(when vicky  proceed to wear him pagdi a girl bages in with panting badly look like she comes from the marathon and screams)

Girl    :Ruko...

Handa Mansion
In Geet's room
man barges in the room and
Man     :Anjali...(he spoke rudely but not loudly)..(and then anjali stand up with fear...)

Anjali:ji...(the man is brij Anjali's husband)

Atul    :meri sherwani ka scarf kahan hai...dundke do mujhe mil nhi raha...(order her)

Anjali  :ji...(and she obeyed her husband and goes with him and geet silently sit o her seat)

Khurana Mansion
Maan Room...
(both maan and vicky shocked to saw a girl like this and)
Maan  :Princess kya hua aur tum itni tez bhag kar kyo aayi...

Vicky   :ha anni bata...(she's annie anwesha khurana)

Annie   :wo vicky bhai aap maan bhai ko pagdi nhi pehna sakte...kyonki ye kaam behno ko hota hai...aur bhai ki behan main hoon toh pagdi main pehnaugi...

Vicky   :ha toh itni si baat k liye marathon bhagne ki kya zaroorat thi ye le pehna...
(annie wore him his pagdi)
Annie   :bhai mera neg...

Vicky  :acha toh madam ko pagdi isliye pehnani thi taaki neg mile...wah annie maan gye tujhe...kya behan hai tu...bhai isne toh aapko pagdi pehna kar topi pehna di..(annie make sad face and)

Maan  :vicky shut up use mujhse gift lene k liye faltu k excuses dene ki zaroorat nhi hai.(and annie shows vicky tongue)..wo jab chahe mujhse kuch bhi le sakti hai main apni princess ko kabhi kuch mana nhi kar sakta ha agar us baat ko maa ne mana kar diya toh main bhi kuch nhi kar sakta...

Vicky   :ha bhai wo toh hum jaante hai...aap nikki ko kisi baat k liye mana nhi karte agar wo baat ma k asulo k khilaf na ho...lekin bhai ab toh aapki zindagi main bhabhi aa rhi hai...toh aap sabse zayada dhayan kisko doge bhabhi ko ya annie ko...ab toh aapki first priority bhabhi hogi na...

Maan :aisa kuch nhi hoga...Geet k aa jane se is ghar main kuch nhi badlega na maa k rules na meri priorities...kuch cheez badlegi toh wo hai humare family members ki counting...uske ilawa is ghar main kuch change nhi hoga.kuch nhi...

Annie   :bhai ab bate chodo aur jaldi se mera gift do...(he smiles to her and gives her a gift)...bhai main abhi kholo...

Maan  :as u wish...

Annie  :main abhi kholti hoon...(she unpack the gift and found a beautiful  bracelet)...

waooo bhai its so beautiful...thank u bhai u r the best brother in the whole world...(and hugs him)

Vicky  :oh hello aap dono ka agar bhai behan milap khatam hua ho...toh aap is bhai par bhi dhayan dedo...

Anniie   :oh bhai come...(trio hugs)
(and then a lady comes in a room and founds trio hugging)

Lady    :bacho chalo jaldi...barat nikalne ka waqt ho gya hai...
All     :yes maa...

(and then her eyes stops to maan and she comes near him and cup his face left side)

Ananya  :kitna pyara lag rha hai mera bacha bilkul ek shezade ki tarah...(maan gave her smile and touch her feet)

Annie   :ha maa aap bilkul shi keh rhi hai...bhai bohot hot lag rhe hai...bhabhi toh unhe dekh kar bilkul flat hi ho jayegi...and chukles...

Ananya  :Anwesha ye kaise shabd use kar rhi hi...hot flat...kuch sharam hai ya nhi hai...itni bhi tameez nhi hai...apne bhai k liye kaise bole jaata hai...

Annie   :maa maine aisa kya kahan main toh bhai ki sirf...(maan signals her to not to speak more and )...I m sorry...

Ananya  :chalo niche jaake dekho sab ready hai nhi hai thodi der main nikalna hai...(and annie left from there)

Ananya  :chalo ab tum dono bhi niche ghudchari ka samye ho gya hai...(and they all left after the ghurchari the barat leaves with all the band baja)

Handa Mansion
Geet's Room
(Geet sit in her room waiting for anjali then she hear some kids voice outside her room
kids ran from outside the her door and shouts...Baarat aa gyi baarat aa gyi her heart skip for a second her all fears coming back)
Handa's welcomes khurana's with all the rituls and then maan goes towards the mandap and sit there...and the pandit started chanting the mantra's...

(and after sometime anjali cames in the room her lips are swollen ,marks of tears on her face and she walks with very difficulty...geet knows the reason behind it but shut her mouth anjali cames to the dressing table...touch up her makeup and apply dark color lipstick match with saree...anjali's condition added more fear in her brain...and she thinking..."agar ye bhi brij jeejaji ki tarah hue or meere saath "..."nhi nhi mera dil kehta hai wo aise nhi ho sakte"par"

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congrast for new story
Loved the CS


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Awesome start
both family believe in old tradition
Maaneet marrige..geet hoping maan ll give her permition for her studies🤔
maan is mumma's boy ..n he said nothing ll cange even after geet cum  his life 🤢
feeling bad for Anjali...poor gal..geet think wat if maan is like brij 🤢🤢😆 hope he is not 😆😆
waiting for next..cont soon
thanks for scrap😊

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Thank you 
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Originally posted by: -Orchid-

congrast for new story
Loved the CS



Thanks 
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Nice start kriti, hoping to see more wonderful updates from you.
Do continue soon waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhi24

Nice start kriti, hoping to see more wonderful updates from you.
Do continue soon waiting...

Thanks dear 

Btw what's your name?