Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 33

Originally posted by: pampz

ohh thanx dear ...bas dekhte jao Raghu kya kya karta hai with Antara ...he is so unpredictable u know na ... am glad yaar u read my story and liked it and most importantly u have let me know ur opinion ...thats so important ...its lik a tonic for me to write down the next chap ...

luv u 😃

love you too sweet heart

Originally posted by: pampz

No probs dear ...maine bhi toh kitni der lagadi teri story ka comment karne ...don worry ...take ur time 😃

unresed @pg44

Originally posted by: ifians

Res...
Pampu i will be a bit late in unressing... a bit busy for some days... will try to unres by weekend...okk..😛

Unres...

So finally i am here with my reply... i don't have much to say about the about.. just wanna share some feeling of mine mostly on the new characters introduced on the plot... i am quite satisfied as a reader by this chapter you know..😛... I admire the detailing u out in this chapter and finally most of the thing get cleared...
For me... i loved this chapter much more than prev once... for some reasons...
1stly it was fast paced and the story finally moved forward... Ji Mate Aapne hi kahatha story pace badhaaneko...😆😆😆am glad u liked it
2ndly finally it is revealed that why mr viral singhaniya is playing the game with an innocent orphan girl's life... though true to say as soon as u mentioned about his good looking evil son i got the indication that he somehow wanted to tie the not of his son with antara. But i was not getting why mr viral singhaniya is playing it being in dark.. he is one of the person with so much power and possession... and above all he has so much authority over an orphanage.. if he urged for antara's hand for his son mother dorothy was mostly bound to agree... and also i don't think that mother dorothy or any other person of outer world knows about ratandeep's real monstrous face under the mask... he will be surely pleased to get married to one of her dear orphan girl to such a reputed family and a reputed persons son... as i thought so...
and so i was waiting badly to know that why mr viral can't marry antara directly to his son... why he is choosing raghu to get married to antara first...
This chapter gave me the answer finally and i understood that what was the important of those astrology in the story... If someone seriously asks me i would say i won't deny or disrespect such an ancient knowledge of astrology but when with the help of some divine power people take advantage of such knowledge to destroy someones life its not at all supportable. And here they are literally going to ruin an innocent girl's life almost intentionally with a vague hope that the magic of stars may change some evil... it is eternal truth of the life that until your heart and mind decide to change and determine to leave all the evils and take the path of truth and god with all your will, u won't chage anyhow!! no one can help to change you... not a doctor, not a psychologist not an astrologer,... yes i do believe in miracles... but i also believe that miracle only happens when you try your best ti stick to ur good will... Not any power of stars but only god has the power to do miracle and he does miracle only when u are stick to goodness and kindness how much hard the path may be... In short... god helps those who helps themselves...

yupp dear , u r right ...but u know there r LOT in this world who believes in Astrology and spends millions to know the past present and future ...it depends upon a person's perception what he/she will choose to believe and follow. here in this story astrology or that Mahraj Maha pandit ka importance yehi hai ki agar wo na hote to Rantara mili nahi hoti ...LOLZZZ

3rdly, i loved that u justified why they choose raghu for the work... i was even wondering that why they choose a renowned head of the gangster world for such a small reason... but u justified that properly.. cudoes to you for that...

I can truly understand the helplessness if mr viral... a helpless father who was getting tired of his all possible way to make his son come back to his normal life... he just want his son back by any means... even for that he is ready to do anything literally!... to take any risk... when u think of logical and human side his every did looks all wrong and almost a sin to hide hsi son's evil heinous crime which is literally encouraging him to do be more and more evil... but if u think of a father's POV.. .. he just can't leave his only son like that...
In this case.. i really feel that people have to be strict for greater good... its not an easy work for everyone but finally its good to accept that devil could never change he may be in disguise but soon the mask will be fallen apart.. Mr viral is going through such a dilemma...
Even feeling bad for girija.. she brought him up like a mother and going through this horrible phase... it must be so hard for her to see that her love and care couldn't withdraw the evil from his ratandeep's inside..sigh!!

Yup ...true 😃 Mr Veeral and Girija loved ratandeep more than their life...and they r severely stressed up and drowned in frustration and grief. It is said that human being is in the weakest and most vulnerable situation when they are emotionally down. they opt for wrong ...they become less cautious and put themselves in danger ...😲

And Ratandeep... well... i am now definite that he is gonna be the most darkest and character of the story... a really true evil with all black shade...and also so much twisted... drawing such character is not an easy work... u are doing a really great job dear...

and i liked the character manthan... i feel he is the only sane character now in singhaniya house... who really knows that what a heinous act his master is going to do for the sake of his son.. he didn't want to be a part of all these but he is helpless... but even being in plan he is alert and trying ti find a ray of hope in all these.. he still think of teh innocent girl and it seemed like god has granted this only sane man's wish... see i told u naa... miracle truly happens and this time i think miracle happend through raghu...they choose the person on their own who was destined to massacre all of their superb tight gripped plan...

