Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 38

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My dear Yedis i know this one is a very late update but i couldnt write for long as things were not going right with me ...hope God make all wrongs right around me or give me the courage and vigor to do so ...luv u all ... don forget to gv ur valuable comments on this as without which i can not write ...this is true man ...so never be lazy to write a comment. just go thru it ...u lik it or luv it or hate it ...just pour ur every emotion in ur comments. thanks.



PART 15

Raghu slanted his seat and stretched his body on it along with Antara. Unaware of the new place they had reached, Antara layed on him in the same condition. Raghu closed his eyes and snuggled her on his chest cosily.
The sweet bell rang with a pause continuously soothing the serene atmosphere. The cool breeze entered Raghu's car and caressed both playfully. Antara gained her full sense and felt better. She slowly raised her head from Raghu's shoulder, and looked up at him. His head rested on the seat, eyes closed and body relaxed. He was in deep sleep Antara had no doubt. To her surprise, she found herself on his lap and lying on him most comfortably within his secured embrace. His left arm encircled her petite waist and rested on her bare skin rightfully, and his other arm was on her back pressing her gently on his rock hard well-built chest. Antara found her right palm resting on his which he placed on her bare waist and her other arm spreaded on his chest partially and fisted his jacket on his shoulder tightly. She looked at sleeping Chilly on the backseat once and looked out the car window. It didn't look like Nibholi village outside. Antara widened her eyes and realised the place was far away from her Nibholi Orphanage. She glanced up at Raghu once again and tried to get herself free immediately...but she couldn't break his arm lock even in his sleep.
"Raghu...!! Raghu ...uthooo...Raghu hum kahan agaye hain???? Tt...ttum hume kahan lekar aye ho ??? mm...mujhe ghar wapas jana hai...Mother ke pas !!! Raghuuu...!!! mujhe tum ghar wapas le chalo ...nai toh ...nahitoh mujhe jane do!!!... jane do na ...Chodo Mujhe ...!!!" Antara struggled within his arm lock. The uneasiness and nervousness due to Raghu's proximity came back to her in full form.
Raghu woke up and opened his eyes and found struggling Antara within his embrace. A subtle mischief and pleasure played in his deep black eyes instantly. He did not free Antara and kept on staring at her shamelessly without uttering a single word. Neither he tightened his armlock on her nor did he loosen it a bit. Antara saw a silent wicked contentment in his eyes as she struggled hard to get free.
Raghu was enjoying watching his captured innocent prey within his arms. Raghu did never have this kinda pleasure ever in his life. It was very new to him. Antara's every action was actually sparking some kind of unknown deep pleasure within his system. He felt he could spend all day night just like that holding Antara on his chest, watch her each cute nervous action, and raged struggle endlessly. The only thing that bothered him was Antara's constant silent denial to be within his arms.
He wondered how would it feel if Antara was no more scared of him and smile her cutest smile merrily at him being in his arms. Suddenly Raghu realised he just could not tolerate any kind of even mild denial from Antara for a single second. He tried to imagine how it would feel, if ANtara herself by her wish came to him and encircled his neck with her slender arms and remain in his embrace happily forever.
The trail of thoughts made Raghu more stubborn and he deliberately kept his armlock as it is on her. However, after some time exhausted Antara stopped her efforts to get free from his iron grip. She turned her anguished nervous face away from him, closed her eyes at once and became still. That interrupted Raghu's trail of thoughts.
Raghu became a bit impatient, as he never liked her silent still form. He remained silent too for few seconds thinking something, then whispered in her ear huskily : "Antara ...!!! merese ladneke chakkar mein teri saree ...toh sarak gayee !!! Abh kya hoga ??? "
With a soft gasp Antara shot opened her eyes and looked at herself with equal horror and embarracement. She was busy in checking her saree when she heard a chuckle and looked at Raghu. A wicked winning grin was there on his face. Antara's head burnt in fury as she realised Raghu had fooled her. An anguised sob escaped from her mouth and she madly started beating him with her fist on his chest and shoulder.
