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Guys here is ur "Sathiya ...Yeh Kyun Kiya" part 12 . let me know u liked it or not 😳 ur opinions are soo sooo important u know 😆😆😆

PART 12

Antara never wore a saree all alone ever. She missed Nandini and somehow managed to wear her saree after Raghu left her in the cottage. The pleats were horrible and the drape was wrongly done she was sure...but she covered herself properly upto her satisfaction. She moved near the mirror and found herself wraped up in saree weirdly. She looked pale drained out and intensely stressed up. Antara didn't have any energy left to rectify her saree drapes...she let out a deep sigh and sat on the bed folding her knees and burried her head in between hugging her knees. She closed her eyes and waited impatiently for Raghu...who had promised her that he would bring back her dearest Chilly into her arms.
The sensations of Raghu's proximity, started roaming in her head without her consent...she being on his lap...hugged by him so securely so strongly ...his assurances and consolations on her ear in his husky voice ...he rubbing and thumping her back and head gently ...he soothing her rocking now and then like a doll...then he, nuzzling her hair lightly and keeping his lips pressed on her bare shoulder holding her tightly on his rock hard chest spreading his manly warmth to her each and every cell like she was his always and forever...Oh God !!! never ever anyone has touched me the way he touched me today !!!...Matron aur Mother ne sikhayatha ...shadi se pahle ladki ko koi aise nahi chu sakta...aise chuneka haq sirf uska pati ka hota hai !!! toh phir mere sath aisa KYUN hua ????? mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai abh main kya karun ???...bohot gussa aaraha hai uss Raghu par !!!...Orphanage wapas jatehi mere shakal dekhkar hi Metron ko sab pata chal jayega ...tab kya hoga ??? Antara shook her head in confusion fear and extreame uneasiness.
Bas Chilly mere paas aa jaye ...abh marke bhi usse apne se dur nai jane dungi ...!!! wapas jake hi saabkuch ...Raghu ne jo kuch bhi kiya mere sath ...SAB kuch mother ko bata dungi ...kaise usne mujhse shadi ke liye han kahalwaya aur fir kya kya kiya mere sath !!!...fir Mother khud hi yeh shadi ke liye mana kar dengi ...haaan...fir Raghu kuch nahi kar payega!!!...please Bhagwan aisahi hoga na ??? BHagwan Pleeease ...mmm...mujhe iss pagal ajeeb khatarnak ladke se bachalo ...!!! Mujhe ek achhi zindegi jeene dona Bhagwan meri Chilly ke sath !!! Antara prayed to God ardently.
Far away from "The Nest" Resort ...in a small island outside Goa...inside Sighania Palace :
The huge breathtakingly beautiful Singhania Palace was built on the edge of a cliff in a small island outside Goa. Ratandeep was in his personal room in Singhania Palace. The balcony of his room was jutted out into space above sea ...crushing waves below. Ratandeep was deeply staring at a girl's picture on his apple tab screen...resting his back on his balcony railing. A smiling picture of Antara was dazzling there. The same picture that was sent to Raghunath along with the deal. If anyone would see Ratandeep like this, he would definitely assume that this awesomely handsome looking guy has fallen for this girl head over hill. Girls would envy the girl in the picture for conquring this filthy rich dropdead handsome guy's heart. But if someone drown into his eyes and reach his mind, would definitely shudder in terror seeing the insane inhuman unspeakable intentions floating their for the poor girl.
Mr. Veeral Singhania looked at his son through the creek of the door and let out a sigh. An elderly woman in specks neatly clad in cotton saree was also standing beside him. She was in Singhania Family to take care of Ratandeep when he was just a 4 year old motherless child. Girija loved Ratandeep dearly exactly like Mr. Veeral Singhania did to his son. Girija looked at Veeral and whispered : Malik !! aap abh chinta karna chod dijiye ...Ratan baba abh bilkul thik ho jayenge ...yeh ladki sabh kuch thik kar degi ...aisa mera man kahraha hai ...jo ki pahle kabhi nahi hua ...!!! aap sirf iss ladki ko la dijiye ...ladki sahi salamat rahe is palace mein , iski zimmedari yeh Girija leti hai!!!
