OS~Yeh Mohabaat Nahi Asaan, LEKIN Namunkin Bhi Nahi~ By Sarika :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys my name is Sarika I had written pages and pages of Ek hazaroon Mein Meri behna hai... And one for Arjun Har Yug Mein Aayega Ek...

Now I only watch one daily soap drama which is my fav and the show is one and only:
YEH HAI MOHABBATEIN :) love this show to bits...

Been thinking to write an OS for days/weeks and now I have finally decided to write :) hope you guys enjoy it... I will be eager to wait for your comments whether they are good or bad :p

I will be using all the same characters and my OS will be a bit diff. As this is how I prefer ;) Samjhee ya... Samjhaun ;)

COMING SOON 😉

SORRY NOT GIVING ANY HINTS IN MY OS AS I LIKE STORIES FULL OF SURPRISES 😉

PART ONE PAGE ONE..
PART TWO PAGE THREE..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A warm welcome to u dear 🤗

An other writer !!! yaay 🥳
sound really good.. will be w8ng 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to this forum dear
Amazing idea dear
Waiting for you to update you OS
Hope you update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanku thanku guys, I was here years ago and every time I forget my password than I create new account lol 😛 I am writing currently... Chat soon
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Please PM me when you update please...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART ONE:

Ishita finished her clinic in the afternoon, she was very tired and very stressed as this court case has made her life upside down :( she was loosing trust in Raman day by day, minute by minute and second by second as he is doing everything to save Shagun :(

Ishita's phone rang, it was Mrs. Kaul...
K: ishita mene Tumhe yeh Batane ke liye phone Kiya ke kalki hearing ki sari tayari hogayi hai... Dekhna yeh Teri sauton ko abhi koi nahi bacha sakenga...
I: thank you mrs. Kaul... Hum sab kal waqt pe poch jayenge... Ok bye...

She stopped at a dhaba to get some water as she was very thirsty and What she saw there was unbelievable...

Ishita: bhaya ek pani ki bottle thora jaldi please, holding her head as she was very stressed but little revealed as shaguns case was little failing... And she for sure knew everything in her life will change after the hearing...

She heard Shaguns voice, went on the side, it was like a gali, heard her saying, Raman aur kitni der lagegi...

Next minute she sees Raman walking in :(

Guess what was the convo she heard !!! Same one as the office one where Raman begs Shagun that he wants to tell the truth to ishita as she is very understandable but Shagun gives Adi's kasam and RKB again gets stuck :( when ishita heard all this she was shocked and tears rolling her eyes, but when she heard Raman saying that only we know that Adi se accident huwa hai aur tumne yeh baat mujse kyun chupayi, woh toh us CCTV clip k wajese mujhe pata chala, Mein pis Gaya Hoon in sab ke piche,

When ishita heard that she almost lost her balance, she jumped in her car, crying confused whatever words I will use will be less her own reactions where she was cussing herself as she is the one who failed to gain trust from Raman as he is the one who wanted her support and she wasn't there... She cried for atleast 45 min :'( feeling guilty...

Than she told herself, ab jo bhi step Mein uthaungi use samajdari se uthana parenga... Drives off...

She stopped at her fav coffee shop where she and Raman met at the beginning... :(

Bhaya ek regular coffee, thora jaldi please, Ishita very confused holding her head... Saw Simi and Param outside the the shop :O

Went to spy,

S: Paramji jaisa aapne kaha tha, yeh bhai ke sabse bade project baby wali ki file hai aur contract ki copy hai, isme aapko bata chal jayenga ke bhai ka total quotation Kitna hai, aur aap us Ashok ka zyada karna taake bhai ko contract mile... chalo Paramji Mein Chalti Hoon warna koi dekh Lenga... Off she goes...

P: on the phone, Ashok ji mene bola tha aapko, ke baby project ka total quotation joh mere Saale Saab ki company quote kar rahihe woh hai, 200 crores, ab hum price Kitna kaam kare toh yeh contract Hume miljaye, Mein abhi office jane wala Hoon waha pe quotation badaldunga...

A: 195 crores

Of course Ishita couldn't hear Ashoks voice,

P: Ashok ji apki awaaz thik se nahi arahihe, Thora phir se bolo... He says the figure again, A ji awaaz break ho rahihe, aapne 195 crores bola Kya ? ... Haaa... Ok thik hai toh Mein 195 crores ka contract ready kar dunga, Maaza aayega kal sale Saab ke hi office Mein he jab yeh contract Ashok ji ko milega... Meri bholi si Simo, tu haar baar Aise hi mera kaam hamesha asan karna... Goes...