"Eey Rukh !!!... kar kya rahi hai ??? arey kitna maregi yaar ???"... Raghu laughed and softly held her wrist to stop her. He was extra careful this time not to hurt her injured wrist further, by holding her tightly, even with his ten percent strength. He remembered he had promised to his bappa that he would not hurt her ever by any mean even if somehow he loses his temper on her. An awefull feeling of smashing a soft innocent flower was chasing him ...disturbing him after he realised how nastily he had hurt her wrists. "She is just like a blooming lotus in a hidden alien lake ...fresh untouched and unsmelled"...Raghu thought in his mind.
Raghu kept himself being beated for sometime more ...then... "Aaaowwhh"...Raghu squeezed his eyes making a painful moan. "KKYA hua ????" Antara stopped her torture and asked with a mixture of worry, rage and a little bit of guilt in her innocent big serene eyes.
"Aur kitna maregi ???... dukhta hai...!!!" Raghu made a face holding her wrist this time a little bit tighter.
"Kahaan...dukha???" Antara looked at his eyes guiltily ...confused whether to be sorry for her deed or not. Raghu locked her eyes with his "Bhul gayi kya ? do ghanta bhi nahi hua ...tere liye saat taaklo se apun lad gaya...!!! kahan tu apunko dawa daru karegi ...ulta tu mereko mar rahi hai ...sahi mein teri na ulti khopri hai !!!"
"Nnai ...wo ...wo tumne mujhe jh...jhut kyun kahan ki meri saree..." Antara tore her eyes from those magnetic deep black pools and custed her eyes down guiltily.
"Ek to merese chutne ki koshish kar rahi thi ...aur fir achanak muh fer li aur aankhen bhi bandh kar li ...!!! KYUN ??? Isiliye apun tereko wosab kaha ...taki tu meri taraf dekhe...merese baat kare...Samjhii ???" Raghu jerked her lightly within his hold.
Few silent moments passed away. Raghu and Antara stared at each other being in each other's arms trying to understand their own mind. The sweet bell rang again and broke the unfamiliar inexplicable trance between them.
Antara tore her eyes from his eye lock :"Tumhare ...pas ...medicine ...hai??? apna jacket ...aur ...aur shirt bhi utaro ...ghao gahra hai ...hamne dekhi hai ..." Antara didn't know how she uttered those words. Did she actually wanted to take care of his injury ??? Antara asked herself. Afterall Raghu had saved her from those deadly monsters...he could have lost his own life in the process but he didn't care for his life once and saved her dignity and life both.
"Mujhe uske zakham par patti kar dena chahiye ...haan !
...Raghu bohot galat kiya hai mere sath...
Un baton ke liye main kabhi use maaf nahi karungi...
Par yehi Raghu aaj mujhe bacha liya un darindo se...
Uske jaga koi aur ladka hota toh darke mare mujhe un taklon ke hawale kar diya hota "...Antara thought rounding her eyes.
"Tu mere zakham par marham lagaygi ??? ...hmmm??? " Raghu squeezed her wrist lightly and asked her. His husky voice sounded a bit naughty and doubtful but deep inside there was a hidden pleasure mixed with hope that leaked artlessly from his tone...why he himself didn't know.
Antara didn't answer. She kept quiet for some time with her eyes fixed on her knees. Then slowly she turned her face and looked up at Raghu's eyes. She tried to read those deep calm unreadable eyes. She felt those eyes were also trying to read hers. She noded slightly fixing her eyes on his and muttered feebly... " Haanh".
A naughty but satisfactory smirk appeared on Raghu's face... " Good... chal kar de meri patti ." Raghu straightened his seat, opened a hidden chamber under his dashboard, and searched out a medicine box from it. In the process, the increased proximity with Raghu made Antara more conscious about her body. She tried her level best to keep some sober distance between them and when Raghu tried to open the hidden chamber under his dashboard...he had to lean holding ANtara on his lap. Antara moaned nervously and placed her hand hastily on his chest to stop him. Raghu simply blew her effort in vain. He scolded her "KAR kya rahi hai ??? itni uchal kud agar firse ki na ...toh tere hath pair bandh dunga samjhi !!! Patti karni hai na tereko ??? toh mujhe medicine box nikalne de !!"
The next second Raghu opened the car and came out taking Antara in his arms. Swiftly he made her stand on the ground and drew his arms out from his jacket. He kept it on the car seat and started to unbutton his white shirt keeping his eyes fixed on her.
Suddenly something stopped him. He worriedly moved his eyes from her for a second and then again looked straight at her " Antara ...!!!!" he paused for a second... " woh ..." He held her elbow with his one arm and continued to unbutton his shirt again with his other.
He moved his hand behind his back, pulled out his shirt from his jeans, and then slowly brought a dilapidated notebook in front of Antara's perplexed eyes.
Antara's eyes widened. With her both hands she grabbed the almost ruined notebook. Her whole feature went pale with pain...it was her mother's notebook !!!...it had her mom's heart felt talks towards her in her own handwriting...Antara used to read them everyday whenever she missed her Momma...where Antara herself also used to write her deep secrets. It was one of her most valuable possession on earth (her other most possession was little Chilly) which she valued more than her life and protected it till this morning so carefully.