She sighed a bit and continued in a muted tone : Ratan Baba ka dimag mein shaitan jab jab baithega ... main ladki ko Ratan baba se dur kar dungi ...ladki ko kuch nahi hone dungi ...aap isbaar befikar raho ...yeh ladki Singhania parivar ko zarur waris degi ...yehi kahatha na Kulguru Maharaj ne yeh Ladki aur Ratan baba ka kundli vichar karke???? Iss ladki ko orphanage mein dekhneke baad mera man bhi aisahi kahta hai Malik.
Mr. Veeral sighed again ...: Par Girija !!! tum janti ho na ...Ratandeep ka demag padna kisike liye bhi asan nahi hai ...wo kab kya karega kisiko kuch pata nahi chalta ...uska ajib dimag kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai hum sab jante hain...pita hun firbhi isse rok nahi paya ...nahi isse jail mein sarneke liye bhej paye...main khud bhi ek gunahgar ban chuka hun...Mr. Veeral stopped gulping the severe stress and sadness.
Suddenly Ratandeep stirred from his position and looked towards the door...Dad !!! aap yehan ???
Haan ...wo main apne room jaraha tha ...tumhe dekha to ruk gaya ...waise kar kya rahe ho tum ...iswaqt apne room mein????? Tum to iswaqt ...gym mein hote ho !!! ...Veeral asked his son with a forced smile on his face.
Ratandeep grinned naughtily. His face lit up with his beautiful grin and he came near his dad leaving the balcony...Dad !!! u know everything ...!!! wo main usse dekhrahatha ...he paused for few seconds and looked at Veeral's eyes...: I promise Dad ...I wll be nice with her ...please aap Antara dedo mujhe !!! Please Dad Please !!! Ratandeep held his Dad's hands eagerly.
Veeral smiled and patted his son's back...: Kulguru Maharaj aaane hi wale hain ...wo sahi muhrat batayenge to bas ...usi muhrat se Antara tumhare paas hogi ...!!! But ...My Son...
Yess Dad ...mujhe yaad hai ...main Ant...Antarake sath ... koi ... koi harkat... nahi karunga !!! ...Ratandeep custed his eyes down from his dad's stern eyes...his grin disappeared from his beautiful face.
Haan ...yehi tumhare liye aur Singhania Parivar ke liye achha hoga ..warna tum jante ho kya ho sakta hai ...pichlibar toh...Mr. Veeral stopped abruptly as Ratandeep started panting hard. Tiny drops of sweat appeared on his soft fair forehead. Girija caressed Ratandeep's head lovingly and said : abh bas bhi kijiye Malik...pichlibaar ki yaad mat dilaiye ...Ratan baba...bolrahe hain na ...unpe bharosa kijiye ...!
Mr. Veeral Noded doubtfully and left from there leaving an instruction for Girija...: Girija sham ke thik sat baje Ratandeep ko niche le aana ...Kulguru Maharaj ji samay ke pakke hain.
At "The Nest" resort :
Around 6.30 pm Raghu reached the cottage and entered the bedroom where Antara was waiting for Chilly with all her hope. Hearing Raghu's footsteps, she raised her head weakly from her knees and looked eagerly at her front. Raghu was standing in front of her with sleeping chilly in his arms. His calm eyes fixed on Antara emanated an unknown pleasure and mischief.
She spreaded her arms quietly in front of him but her eyes said how much heated she was due to him and, how eager she was to take Chilly in her arms. Raghu paused for a second staring at her longing painstricken heated eyes and then gave Antara back her living doll in her arms gently. Antara wheezed and held Chilly ardently and pressed her on her chest and started kissing and caressing her little doll showering all her love concern and care. A sense of utter relief and relaxation washed antara's heart and came out as silent tears from her eyes. Antara smiled with her tears in relief and joy. The warm drops of tears and Antara's ardent caresses made Chilly wakeup from her sleep.
