Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 36

my dear pampz! 😃
what an update! From the begining to the end i felt like i was watching a movie 😆
No kidding girl! The whole chapter was like a perfect movie,one thing that was missing was a popcorn and a drink! 😆
Taklo ne mujhey shetty ki yaad dila di! And what a dhulai! 😆
Luckily no one was near me warna main bhi shuru ho jaati... oops! 😆
Kiya fighting scene likhti ho pampu! Kaha se seekha? 😆
My goodness! what a killer update! Pasina aagaya but fir bhi i enjoyed it very much! 😃
Again two thumps up!
A + work!
Keep writing my dear,i admire you for your writing skills. 👏
You rock girl! And continue to rock! 😃
Thank you for updating,mwaaah! Love you my pam! 😉

Awesome update

wow what un update ...👏👏👏 while reading i can see all things in front of my eyes😛... It was amazing

i enjoyed how raghu played toyed and teased antara
i knew he will teach her a small lesson for disobeying him
good that he seriously told her not to disobey him again
this will ensure that in future she will follow what he says
good he told the men that antara told that she will not go
he gave them a fair warning and hinted what was to come
so now raghu is transforming to an invincible warrior
but still he did not forget the petrified antara
he reassured her and mentally supported her well
u know i saw seeing the fight in front of my eyes
u wrote is so well realistically it was just like a film
u know i was laughing so hard when raghu called him takle
wow raghu knows all types of martial arts i am awed
but of course in this line he has to know all this to survive
u know when that man hit raghu my heart came in my mouth
i mean really i could not tolerate anything happen to raghu
aww antara she does not want raghu to be hurt any further
she is ready to even sacrifice herself for raghu wow
so unknown to her he has made a small place in her heart
good that raghu took the chance of the diversion for the call
err i am curious what veeral and manthan thought happened
i mean myke was talking suddenly they heard howls groans
did they not find it a bit fishy suspicious ?
good that now raghu is taking revenge for the attack on him
good that he made the car explode that was a wise move
now they will be stranded there that will give raghu time
but what happened to the call ? was it disconnected ?
else veeral manthan would have heard raghu scream right ?
now if they want to find out what happened to the men
they will have to take out a search party in that way
poor antara is frozen petrified in this shock and all blood
aww so raghu too finds solace and peace in antara wow
of course he loves the fighting hitting antara
not this silent shocked scared antara who does not move
good so he too heard that she has asked them to take her and leave raghu..well this gives him food for thought
finally she comes in her senses and is scared seeing all that
i guess this was too much for her to take so she reacted
love to see this slight caring raghu
like a true knight in shining armour he takes her away
wow where is this place ? i am sure raghu knows this area

terrific smashing update

What a dhamakedar...raghu style action packed update...haye kya fight scene tha...the way he burned the car...hanky se muh poochna...u hv written it so wonderfully...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

pampu u ok na ?

Originally posted by: pampz

yess dear am fine 😃 but badly stuck in some major work 😆...

am so sorry yaar i couldnt give any answer of any review ...but i will start writing the next part soon ...😃

please stay tuned...read the story updates and most importantly without which i can not get the enthu to write the next part that is ur crispy reviews ...don forget plzz haha

oh thank god i thought some thing wrong
happy navratri and shubho saradiya
no problem will wait for the update
am ever ready to read the updates
i will never forget dear

Hey dear..😃

awesome story..