In the morning, at her secret hideout, Raghu snatched it from her like a devil and compelled her for the devastating dayout with him. She could remember clearly that he slid her most precious treasure inside his shirt and told her that he would return it at the end of the dayout. Her eyes blurred with warm tears seeing the pathetic condition of the old notebook. She felt she lost her mom the second time and this time she would never get her back again by any means. A deep excruciating pain choked her throat. She raised her pain stricken questioning eyes to Raghu but couldn't utter a single word. Few large drops of tear ran down her pale cheeks.
Raghu knew how significant the notebook was in her life and he was the only reason for such a pathetic condition of it..." Woh...apun yeh... shirt ke andar rakhatha back pe ...un taklon ne jitney bhi war kiya mere peeth pe ...teri iss notebook ne jhel liya aur ...aur mereko bacha liya..." ...for the first time a tinge of guilt was mixed in his dominating husky voice. Raghu held her by her elbows and looked at the ruined hard cover notebook, which Antara was holding in her hands like her baby.
She was hurt...enormously hurt. She would never be able to forget this horrible day with Raghu...one by one each incident of the day was thrashing her internally damaging her to her core and almost making her lose her mental balance. How should she react with Raghu after this, Antara was not sure. She was numb with pain but her mind reminded her she had seen Raghu's white shirt went stained with blood instantly when those thugs started kicking him ruthlessly.
Raghu was lying on the highway on his chest still and the thugs were stabbing Raghu's back mercilessly with their nailed boots...the horrific scene instantly came in front of Antara's eyes. Though there was excruciating pain in her heart for her Mom's notebook, still she couldn't resist herself to think, what would have happened if this hard cover notebook of her momma didn't shield Raghu's back. The notebook had literally saved Raghu's life and thus saved her too.
Raghu was gawking at her every move trying to read what was going in her mind. He was expecting a blust. But, Antara proved him wrong. She wiped her tears with the back of her palm quietly and looked up at Raghu's eyes. For the first time those deep black pools were not unreadable to Antara ...to her surprise those deep black eyes were warm sorry and guilty. "Kya Raghu ko sach mein itna bura lgaraha hai???? meri momma ki aakhri nishani uske waje se abh na hone ke barabar hai !!!..." Antara gulped her painful sobs. She stood still facing him with the notebook in her hand.
"Abh tu apunki ... patti nahi karegi ...hai na ...????? " Raghu's deep husky voice roamed in her ears. "Apunki wajese teri ma ki akhri nishani ...abh ..." he didn't finish.
Wiping her tears again Antara handed Raghu the notebook like her baby and took the medicine box from the car making him stunned. Taking few moments more she turned him back quietly.
His shirt was frayed pathetically n stained with his blood. Anxiously Antara pulled his shirt out from him and she could see his whole back in front of her eyes. Antara's mouth opened in surprise as she noticed how the hard covered notebook had miraculously shielded his back and by God's grace his spine was totally scratchless but the sides of his well built back had a number of cuts and scratches...strangely those were not deep. Antara sighed and thanked to God and her Mom.
Raghu kept the notebook inside the hidden chamber of his car carefully and stood facing his back to Antara resting his palms on the bonnet. Antara hesitated once but then slowly and carefully cleaned his cuts one by one and treated them with medicine. She covered each and every cut with fresh cottons and fixed bandaids on them.
Raghu was feeling her soft caring fingers on his back closing his eyes. He was very much aware of the fact that how she hesitated and how she faught with her own mind before taking care of him and then nervously wiped blood from his back and cleaned his cuts thoroughly. He was amused with the feeling of taken care by a girl ...the girl who had denied him every time...the girl whom he had trapped dangerously and brutally made her agree to marry him ...the girl who came to his life as a deal but for some unexplainable reason, Raghu couldnt endup with her. The bond or the attraction (Raghu himself was not clear which one ) became stronger as the deal got cancelled. He was sure some uncanny people were after her for some deep creepy reason and something inside him went crazy to save her.
When her soft fingers touched him ...the feeling of knowing that someone was genuinely worried and concerned for him was so new and devine to him!!! ...he felt It was amazing to be taken care by ANtara... for the first time in his life he experienced something so nice...so damn good. To Raghu it was heavenly!!!