Little Chilly became so happy and totally reliefed finding herself in the most secured and loving arms on earth she knew. She dazzled her naughty giggle to Antara and Raghu sleepily and said...: Deko Ragu ...Antadidi roli hai !!! ... aw puppy bhi deyi hai ...!!!
Raghu sat on the bed beside Antara and chuckled impishly...Kyunke teri Antadidi ek number ki Rondu ladki hai !!! Antara ignored him controlling her anger and irritation and caressed Chilly's little tummy and asked ..:Chilly tujhe bhukh lagi ?? kuch kahyegi???
Chilly wokeup completely from her sleepy state and rounded her eyes sitting up on her lap. She looked at Antara and a heavenly smile appeared on her face...she cupped Antara's cheecks with her little chubby palms and with a twinkle in her naughty eyes Chilly whispered ...
"Momma hh"...!!!
The next second Chilly pointed her little index finger towards Raghu and announced rightfully...Ragu Papa ...Papa Ragu !!! Chilly looked damn happy about her decision and hopped in joy on Antara's lap.
Antara froze instantly.
Raghu's impish grin disappeared.
Chilly looked at both of them and felt what she had asked for might have made both of them angry with her. Little Chilly couldn't understand why. These two are the one to whom she can ask anything on earth with full right then why the smiles from their faces disappeared????...Little Chilly thought.
Chilly tried her best to make them understand why she wanted this. ...
Wo jo Neel hai na !!!...meya dost !!! Aw fi Dooti , Guddi , Chonu , Manik ...shabki momma papa hai .!!! ...shirf Chilly ke pash momma papa nai hai ...ichliye ek gandi aunti ayithi Chilly ko le jane !!! ...Chilly kitna loyee !!!...Chilly widened her eyes fearfully and stated the fact to Antara and Raghu so that they understand her urgent need of parents and merrily accept to be her momma and papa respectively.
However, both stared at her bluntly and seemed to be lost in another world. Neither Antara nor Raghu seemed to feel to what extent the little soul was scared and felt dejected when all the parents came and took away their babies leaving Chilly alone in Toyland and then an unknown unkle and Aunty came to take her away with them all of a sudden ruthlessly.
Chilly again looked at both with all her hope ...her little heart sanked in disappointment and dejection when none of them granted her joyful ardent wish... not even responded a bit.
Who else on earth can become Chilly's momma and papa except these two ??? Chilly thought. NONE !!!
Her little cute lips curled in deep dejection and anguish and face fell. Her little heart filled up with so much of pain and anguish, wanted to explode. She couldn't manage any more.
Booo...Booo...Chilly started crying placing her little palms on Antara's cheeks...her shattered eyes poured big drops of tears and flooded her cute adoring angelic face.
Antara and Raghu's trance broke. Antara shook her head in guilt and wiped Chilly's tears from her face ...her voice emanated pain helplessness and pure love for her dear Chilly :...Rote nahi Chilly ...tu mera achha bachha hai na ??? kyun rorahi hai ??? Main hun na tere pas ...koi tujhe mujhse dur leke nahi jayega ...Main mar jaungi Chilly !!!...Par aisa fir kabhi NAHI hone dungi jo aaj hua tere sath!!! tu dar mat ...mera bachcha !!!
Chilly asked crying hard in a severely anguished hurt tone..: Chilly ki Momma banogi ??? Aw Ragu ... Papa???
Antara lost her words. Her voice choked. How would she make her doll understand that she herself didn't know when and how she had actually become her momma the moment Mother Dorothy gave Chilly's responsibility to Antara ...and she was not sorry for that but she could never ever allow that dangerous wierd Raghu to be her doll's Papa !!!
Antara caressed Chilly fanatically to stop her crying but couldn't utter a single assuring word to the demanding little innocent soul.
