Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
beautiful os.
they way u have interpreted and combined the scene shown in sp mb is just wonderful.yes even god feels pain and krishna felt it every time abhimanyu was hit.no wonder he loved him more after all he has grown up in front of him only and abhi in his dyeing moments only remembered krishna...that was just lovely and emotional too.brilliant piece of writing.π
Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
well written dear!!
you deserve a standing ovation!!!! π
the last line is superb!! when pain pricks God!! π
Originally posted by: srishtisingh
u know u write from my fav character pov and express him so beautifully that I just loved it! really nice one
Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Such A Short And Heart-piercing OS !!!!
Originally posted by: rakshaanra
I felt so bad seeing krishna get hurt
Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-
so articulately worded ... its brilliant!! π€
the excoriating pain felt by God himself in his human form!!keep writing and enriching us with such lovely posts!
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