"Raghu ... ho gaya" ...Raghu heard her cracked voice. Her voice broke Raghu's trance.
He turned to her instantly, as he wanted to see her face right then. Keeping his eyes fixed on her face, he took out his jacket from the car. He wore it on his bare torso and rested his back leisurely on his car, tugging his hands in his jeans pockets.
She was staring at the dark jungle looking actually at nowhere. Few deep silent moments passed ...Raghu and Antara stood in front of each other motionless. The bell rang again breaking the awkward silence between them and Antara looked at Raghu through her wet eyelashes and muttered in a choked calm voice... "Raghu ...!!!!" she took his name clearly. It sounded so good to Raghu ...so different. Thousands of people called him by his name...he never felt like this ever...his name never sounded so sweet so appealing so perfect to him. For the first time he realised that, his Baba Rajan naik had chosen the perfect name for him from the crowd of thousands names in this endless universe.
Breaking his stupor, Antara started again "Main ...main thak chuki hun Raghu !!!...mujhe meri orphanage ...mere ghar lotna hai ...mother ke pas ...!!! ...Meri Chilly aur meri Momma ki notebook ke sath !!! PLEASE !!!"
"Mujhme...hhh...aur sahne ki takat" she paused for few seconds staring at him and wheezed "... NAHI hai ... Raghu !!!!"
It was not a simple plead...rather it was a blunt truth of her mental state that came out straight from her heart impetuously.
Like a tipsy girl, Antara wobbled towards Raghu. She held his hand making him stunned and raised her confused hurt eyes to his ...
"Main janti hun !!!...tum mujhe pohcha doge sahi salamat mere ghar !!!...par tumhe kuch important kaam hai aisa tumne kahatha ...aur wo kaam khatam kiye bina tum mujhe meri mother ke pas nahi le chaloge... !!! Raghu ...!!! Raghu ...tum apna kaam karo ...par mujhe jane do ...tum ...tum mujhe chod doh...!!!
Matron ne kahatha shamko saat bajnese pahle wapas lotna hai ...abh to nou baj chuka hai Raghu ..!!!...mm...mmain ...Main ...Chilly ko lekar main chali jaungi ...tum fikar mat karo ...isbaar kuch nahi hoga ...hum pohoch jayenge ...please ...please Raghu please...jane do ...jane do na please !!!" Antara sobbed and wheezed and begged to Raghu fanatically.
Raghu's eyes started to harden again as he heard her ...his jaws flexed but he kept his cool. He drew his hands out from his pockets and held her by her upper arms making her wheeze again. With a sudden blow, he interchanged their position in a lightening speed.
Antara found herself leaning on the car. Her palms pinned either sides of her head and Raghu hovering on her keeping just few centimetres distance between them. The softness and warmth in his eyes were vanished and there was again that bizarre madness flickering violently which stated clearly that he wanted to possess her ...her everything at any damn cost.
She sobbed poorly shaking her head in no, and closed her eyes to avoid those penetrating dangerously dominating hard powerful eyes, which silently and calmly announced that her fervent plea have been dismissed ruthlessly.
She felt his hot breath very near to her skin...she could feel his face bent on her and he was whispering on her earlobe in his calm husky dangerously dominating voice "Tune bilkul sahi socha A-n-t-a-r-a !!!! kaam khatam kiye bina apun tereko tere mother ke pas orphanage nahi jane dega ...CHAHE kuch bhi ho jaye".
Antara shuddered hearing him and sobbed helplessly within his grip. She felt his rough thumb wiping her cheeks and heard him again questioning her... "Tu puchegi nahi ki ...WOH important Kaam KYA hai ?? ...Hmmm???? "
Antara was unable to decide... Raghu himself , his words and his voice were more threatening to her or his weird deeds that he execute on her. She sobbed more as she could clearly feel something terrible again was gonna happen with her in no time in this unknown scary noman's land...weirdly striking dark jungle.
"Chal ...main hi bata deta hun ...!!!" He paused for few seconds. But his strong masculine warmth continuously penetrated her body through his unalterable hold on her. His careful grip didn't cause her any pain but it was acutely unbreakable and unshakable for poor Antara. That made Antara feel it was like hours he was holding her like that, imprisoning her in every possible manner existed on earth.
Raghu jerked her lightly within his hold and stated gravely articulating each word densely and clearly to her head :
"Woh ... kaam...
Jo apun zindegi mein pahlibar karne jaraha hai ...
aisa kaam jo tere bina nai ho sakta ...!!!
Woh kaam ...Jo tu sirf MERE sath kar sakti hai .
Kyunke kisi aur ke sath apun tereko karne NAHI dega!!!...Samjhiii ????"
Raghu felt Antara shuddering within his hold...her eyes tightly closed. To make her look at him, Raghu this time gave her a harder jerk and Antara gasped opened her utterly innocent bewildered wet eyes.