Suddenly Raghu took away crying Chilly from Antara's lap and placed her in his own lap and wiped her tears from her cheeks gently...: woh ...kya hai na...Chilly ...Meri aur Antara ki shadi abhtak nahi hui na ...bina shadi ke hum dono tere momma papa nahi ban sakte yaar ...!!! par yeh Raghunath terese wada karta hai ke apun aur Antara tera mabap banke rahega !!! he looked at Antara and raised his brows naughtily.
ANtara glared at Raghu with her all might and he glared back to baffled Antara and scolded her in a dominating husky tone ...: Mereko aise sherni ki tarah ghur kya rahi hai ...kabtak rulaygi Chilly ko ??? tu bhi anath hai aur apun bhi ...isliye hum dono jante hain ke bina ma baap ke yeh duniya kaisi lagti hai !!! Kaan kholke sunle Chilly hamare jaise bachpan nahi bitaygi ...!!! Chilly ki ma bap hai ...aur wo HUM dono hi hai ...baat samajh mein ayee??? Raghu neared his face to Antara's and blazed his magnetic ruling eyes on her.
Antara wheezed helplessly looking away from him. Chilly rubbed her watery nose and mouth on his shirt ... stood up on his lap and encircled his neck with her little arms, and ordered :...Ragu Papa ...Papa Ragu !!! shadi kayo jaldi jaldi Anta Momma se...!!! Chilly ko Momma Papa chahiye !!!
Fikar mat kar ..samjhi na ??? Teri yedi Mummy se shadi toh apun karke rahega ...!!! The impish confident smirk on his face was back again. He was staring at ANtara's face minutely who was then trying to be calm controlling her anger, horror, sheer confusion and helpless tears.
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At Singhania Palace right @ 7 pm:
Ratandeep was made seated in front of an elderly man in the lavish living room of Singhania Palace. The elderly man had a pleasant face with abundance of purity dominance knowledge and spirituality. He was claded in a saffron and white comibination seamless silk cloth. His thick long white hair curled near his chest. He had worn Rudraksh in his neck and wrists. His feet had a pair of distinct wooden shoes. He was glancing at Ratandeep for few seconds and then again was drowning into the paperworks spreaded in front of him on the table. His pleasant loving eyes were becoming restless sometimes ...and then calm like a deep ocean.
Mr. Veeral , Girija and Manthan Joshi (Mr. Vieeral's secretary)were only three other living being existing in the living room. All three were looking at the elderly respectable man in front of them as if he was the only hope on earth who could give life to the rest of four in the living room.
After few prolonged breathless minutes Kulguru Maharaj looked up at Mr. Veeral...: Veeral maine jo surah diyatha uska kuch hal nikala ???
Haan Maharaj !!! jaisa apne adesh diyatha waisehi kiya gaya hai. Ek banda hai ...pura Mumbai ka underworld usse maanke chalta hai ...bohot hi khatarnak aur shatir hai wo insaan...aisa banda jiske pas tez dimag hai par dil nahi hai...wo agar ekbar deal accept kar le toh marke bhi uss kaam ko anjaam deta hai !!!...Veeral paused a bit.
Manthan aur Maine bohot research karne ke baad, usse hi chuna hai iss kam ke liye. Aur Maharaj usne deal ACCEPT bhi kar liya hai. Wo Antara se shadi aagle tin din mein karega aur jab hum kahenge tab usse hamare hawale kar dega bina koi sawal ke!!!
Pura deal 5 crore ka hai ...aur hum usse ek crore de chuke hain. Aur apne jaisa kahatha, uss bande ko hamare bareme kuch nahi pata hai aur pata hum chalne bhi nahi denge!!!
Yeh ek aisa banda hai jise sirf sur sirf paisose matlap hain...he loves and worships money only in his life ...isliye agar paisa mila toh wo kaam pura karega aur kuch bhi nahi dekhega ya dekhneki koushish karega!!!