Yuppp that is what my story is based upon...😆

and kulguru maharaj jyotish baba...😡... i am sorry pampz but i really feel like beating him like hell with my jhadu and danda...😡😡... seriously man... he is the most hated character for me in this story... sare fasad ki zad...🤢... man if u have such a great knowledge of stars use it in great human works.. make other's life beautiful through ur knowledge.. knowledge is meant to make human life beautiful and developed not to ruin someone's life for other person's sake...i am seriously disgusted by this jyotish baba...😡😡. please pampu its my req... in the end of ss please somehow make this kulguru maharaj beaten up by jhadu and dand...😡😡... i will get the biggest peace of mind!!!

Dekh yeh kulguru agar na hota toh aise ajeeb tarike se Rantara ka milan nahi hota ...kahan yeh nibholi village usme chotasa Orphanage ...duniya ke ek kone mein kisiko kuch khabar nahi ...aur kahan tha Raghu Mumbai ka underworld badshah...in dono ka milan kabhi nahi hota...yeh kulguru ne singhania ko suggestion di tabhi toh yeh story bani 😆

one important point.. it's mentioned that one of the girl was successful to escape from devil's clutch... they don't know if she is allive or dead, may i guess that the girl may play an important part in the story and do a comeback?!

wait and watch...😆😉

Not to say much about rantara and chillies scene was so magical... not to say nything about that... a gem scene from the update..👏👏

Ji thankyou

And fadu moment when jyotish baba made announcement that how raghu gonna be the thorn on their pathway... imagining all viral family members face was just a treat... only manthan ji's dil bole hadippa😆... and baki sab ko lag gaya sadma...🤣... kya kahoon.. ab kundo khud ke khode huye gadhe mein...😆

so mr singhaniya decided to cancell the deal... wonder what will be raghu's next step... u told me already that anything could happen in story... so i won't be shoccked if raghu actually leave antara allone on the road and go out of nivoli forever.. then i will be waiting to see that how their path crosses again...
in one word ready for anything which comes next...😆

Haha ...kuch bhi ho sakta hai ...just stay tuned ...

chalo i am putting down my pen here... will be waiting for ur next update...😳

Thank you dear for reading my story and commenting on it so genuinely ...loved it and tonic bada bottle mil gaya to write the next chap...😆

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Originally posted by: pampz

Dekh yeh kulguru agar na hota toh aise ajeeb tarike se Rantara ka milan nahi hota ...kahan yeh nibholi village usme chotasa Orphanage ...duniya ke ek kone mein kisiko kuch khabar nahi ...aur kahan tha Raghu Mumbai ka underworld badshah...in dono ka milan kabhi nahi hota...yeh kulguru ne singhania ko suggestion di tabhi toh yeh story bani 😆

Tu joo bhi bol... haan mana ki unke wajah se rantara mile... but still i can't forgive him for his sins... mujhe guru ji ki pitayi dekhni hain bas... woo bhi jhadu aur dande kee doze kee sath...😡😡😆

Heyy pampz..hws u??

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

Heyy pampz..hws u??

me suchi...

sorry fr not commenting so long on ur stroy...will comment soon dear.

aww my poor antu does not know how to wear a saree
she is angry at raghus close touches and proximity
she may be also is angry at her own reaction to some extent
aww she wants to go away from raghu after getting chilly
but i am sure fate has some other plans for her already

i do not like ratandeep much he is creepy and eerie
omg then does this mean he is lunatic phycho ?
he should be in an asylum not in normal place
veeral knows this yet he is blind in his love for his son
omg this means there were other girls before ?
who were brought to ratan to bear his child ?
but he some how made them run away dam
jail means he has killed all the girls before ?