In that dark daunting noman's land, utterly captured Antara felt, Raghu had truely become the ruler of her life and she could do nothing but obey his each weird instruction like his meagre slave.
Raghu minutely observed her every nervous helpless reaction and then drowned his deep magnetic ruling eyes in hers and declared finally what he was upto ...:
"Raghunath Naik ...Antara se SHADI karne jaraha hai !!!...
AAJ aur ABHI !!!...
Kuch hi pal mein tu hamesha ke liye MERI ban jayegi !!!...
woh kya bolta hai ????
Haanh !!!
Aajse TU Shreemati Antara Raghunath Naik ...Raghunath ki patni banegi ...Samjhiii ???"
@ Singhania Palace :
"Kuch toh zarur bura hua hai Myke aur uske gang ke sath ..." ...Mr. Veeral restlessly and helplessly blabbered staring towards Manthan and KulGuru Maharaj... "Myke ka phn ring ho raha hai par koi utha nahi raha ...KYA HO SAKTA HAI UNLOGONKE SATH ?????? akhir Raghunath akela hai aur wo SAT...!!! fir bhi Kya sab kuch GADBAD ho gaya ??? par Raghu ne to khud deal cancel man liya tha aur ANtara ko highway par chodneko razi ho gaya tha ...toh phir akhir hua KYA wahan ????"
"Boss !!! hamare aadmi wahan pohoch ne hi walen hain ...hume kuch der aur wait karnahi padega sab kuch janneke liye..." Manthan stated calmly.
Kulguru Maharaj maintained his cool. He seemed to be drowned into some deep analysing thoughts.
Ratandeep's beautiful face looked grave and calm but his eyes sparked a deep wild restlessness. He politely excused himself from everyone and returned to his own room leaving the hall where the secret meeting was held. Anxious Girija followed him quietly.
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@The lonely dark jungle
Antara froze for few seconds hearing Raghu's words. Pinned by him on the car, she blinked once at him and her brain took few more seconds to believe and realise what Raghu had said to her. She wheezed and her whole body came into tremor, as she understood her near fatal future. Yess it was true that this Raghu had saved her from those deadly thugs but that did not anyhow fade the fact in her heart that how terribly he had hurt her so far and how unpredictably dreadful person he was.
There was a high chance that Mother would cancel this marriage after knowing everything he had done with her, but now it was clear to Antara that Raghu was not going to waste any single second and give anybody a chance to hamper the marriage. He was hell bent to marry Antara and stop her every possible way to get rid of him.
Even In her deadliest dream, Antara never thought that her dayout with Raghu would end up with their sudden strange marriage. Antara's voice dried. She forgot to protest even a bit. She felt Raghu was squeezing her pinned palms in his grip. The squeeze was certainly not harsh, but Antara was not in a state to identify that. She got more intimidated by him. Her pale face and widened petrified tear filled eyes indicated how much helpless she was then and how poorly she had lost her all hopes to get rid of this terribly erratic dangerous man Raghu.
Raghu frowned at her...he left her palms and cupped her tear stricken face in his rough hard palms ...
" kYa Huaa??? Hmmm???
Ladkiyan toh vidayee ke waqt roti hai ...toh Tu abh kyun rorahi hai ???
Raghunath ki dulhan roye ...yeh Raghunath ko pasand NAHI !!!..." Antara felt Raghu's rough thumbs were wiping her hot silent tears. More tears ran down her soft cheeks.
RONA BANDH KAR...Antara !!!" Raghu's voice was extra calm and at the same time so threatening.
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@ Ratandeep's Room in Singhania Palace:
Ratandeep was greeting his teeth silently and deeply staring at Antara's smiling innocent face on his apple tab screen. "Tum jahan kahin bhi ho ...main tumhe dhund nikalunga ...Antara...!!!! u know what ..??? hume maza arara hai ...yeh jo luka chupika khel tum mere sath khel rahi ho ...am enjoying it So Much...!!! itna bechain to main kabhi nahi hua pahele jitna tumne mujhe kar diya hai ... Antara !!!" Ratandeep took out a pink beautiful rose from a nearby vase and tore its soft petals one after another. Girija gasped as she watched him to chew those petals ruthlessly staring straight at Antara's smiling face. His stare was so powerful and weirdly creepy that it was capable to melt anybody's bone in fear. His beautiful angelic face was then transformed into a drop dead gorgeous devil.
Girija looked at him and secretly sighed ... " mera Ratan baba aisa to nahi tha ...kaise aisa haiwan ban gaya ???...Bhagwaan kare yehh ladki iske zindegi mein aye aur iski sari buraiyan khatam kar de !!! Hey Bhagwan mere Ratan Baba ke liye jaise taise iss ladki ko yehan bhej do ...taki mere Ratan Baba thik ho jaye !!! iss ladki ki puri zimmedari main uthaungi Bhagwaan ...ispe koi aanch na aye yeh Khud Main dekhungi !!!!...isbaar main din raat shubha sham apni palke nahi jhapkungi ...Ratan baba ko koi anarth NAHI karne DUNGI iss masum ladki ke sath !!!!"

