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pampz darling.. its so good to see you around.. I was so occupied with my life on previous months ... i thought of contacting you so many times but sadly I didn't got time, only praying for u and ur close peoples good health and hoping to see someday.. nevertheless let go of that now... I hope u are doing well... nd i truly hope u got rid of all ur problems and u r doing fine...
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Now lets come to the chapter... I know its in Lilliput size comparing to ur other chapters😆😆.. never mind, the thrill was totally intact even to that small chapter... ahh.. i cant say, how much i missed reading ur works... was quenching my thirst reading ur previous chapters all the time...😛😛...
Antara really did something which shocked me... I was not expecting her to try a dangerous escape attempt after seeing how much dangerous and lethal guy has captivated her... but nevermind, even the weakest of animals could show shocking courage when the course occurs.. after all its instinct of every living being to fight till the last hope existing... but I dont know how long she would be able to run away from raghu holding little chilly with her who was totally reluctant... specially I am worried about a particular thing that u mentioned about antara that her feet got numbed and mostly paralyzed in random times... nd i noticed that the unwilling event occurs whenever she is specially in mental pressure and in vulnerable state of mind... And she is totally so much disturbed currently and not to mentioned...scared of the personified danger chasing her all the way...
And raghu... well he felt some short of disturbing feeling when he understood antara's intention.. Its so mild feeling, actually the initial of something different... and i guess the conclusion of that different kinda feeling is far far away... I think currently he is disturbed cause she is not obeying him... nd I might saym she dared to disobey the most dangerous guy of the city... His condition is like the captivator who unknowingly got a tiny bit inclined towards her newly belonged fav thing!!... Like his fav toy u know... or might be his favorite pet.. I could find a similarity of Raghu and Antara's situation with an insignificant thing... some days before they were like the predator and prey now i feel like the relation they are sharing currently are kindda similar with the Bird captivated in cage and Its captivator... The captivator is providing the bird all essential things.. created a barrier if protective iron bars around in the name of cage, only in one condition that the bird has to obey him throughout the life and be with him... but the bird captivated inside loathes for freedom over every luxury its getting... nd when after some days captivator develops a trust that the bird is finally under his control and he opens the gate of cage in confidence... the bird flies away leaving him behind.
However the situation is not totally similar...here the bird is actually scared to death by her captivator...😆.. and also the captivator knew really well that his bird is trying to fly away and he is all set to bring her back on cage... Actually I felt that somehow Antara became Raghu's one of the favorite possession...😛 ... (i couldn't say precious right now cause raghu didn't developed that kindda feeling again and i dnt know if he ever be able to feel in that track of passionate lover... still i could find him as a money minded guy who knows the language of business deal only.,, antara's appearance made a little crack only but the castle is still unharmed...)...
Well Raghu's thinking about PYAR nd MOHABBAT is totally in line to his upbringing and life style he is leading all the way... Excellent touch i would say..😆😆... nd I am liking him the way he is now even i dont want him to be lovey dovey all of a sudden... Even his utter harshness has a hidden tiny concern (still unknown to him though!!).. and i quite enjoy that...😛
nd I am totally agree with shivi on the fact that even i dont want rantara marriage so soon... 😆😆.. (Hi Fi with my bacha!!!😉😆 Not because of the vabisyabani cause i remember jyotish baba's current vabisyabani that since raghu is there with antara.. the stars of Antara's fate has totally changed their courses and if they met... they will be unseperable... so old vabisyavani about first marriage and 2nd marriage is cancelled i guess...😆😆... now there is one and only star in antara's fate and that is our one and only RAGHUNATH!! r8?!!😉😆... )... I dont mind raghu;s dominating character but it will be really hard to see antara getting married to her one and only nightmere... he might kept her captivated all the time till everything get solved... be dominant on her, scare her like always... i could take all of that but getting married will totally crush the poor girl on that time and i guess she would have and she would totally be like a zinda lash after math.. with no feeling, no wish... nothing!! everythibg would be finished in her life...
But everything is up to u writer jii... U want them to get married now or later its totally on you... we are happy with everything!!... Specially me!!😆😆... I just want to read this story u know...
Dekho pampz darling excitement mein itna likh diya ki mere replyr kaa size tumhare chapter se bhi bara hoo gaya...🤣...Kya karoon... I read this story after long so bhavnao mein behe gayii..😆😆
PS: Subha Vijoya didi... Bhalo theko...❤️
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