shit does ratan feel antara is just a toy ?
that his dad will buy her for him and give him ?
she is a living walking talking human girl u moron
veeral tries to remind his son to behave with antara
but i am sure it will go down the drain too
i am too curious to know what happened last time
that the mere recollection caused ratan such a strong reaction

i love raghu chilly scenes
they bring out the humane factor in him
i also enjoy when he steals glances at antara

aww he gave chily to antara as she was so eager
chilly seems more comfortable with antara here
aww rantara will make such cute n sweet parents for chilly

haha i loved raghu calling antara cry baby
that too in front of chilly

omg chilly wants rantara as her parents
i understand how shocked both were to hear this
antara will be more shocked i am sure
aww i love how cutely sweetly chilly is explaining
as to why she needs them as her parents
aww she started crying feeling that neither of them were hearing her
chillly persisted in her mission manao rantara as parents
oblivious of the fact that this was a bit complicated matter

wow so raghu took chilly and explained her
that they were unmarried so could not be parents right now
but once they are married they will be her parents
i have a gut feeling that he will keep this promise
he can never break the heart of a small child
some where he too is like a child who is lost

wow so now raghu is admonishing antara
he is explaining her the pain of a childhood without parents
now chilly is happy and satisfied so she stopped crying
i am sure raghu will definitely fulfill this promise

ok so this is a guruji for the singhania family
seems veeral and guru ji has a strong belief on astrology
seems manthan is a good guy and he does not like this work
manthan knows ratan so well then
this means manthan still has a good heart
may be in future he can be an aid to antara if required

baapre so antara has 2 marriages ? how ? why ?
one will work and another not work ?
why such strange combination ?

what a ghatiya plan this is
for them raghu will marry her before the world
then soon raghu has to hand her over to this ratan
means 1st marriage will then end and not work
then 2nd marriage has to work
this is such a twisted and cruel plan

what ? not a single girl is alive from before ?
so he had killed all ? how ?
with his brute strength ?
or err while trying to rape that girl ?

i dont want antara within a miles of this family
marriage and child to door ki baat hai
yuck so veeral and manthan tried to stop ratan
but he some how managed to out do them
they had to dump the bloodu bodies some where
dam this ratan should go to an asylum
he is a bloody criminal

so he raped that classmate at 17 yrs age ?
why manthan is still supporting veeral ?
he should know by now that a demon cannot be cured ?
why is he still in this job ?
i wish some one exposes this father son duo
society needs to be cleansed of such ailments
this is not even an ailment this is cancer to society

o mother dorothy she does not know what a web has been spun for antara
she would raise a hue and cry then raghu would tell some cock and bull story
and that would be the end of antara

hmm so veeral manthan chose the right man
who will do anything to get some money

i want to sap manthan now
after being a part of this heinous plan
he has the audacity to be guilty and feel bad ?
does he have a conscience ?
how did he agree to this puke worthy plan ?
does he have his children ?

wow i loved this video of raghu
seems he is not very easily impressed
hmm so he is not easily attracted
he has a stone mind control power

oh wow so raghu is not at all the right man for this job
finally i heard something for guru ji that i loved to hear
so raghu meeting antara was bad for ratan
rantara marriage will be doom for ratan
oh pampu please make rantara marry RIGHT NOW
so now guru finds it impossible
to free antara from raghu and get her for ratan
omg this is honey to my ears

good that ratan heard what guru said
good ratan now forget antara
foo manthan is happy to hear this
now i can be a bit soft on him

hmm so veeral feels that if he cancels the deal
raghu will never meet antara again
he will also forget her and move on
err mr veeral may be u r a bit wrong here
dam so veeral has also planted his spies after raghu

wow manthan has to call raghu
he has started liking raghu
may be hearing that he can be ratans nemesis
wow i hope these 2 men share a good bond later

oh god antara feels that raghu will hurt chilly
no antara that is impossible
raghu will never do anything to hurt chilly
she wants to get out of the marriage some how
haww raghu can read antaras mind so well
he cautioned her to not play any more games
else she will lose and have to suffer later
he also reminded her that she lost the challenge
so she cannot back out of the marriage now
omg hahaha raghu warned her that he will kiss her lips
o raghu no need to warn her just do it already
antara is so perplexed hearing this from him haha
wow raghu also noticed that she cannot wear the saree properly
nothing can escape from his alert eyes i feel

poor antara worried tha tshe will be late to reach
chilly does not have any idea of the turmoil in antara
chilly feels that antara is still angry on her
children are so oblivious to the agony of adults

raghu steals glances at antara when she is sleeping
he secretly admires her are gazes at her
raghu regretst and repents for his bad behaviour earlier
good he promises himself that he will not repeat that

i wonder why manthan was silent for a while
and also why did he sigh before he spoke ?
may be he wanted to convey raghu a secret message
but as veeral and guru ji were there he was unable to do so ?