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@The Hall of Singhania Palace:
Manthan picked up his ringing phone and set it into loudspeaker..." Haan bolo akhir hua kya hai wahanpe??"
Manthan's grave voice slashed and vibrated along the heavy silent atmosphear of the hall. A man on the other side blurted out in a tensed fearfull voice ..." Sirji !!! yehan pe Myke aur uske pura gang ka bohot hi bura hal hai...inmese koi bhi hosh mein nahi hai ...buri tarase ghayal sab highway par pade hain ...inke gadi bhi jala di gayee... aur ...Sirji ...wo Raghunath aur uske sath wo ladki ki koi bhi atapata nahi ...!!! Mere aadmiyon ko humne jaal ki tarah faila diya hai har jagah ...PAR undono ko jungle kha gayee ya phir highway samajh mein nahi araha ...!!!
Apke kahne par mere admi ne Orphanage pe secretly khabar liya hai ...wahan toh pura orphanage pareshani mein duba hua hai kyunke Raghu aur wo ladki sham ke saat baje tak wapas loutne wale the ...par abh tak unka koi khabar nahi !!!...Mother Dorothy lagatar phone pe Raghunath ko contact karneki koshish kar rahe hain ...kuch der pahle ring horahatha par Raghunath ya phir wo ladki phone uthaya nahi ...aur abh toh koi ring bhi nahi ho raha hai ...Raghunath ka phone network ke bahar hai aisa lagraha hai ...!!!"
Manthan secretly sighed as he understood Raghu had taken Antara away from the immediate danger and his phone is now out of network range ...that meant whatever he had heard about Raghunath all were true. Raghunath was truely a rare combination of high end intelligence mixed with wacky unpredictability. His incredible expertise in martial arts ...unmatching skills in using different artilleries and most importantly his unbelievable size and strength of network made him the number one dreadful gangster of Mumbai. He is the ideal one to deal with a BIG powerful filthy rich Man like Viral Singhania !!!... "But the question is heartless Raghunath Antara ko lekar gayab kyun hua ??? usse to ladkiyon mein koi interest nahi !!! Usse toh sirf aur sirf paiso se matlap hai ...toh Fir Antara ko usne Highway par MYke ke hawale kiya kyun nahi ??? toh Kya Kulguru Maharaj ki prediction sahi hone wala hai ??? Raghunath ka ANtara se milnahi Ratandeep ke liye khatre ka shuruwat hai ???" Manthan's deep thoughts got interrupted as his eyes fell on Mr. Viral Singhania. He remembered that he was on a phone call...a deadly important phone call for Singhania family.
Manthan looked at Viral's flaming restless face and answered the man named Mukutlaal on phone... " Mukut laal !!...ek kaam karo Myke aur uske sathiyon ko hospital bhejo. Raghunath ko trace karneki har koshish jari rakhho...!!! kisi bhi tarah se wo ladki hamare hath aani chahiye ...Samjhe ????"
Viral Singhania groaned like an injured lion .. " Mukutlaal ...hume tumpar aur tumhare network par pura bharosa hai...kuchh bhi karke un dono ko dhund ke nikalo... Raghunath ne apna wada toda hai !!! ...usne ladki ko MERE kahnepar highway par nahi CHODA !!! iska aanjaam wo bhuktega ...!!! MAIN usse saza dunga ...!!! MUKUTLAAL agar tumne Raghu ko aaj hi dhund nikala ...aur ladki ko uske kabje se nikal ke hamare pas le aye toh ...toh MUkutlaal !!!...Main tumhe sone chandi se bhad dunga!!!"
"Ji Mai Bap ...!!! Mukutlaal apna jeejaan deke Raghunath aur uske sath wo ladki ko dhund nikalega...aur fir AApke hawale karega !!!!. Aap befikar raho !!!"... Mukutlaal genuinely promised to Mr. Viral.
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@ The lonely Dark jungle
The bell rang again sweetly ignoring what Antara was going through right then within Raghu's grip. Raghu left her softly and picked out his phone from his jeans. He checked the time there and buzzed the horn of his car three times. The sound of horn spreaded through the dark lonely jungle, ripping the peaceful prevailing silence.
Surprisingly the bell rang imitating his car horn just three times giving the same small interval as if answering his horn. Raghu looked around happily and stood beside Antara leaning his back on the car. His relaxed posture and the satisfaction that played on his face clearly indicated he was waiting for someone heartily.
Antara couldn't even manage the sudden shock of marriage that Raghu had given her then, when she got another shock of her life in that noman's land. Slitting the pitch darkness, few human figures were approaching them silently and cautiously. Soon they all became visible as they came from all around and stood half circling Raghu and ANtara. ANtara would have shouted in extream fear in such a situation but the shock of her marriage news took out all her energy to even shout a bit. Instead, her mouth opened and she gasped heavily widening her teary eyes. She tried to move from there impulsively when she felt Raghu had held her palm tightly in his. A feeble sob came out of her mouth as she heard Raghu assuring her : " Dar Mat !!! yeh sab mere aadmi hai"
A robust man with a ponytail came near Raghu and Antara. His sharp sparkling eyes monitored Raghu and ANtara both : "Kya Bhai kabse signal deraha hai !!!...itni der kaiko lagadi jawab dene me??? " the hidden mischief in his voice and chuckle spreaded among the other men. All started to laugh in amusement.
"Thoda rest lerahatha ..." the same amount of mischief played in Raghu's voice too. The man with ponytail looked the same age of Raghu and both highfied merrily while smirking at each other.
With widened bemused eyes, Antara listened to their conversation.
Man with ponytail :"Kya solid dholai ki hai Bhai uss Myke aur uske gang ka ...khabar mili toh ...maza agaya !!!"
Raghu : "iss elake mein abh koun khabri hai ???..."
Man with ponytail : " wohi ...woh chata hua badmash Mukutlaal !!! Bhai usko lagta hai ...apun Goa mein apna dhanda chalata hai to uske liye kaam karega !!! apun ne bhi uska galat femi dur nahi kiya ...hahahaha...balke aur badha diya...!!! Mukutlaal ko tere bareme khabar chahiyethi ...apun ne usko iss jaga se koso dur bhej diya ...HAhahahah"
Raghu smirked wiping his mouth with the back of his palm and the other men joined in laughing with the man with ponytail.
The man now gave his full attention to Antara and caressed his ponytail. His sharp xray eyes started to roam her entire body. Helpless panicked Antara didn't know where to hide herself and what to do. She moved her eyes here and there and placed her free arm ( her other arm was held by Raghu ) upon her chest feeling extreamly uneasy and uncanny. The man's amused eyes got more amused seeing her uncomfortable state. He cherished more what he was doing.
Suddenly his sea hawk like gawking got interrupted as Raghu pulled Antara behind him and stood in between Antara and the man covering Antara entirely... " ...STANLEY !!!! ...ISS LADKI ke sath NAHI !!!" . Raghu's eyes were calm but sparked lethal warning. His words in his husky deep voice were so powerful and authoritative that Stanley instantly took a step backward but his eyes oozed out mischief and pleasure. Stanley chuckled loudly : "Bhai ...Samajh gaya !!! bheja kaiko garam karta hai !!! tu janta hai na mereko ...tera yeh Stanley aadat se majboor !!!!"