Koi bhi deal ho ...kitni bhi mushkil ho ...agar wo han keh de toh wo kaam wo karke rahta hai without any fail ...yehi uska pesha hai aur nasha bhi. Mr. Veeral completed his statement in one breath.
Hmmm... ...uss bande ka naam aur janam tareekh batao...uska kundali bhi ekbar check kar leta hun...wo banda iss kamke liye sahi hai ki nahi main vichar karke dekh lunga to mujhe tasalli ho jayegi !!! ...Veeral !!! iss band eke sath Deal final karnese pahle jaldbazi na karke mujhse ekbar puch lete to achha hota ...!!! Kulguru Maharaaj stated calmly.
Manthan stirred up on the sofa. Some unknown undefined hope floated in his pool of mind.
Manthan knew that according to Kulguru's instruction, first he had find out an orphan girl whose kundali perfectly matched with that inhumanly cruel Ratandeep. Only Manthan himself knew on earth how fatally he felt guilty to select that poor girl for that goodlooking ruthless monster.
Then the most dangerous plan of this Guru Maharaj was to get married Antara with some other guy. As according to the Kulguru the poor girl Antara had two marriages in her kundali and by getting her married with another guy she will nullify the fault of her kundali. As per her Kundali, her one marriage would not work and the other will, by every means.
Therefore a guy was needed who would be appointed to marry her in front of the world without any question and then handover her to them when the perfect time would arrive. Then the so-called first marriage would become void and the second marriage with the monster would happen irrespective of her emotional turmoil and consent.
In previous cases, not a single girl survived Ratandeep's unspeakable evil tortures except one. That unfortunate girl escaped from Ratandeeps evil grip and God knows she is still alive or dead.
However, Maharaj ji said that this poor girl Antara not only would survive but will also give a birth to a baby for Singhania family. Nobody even once thought about the poor girl's life ...nobody thought to take her consent on this matter for once.
Previously Ratandeep did masacers with different thirteen innocent girls. Only Manthan and Veeral Singhania knew how they tried to stop Ratandeep each time and how they failed to his unstoppable instinct and cunning intelligence. After he had masacered, they had to hid everytime those bloody matters one after another from the media and the world.
Ratandeep was nothing but an uncontrollable dangerous ugly mad man concealed under his super good looks. Doctors, psychologists all over the world failed to cure his mind. Who could imagine that this super handsome gorgeous Prince of Singhania Empire had such a mad horrible heinous mind? His first victim was his own classmate when he was just 17 yrs old boy studying in Switzerland. He is now 25 and in these eight years, he had destroyed more twelve lives of innocent girls. Manthan knew Antara would be the fourteenth.
Manthan did not believe this Guruji's predictions about Ratandeep's cure through Antara but Mr. Veeral begged him to support Singhania family for the last time and Manthan badly wanted to end this vicious thing by any means. This time Manthan himself and Mr. Veeral both were extra cautious so that not a single bit of this evil procedure of curing Ratandeep leaked outside Singhania Palace.
That was the reason why an orphan girl was chosen for this secret inhuman selfish act, so that, nobody would ask a question or raise a doubt if she went missing form this world all of a sudden.
There was only one problem and the name of that problem was Mother Dorothy, the pious loving soul of Nivoli Orphanage. When Antara would go missing, this lady would definitely interrogate the socalled husband of Antara, who they have selected to get her married with first. However, Mr. Veeral and Manthan are confident about their selection. The hired man from Mumbai underworld, Antara's so called first husband, is to take the whole charge of Antara's missing incident and tell a believable story to the world !!!...and why shouldn't he ??? He would be paid heavily for this and he is the one who is an expert to give a perfect shape to any damn impossible thing.