raghu understood so easily that the caller was not the boss
but a mere subordinate..he is really brainy i agree

new voice must be veeral

veeral unknowingly gave raghu a clue
when he said that he will explain mother
sorry pampu i forgot this
did veeral ever come to mother before ?
may be for donation ?

wow raghu did a really good move
he told veeral to send him a confirmation mail
now he can track the mail id

so he will return the 1 crore too ?
may be he can track the man
who will come to collect the money ?

good that he saw the spy who was following him
hope next update has some good scenes of raghu in action

1 request pampu

please make rantara marry soon asap
i dont want antara to go to that demon

terrific smashing mind blowing update

sorry for the rather essay length comment
i was commenting as i read

😳😳

Originally posted by: rima4ever

aww my poor antu does not know how to wear a saree
she is angry at raghus close touches and proximity
she may be also is angry at her own reaction to some extent
aww she wants to go away from raghu after getting chilly
but i am sure fate has some other plans for her already

Yuppp absolutely 😃

i do not like ratandeep much he is creepy and eerie
omg then does this mean he is lunatic phycho ?
he should be in an asylum not in normal place
veeral knows this yet he is blind in his love for his son
omg this means there were other girls before ?
who were brought to ratan to bear his child ?
but he some how made them run away dam
jail means he has killed all the girls before ?

Yes he is a dangerous psycho...all of the girls died only one escaped and NO the girls were not brought by Veeral for his son ...Ratandeep himself drew his victims

shit does ratan feel antara is just a toy ?
that his dad will buy her for him and give him ?
she is a living walking talking human girl u moron
veeral tries to remind his son to behave with antara
but i am sure it will go down the drain too
i am too curious to know what happened last time
that the mere recollection caused ratan such a strong reaction

its not easy to understand a psycho's inner mind ...its complicated and it has its own logic and they know what they r doing is wrong but still they do it as they love to do it ...that is their passion and that is why they r sick and moron😡

i love raghu chilly scenes
they bring out the humane factor in him
i also enjoy when he steals glances at antara

😳

aww he gave chily to antara as she was so eager
chilly seems more comfortable with antara here
aww rantara will make such cute n sweet parents for chilly

haha i loved raghu calling antara cry baby
that too in front of chilly

😆

omg chilly wants rantara as her parents
i understand how shocked both were to hear this
antara will be more shocked i am sure
aww i love how cutely sweetly chilly is explaining
as to why she needs them as her parents
aww she started crying feeling that neither of them were hearing her
chillly persisted in her mission manao rantara as parents
oblivious of the fact that this was a bit complicated matter

wow so raghu took chilly and explained her
that they were unmarried so could not be parents right now
but once they are married they will be her parents
i have a gut feeling that he will keep this promise
he can never break the heart of a small child
some where he too is like a child who is lost

Yuppp

wow so now raghu is admonishing antara
he is explaining her the pain of a childhood without parents
now chilly is happy and satisfied so she stopped crying
i am sure raghu will definitely fulfill this promise

😉

ok so this is a guruji for the singhania family
seems veeral and guru ji has a strong belief on astrology
seems manthan is a good guy and he does not like this work
manthan knows ratan so well then
this means manthan still has a good heart
may be in future he can be an aid to antara if required

this Manthan is nothing but a follower of Veeral ...a subordinate ...he is bound to his master with his loyalty

baapre so antara has 2 marriages ? how ? why ?
one will work and another not work ?
why such strange combination ?

kya pata abh uska kundali mein aisahi hai 😉

what a ghatiya plan this is
for them raghu will marry her before the world
then soon raghu has to hand her over to this ratan
means 1st marriage will then end and not work
then 2nd marriage has to work
this is such a twisted and cruel plan

Yuppp they have planned in such a way so that Rantara marriage is bound to fail as raghu is to handover his wife to singhania ...if a husband wd do such thing how a marriage could work ...isnt it ?😭

what ? not a single girl is alive from before ?
so he had killed all ? how ?
with his brute strength ?
or err while trying to rape that girl ?