To be continued...

Edited by pampz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my God! Update is here!! πŸ₯³
Res me first Pam!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Oh my God! Update is here!! πŸ₯³
Res me first Pam!! πŸ˜ƒ


its unbelievable Gundi u replied within 8 seconds ...lolzzz luv u
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is really very long update... I m really amazed how u guys penned down it so beautifully...
Meri toh heart beat hi miss ho gayee shaadi ka naam sunke...antu ka kya haal hua hoga...i liked the way se took care of his wounds n hw she medicated them...
Saree sarak gayeee...hehe raghu is so mischievous...
Awww antu ke mom ki diary hw sad...but thank god she made her mind n thougt tht diary actually saved them...
Very well written... Keep up the good work...
Edited by Rasika9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
pampu...good to see uπŸ˜ƒ
hope all will be ok soon
may all the problems u r facing go away
guess who am i ?
i changed my UNπŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update i love raghu and antara nhok jhok
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Posted: 8 years ago
res...
lil busy now couldn't read the full chapter... will unres soon.😊

Unres...

reading this story after long... so i really have to go through the last update to remember the situations..πŸ˜›
Before i start my reply... I wanna thank you sincerely that u kept my words and lessened the use of ... 'hhh' in antara's dialect. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... Thank you very much for that writer ji...
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now coming to update...