I: another shock !!! Doesn't know what to do... BUT OUR ISHU BEING CLEVER SHE MADE A VIDO RECORDING... Kya karun Mein, Raman already stressed hai aur agar yeh contract unki company ko nahi mila toh USka bohot Bada nuksan hojayengi... Ek kaam karti Hoon, court Mein chaar baje jaana hai, toh abhi Mein Raman ki office Mein jakar Pehle quotation badalwa deti Hoon off she goes to Ramans office...

Over there Shagun is already there as Raman forgot to sign on one court paper, Romi already saw S with RKB and also saw her Ishita bhabhi coming,

R: Hai yeh Kya zyapa pe Gaya, ek taraf woh churail or dusri taraf Ishita bhabhi...

Ishita while coming towards RKB's office was thinking if she should tell Raman about she overheard the convo at dhaba as our ishita is always honest... Awww

I: nahi abhi Raman already itna stressed hai aur abhi important USka contract hai, Mein uske sath court hearing se Pehle yeh baat karlungi...

She bangs into Shagun, S gives Ishita dirty look, but Ishi ignores as she knows how badly she has used Raman...

I: Romi, Raman kaha pe hein, As he already saw her and Shagun had already faced each other, he told the truth, bhabhi woh bhai 5th floor Mein board room Mein hai, koi bohot important meeting chal rahihe, usne sab ko mana Kiya hai jane k liye... Thank you Romi, LEKIN mujhe use zaroori baat karni hai... Romi in his mind, zaroor uss Shagun ne kuch Kiya hoga phir se...

Ishita reaches 5th floor, knocks the door, RKB, Mihir yeh kon agaya, mene secretary ko bola tha sabko mana Karne ke liye !!

I: knocks the door again, and she decides to walk in... Everyone shocked, Raman mujhe aapse ek zaroori baat karni hai, please panch minute, obviously RKB could not say NO to such a request by such an innocent person :)

RKB: Mihir tum continue karo Mein ata Hoon...

M: thik hai bhai...

RKB: bolo Ishita, kalke court case ke bare Mein Kya Kehna Chahti ho...
I: Raman Mein yaha court case k bare Mein baat nahi Karne ayi, apke baby wale project ko lekar,
RKB: shocked !! Tumhe iss project ke bare Mein Kese bata chala...
I: Raman Kya aapko mujpar bharosa hai aapke business ko lekar,
RKB: ishita tum yeh Kya Bol rahi hon, mujhe kuch samaj Mein nai Araha hein...
I: mujpar bharosa hai,
RKB: ha pura bharosa tha... Aur hain, tum itni stress kyun hon Kya huwa hai,

Before Ishita could reply...

M: Bhai client ka conference call connect hogaya, aapko abhi ana parenga, ha Mihir kalke schedule dedo Mein bus do minute Mein aya... Ishita jaldi bolo,
I: Mein janti Hoon apke clients wait kar rahahe, yeh project ka quotation apne 200 crores rakha tha, LEKIN agar 195 crore se niche hoga toh yeh contract aapko milega warna nahi, Mein janti Hoon is contract ke liye aapne din raat ek kardiye hain... Samjhane ka time nahi hain, baad Mein samja dungi... Aap jayi, she turns back and walks off...
RKB: calls her Ihsita... She turns back, mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hain and walks in the room... Tears falling in Ishita's eyes as she felt bad why she didn't trust Raman... :'(

PRECAP: Fire Alarm... RKB's office Lift gets stuck and Ishita is the only person in the lift :(

If you like it, I will continue... If not, I will still cont... Samjhee ya... Samjhaun ;)
Please comment :)
Sarika






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Posted: 10 years ago
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its reallyy amazingg!!! i got glued to the story! great and interesting start! shocks pe shocks for humari pyaari ishu!
keepp continuinggg.. eager to read more!! plsss PM me whn u update! thankuu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!!! Plz upd8 sooner.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
So Ishu learns the truth of both Adi accident and the project file
Awww Ishu feeling guilty that she didn't trust raman
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome.She now knows about both things n even worked on one of them.WOW!let's see wat she does to other.
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