Yuppp all the girls died ...one escaped...how i will reveal it in a sane manner

i dont want antara within a miles of this family
marriage and child to door ki baat hai
yuck so veeral and manthan tried to stop ratan
but he some how managed to out do them
they had to dump the bloodu bodies some where
dam this ratan should go to an asylum
he is a bloody criminal

😡

so he raped that classmate at 17 yrs age ?
why manthan is still supporting veeral ?
he should know by now that a demon cannot be cured ?
why is he still in this job ?
i wish some one exposes this father son duo
society needs to be cleansed of such ailments
this is not even an ailment this is cancer to society

Yuppp u r right ...Manthan is a man who is blindly loyal to Veeral but he is revolting inside his mind lets see what happens

o mother dorothy she does not know what a web has been spun for antara
she would raise a hue and cry then raghu would tell some cock and bull story
and that would be the end of antara

hmm so veeral manthan chose the right man
who will do anything to get some money

😃

i want to sap manthan now
after being a part of this heinous plan
he has the audacity to be guilty and feel bad ?
does he have a conscience ?
how did he agree to this puke worthy plan ?
does he have his children ?

wow i loved this video of raghu
seems he is not very easily impressed
hmm so he is not easily attracted
he has a stone mind control power

oh wow so raghu is not at all the right man for this job
finally i heard something for guru ji that i loved to hear
so raghu meeting antara was bad for ratan
rantara marriage will be doom for ratan
oh pampu please make rantara marry RIGHT NOW
so now guru finds it impossible
to free antara from raghu and get her for ratan
omg this is honey to my ears

Lollzzz yes i know that ...

good that ratan heard what guru said
good ratan now forget antara
foo manthan is happy to hear this
now i can be a bit soft on him

haha

hmm so veeral feels that if he cancels the deal
raghu will never meet antara again
he will also forget her and move on
err mr veeral may be u r a bit wrong here
dam so veeral has also planted his spies after raghu

Yuppp Raghu knew from the very first day that he is being spied

wow manthan has to call raghu
he has started liking raghu
may be hearing that he can be ratans nemesis
wow i hope these 2 men share a good bond later

well i don knw what will happen inn future 😉


oh god antara feels that raghu will hurt chilly
no antara that is impossible
raghu will never do anything to hurt chilly
she wants to get out of the marriage some how
haww raghu can read antaras mind so well
he cautioned her to not play any more games
else she will lose and have to suffer later
he also reminded her that she lost the challenge
so she cannot back out of the marriage now
omg hahaha raghu warned her that he will kiss her lips
o raghu no need to warn her just do it already
antara is so perplexed hearing this from him haha
wow raghu also noticed that she cannot wear the saree properly
nothing can escape from his alert eyes i feel

😳 Yuppp Raghu notices all about antara

poor antara worried tha tshe will be late to reach
chilly does not have any idea of the turmoil in antara
chilly feels that antara is still angry on her
children are so oblivious to the agony of adults

😊

raghu steals glances at antara when she is sleeping
he secretly admires her are gazes at her
raghu regretst and repents for his bad behaviour earlier
good he promises himself that he will not repeat that

i wonder why manthan was silent for a while
and also why did he sigh before he spoke ?
may be he wanted to convey raghu a secret message
but as veeral and guru ji were there he was unable to do so ?

Dear who else other than you can notice this ???? yyesss u r right 👏

raghu understood so easily that the caller was not the boss
but a mere subordinate..he is really brainy i agree

new voice must be veeral

Yuppp the father has become restless and nervous

veeral unknowingly gave raghu a clue
when he said that he will explain mother
sorry pampu i forgot this
did veeral ever come to mother before ?
may be for donation ?


Yuppp in the very first chap of this story ...even Veeral gifted dresses to all girls who were going to get married ...even to antara also ...they met at a mall ...remember the fist interaction Raghu and Antara ...where raghu comes from behind and ***** haha the story started from there only ...

wow raghu did a really good move
he told veeral to send him a confirmation mail
now he can track the mail id

so he will return the 1 crore too ?
may be he can track the man
who will come to collect the money ?

Yuppp may be

good that he saw the spy who was following him
hope next update has some good scenes of raghu in action

1 request pampu

please make rantara marry soon asap
i dont want antara to go to that demon

lets see whatt happens ...anything can happen in this story ...stay tuned 😃

terrific smashing mind blowing update

Thank you dear

sorry for the rather essay length comment
i was commenting as i read

Do you have any idea how much pleasure u have given me with ur awesomely written comment ???? u hv given me my tonic to write down the next ...i have got such a wonderful dhamakedar review after a looong loong time ...am elated that u read and liked the update ...and took ur sweet time to write this analytical review ...

welcome back Rima ...

luv u 🤗

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thanks for your replies Pampu 😃
sorry i was a bit late to comment
but your story is just so perfect
that i feel it is an insult to the story
if i do not give a long well described comment
u also told me that u love long comments
of course i read the update very thoroughly
by the time i am writing this response
i have read the update thrice already
will read it many more times till the next update

Pampz wht n update...kya likhti hain tuuu...it was a very long update...its really amazing...hatts off to u all qho write such long n beautiful updates...