This man is hell professional and extreamly loyal when it comes to his work. He would certainly not leak any information about Antara's missing mystry, which could harm his client's interest. Manthan shook his head slowly ...wo chahega tab bhi koi information kisiko de nahi payega...First he is totally in dark about who had given him that 5 crore unusual deal and secondly and most importantly the moneyloving person would never do anything stupid to miss that huge amount of money. Mr. Veeral and Manthan himself had chosen that perfect man for this horrible job ...an emotionless dangerous hungry MoneyMan who could go and break any damn limit just to get his money.
Manthan closed his eyes and squeezed them feeling extremely guilty and chargeable for the innocent girl. He badly wanted someone to come and destroy Ratandeep's evil existance. Unknowingly he generated a faith on the miracles and prayed to God that he shower some supernatural power to the poor unfortunate girl Antara to make THE END of the DEVIL.
Manthan !!! please give the details of that guy to Maharaj ...Mr. Veeral softly ordered him breaking his trail of thoughts.
Manthan looked at Mr. Veeral guiltily...Sir ...i know his name ...BUT uska janam tareekh !!!! ...hhh... hume nahi pata ...khud usko bhi pata nahi hoga.. Sir!! suna hai wo ek anath hai !!!
Mr. Veeral looked at Kulguru Maharaj helplessly.
Maharaaj smiled a bit pleasantly...: itna pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi Veeral ...uska naam aur umar batao... aur haan !!! uska koi tasveer hai to mujhe dikhao !!! ...usse bhi kaam chal jayega ...insaan ka naam aur kapaal (Forehead)dekh ke bhi main uska bhagya aur lakshan bata sakta hun.
Mr. Veeral gestured Manthan to give Maharaj ji all the details. Manthan noded and placed a laptop on the table in front of Kulguru Maharaj. In a soft mechanical voice, he said...:
Maharaj ji uss bande ka naam Raghunath hai ...Raghunath Naik !!!! umar lagbhag chouvis pachhis sal ...aur yeh ...he pointed towards the computer screen...a video appeared on the screen...he put his index finger on a young robust iron figure and muttered ...: Maharaj ji YEH Raghunath hai !!!
It seemed the footage was taken when he was present in some kind of party thrown by one of the most influential and powerful person of Mumbai. The influential man was talking to him in an overly pleased manner ...trying to satisfy Raghunath desperately and Raghunath was simply not paying any heed to him. He was casually sipping some drink and purposely looking here and there.
Clad in a dark blue jeans and a check shirt paired with a silvery grey jacket he looked a different tough guy among the lot. His thick black hair carelessly fell in front of his eyesight ... his rock hard chest had an unusual sword locket peeping from his shirt...he gripped a drink glass in his right hand and his simple grip stated his toughness and his iron wrist was encircled with a wrist band and a hanky which enhanced his unusual attractive looks. His stern face, perfectly welbuilt body and calm deep eyes reflected his stubbornness, determindedness and ferociousness of his character. His gun peeped through his jacket that he tugged in his jeans most casually.
The party thrower called up an young beautiful girl and asked her to entertain Raghu. The girl started dancing with the music around Raghu and tried to attract him desperately by hugging him. It seemed he was not at all affected by the physical proximity of that beautiful girl. His body language clearly stated that. The video clip ended where Raghu sat on a lash couch with the girl on his lap and a drink in his hand ...she was busy melting her attractive voluptuous body on his chest. ...her grin indicated that she thought she was successful in her mission but Raghu's thoughtful hard face and stern eyes stuck to some other place in the party stated that he was only interested where he had some interest. ...he was not a simple guy who could be diverted or entertained by the intentional proximity of any sexy attractive woman without his own will. It was evident that he had a super control on his mind.
Kulguru Maharaj rewinded the clip and a deep frown appeared on his forehead.
Maharaj ji dipped his head down on the paper spreaded in front of him ...he became busy doing some scribbles and calculations with deep concentration. The rest of four in the large lavish living room breathlessly waited for him to speak.