Its a bliss to imagine raghu and antara sleeping onto the close proximity on the car seat snuggling into each other nd clinging to each other as their life force depends on it...

Again we got to witness the different state of mind these two people going through. While Raghu was going through an intense unknown dangerous change which he couldn't detect himself and poor antara getting more and more devastated with the emotional turmoil she was going through...

Raghu was feeling something which he ever knew before. Living all his life through darkness, listening to guns and grenades sound as childhood lullaby, knowing the single language of money... this was totally confusing for him that something inside him making him do some activity which he never intended to do. He was supposed 2 hand over antara and geet his money but now she doesn't remain just a mere deal for him, she just went beyond that...
probably for the first time he was enjoying holding a girl into his possession, cherishing her each and every vane effort to get free of him... he was fascinating for her to some extent... each and everything must be so confusing yet over whelming for him i guess. Saving Antara's life has become like his obsessive passion rather than just a money deal... his utter dominating nature refuses to let her go anyhow... The fatal attarction is increasing day by day... against his will, again his hold... and it will never end!!..
Antara must be going through a worst mental war right now... she can't stop herself from getting captivated by this dangerous man who suddenly came and created wave in his calm sophisticated life. She is a naive normal girl... though she faced some bitterness and harshness in her orphanage life too from metrons or stella but they were nothing compared to the grave dangerous situation she is going through now. Spending nights for the first time outside of the protective coverage of orphanage and with the most dangerous gangster out there, the person who scare out her every fiber out of her, emotionally blackmails each and every moment to trick her and if raghu was not enough she faced some dangerous goons also who came to capture her, witnessing a horrible fight which she never be able to endure at ll... how emotionally exhausting and also traumatic it could be for her... Does she really deserve that?!... She was meant to spend a normal happy quite life free of any hazardous things... but alas life is not always we think it to be...

I love the touch that atara's moms diary saved raghu from getting any incurable wound so that he could also save antara from those goons. in a simple word they became each others protective charm to some extent...
Though she was upset with the devastation of her mothers last possession she agreed to aid raghu out of his gratefulness for saving her life from goon. and raghu fir the first time in life felt tenderness of woman's care in his harsh life.

She broke off... begged him to leave her so that she can move back to her normal life... but the maiden didn't know that the demon was fataly obsessed with her 2 let her go. so raghu snatched out a perfect plan to captive antara for lifetime...by marrying her and breaking her last hope...

That was the bits of rantara i liked here...

Now 2 other aspects... Thsi manthan seems a bit fighy to me now... does he has any motive against viral (good or bad i couldn't guess now)... is he purposefully contacted raghu cause he knew that he was the only one who could go beynd viral's powers?!... God knows!!.. its only my stupid imagination...
raghunath's really getting on viral's nerve...πŸ˜†

nd ratandeep.. well... his inner beast is getting more and more dangerous and destructive as he keeps waiting for his next prey...

And Lastly... Mukutlal?!!!!... God... Pampz sorry for the laughterπŸ˜†... can't you haave any other name?!!each and every time i was reading his name i couldn't stop my laugh don't know why...🀣... Stanley also added the funny beat too...


well this are from my side... I know this might not be good per your chapter... u have put on so much effort to write this during ur bizarre life phase... sorry i couldn't give a review which could be matched to the horcrux of this wonderful chapter... pray to god that everything become all right in your life and u get back the stability and inner peace.

Edited by BabyHimavari - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz



its unbelievable Gundi u replied within 8 seconds ...lolzzz luv u


Hehe...and before you could send the pm's I had already finished reading the whole chapter πŸ˜†
Love n huggies to you! Everything happens for a reason,all will be well soon darling πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wah finally the update is here..
Thank u so much for the update dr..
Super duper update as usual. .
Loved it. .
Eagerly awaiting for rantara's marriage. .
Hope u ll update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue the great work. .
Loves n hugs
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