Finally Kulguru Maharaj lifted up his face and directly looked at Mr. Veeral and muttered in a serious alarming tone...: Veeral yeh Raghunath iss kaam ke liye bilkul SAHI NAHI HAI !!!!!!!! tumne BOHOT badi galti kar di hai isse chun kar !!!
Iska kundali bataraha hai ke Antara se iska milnahi Ratandeep ke liye accha nahi hua. Yeh ladka Antara se shadi ki toh Ratandeep ke liye woh tabahi leke ayega .
Agar yeh shadi ekbar hogayee toh Bhagwan hi jane aage kya honewala hai !!!!! Raghunath ke hath se Antara ko wapas Ratandeep ke kareeb le aana namumkin dikhraha hai mujhe !!!!
Ratandeep's beautiful face became coal dark hearing the Kulguru. His gaze became steel hard and it stuck down on the floor ...he became tranquil as a lifeless beautiful statue.
Girija let out a fearful gasp but instantly controlled herself.
Manthan's mouth opened in utter surprise and a suppressed joy. He took a deep breath and exhaled slowly. After a long time, he was feeling to some extent relieved for the first time.
A deep hard frown appeared on Veeral's forehead. His keen intelligent mind and cool head did not allow him to react awfully but in a hard stern determind face, Veeral looked at the Kulguru of Singhania Family. A raw helplessness along with a severe urge to see his own son leading a normal life was heard in his voice :
Maha pandit Maharaj !!! ...aapne kahatha mera beta Ratandeep ki dimagi halat thik ho jayegi iss ladki ke bhagya Ratandeep ke bhagya se judegi toh !!! Yeh ladki Ratandeep ki elaaj aur dawa dono hai. Iss vansh ka waris issi ladki ki kok se janmega ... Ratandeep ki bacche ki ma yehi ban sakti hai ...sari shubh lakshan isime hai !!! aur fir Ratandeep bhi yeh ladki ko pasand karne laga hai.
Toh fir KISIBHI HALAT MEIN VEERAL SINGHANIA YEH LADKI KO HAATH SE CHUTNE NAHI DEGA !!!!! agar yeh Raghunath hamare Ratandeep ke liye aur iss vansh ke liye khatarnak hai toh fir abhi isiwaqt yeh deal CANCEL kar dete hain. Aur deal cancel hui to Raghunath iss ladki se shadi toh dur, shakal tak nahi dekhega kyunke wo janta hai ki deal cancel hone ke sath sath usse paise bhi nahi milenge !!!
Aur ...aur ...fir Maharaj ...humare aadmi hai Raghunath ke piche uska saya banke ...uska har ek kadam ki khabar humare pas pohoch jata hai ...wo ulta sidha kuch nahi kar payega !!!! Mr. Viral Singhania panted, as he stated about the nessessary steps he had taken to control, and keep a watch on Raghunath day and night.
Manthan !!!!! CALL Raghunath immediately and cancel the deal RIGHT NOW. ... Veeral ordered his secretary in a terminal tone. Aur haan... hamare aadmiyon se message bhej ke time waste karneki time hamare pas nahi hai !!!! ISSBAAR tum khud usse baat karo... aur wo deal cancel karo immediately and wo ek crore jo hamne usse advance mein diethe wo usse wapas karneki zarurat nahi yeh usse bata dena ...wo uss paise lekar chala jaye yeh deal adhura chod ke aur Antara hume mil jaye ..BASS !!!
Manthan noded in yes and picked up his phone...it had a special number especially taken to communicate with Raghunath. Till date he never spoke to him. He used his men to give him messages from different places around India and abroad so that Raghu would never be able to track down the source of the messenger...but now Manthan was allowed to talk to him ...Manthan realised he didn't know when and why he had started liking this moneyminded Raghunath a lot. Manthan took a short breath :...Sir ...am keeping the phone on loudspeaker mode .
@ "The NEST" Resort :
Chilly is quite happy now. She was assured and promised by her Ragu papa that soon he and Anta Momma would marry and become her permanent momma papa in front of the whole world and nobody would dare to take her away from them ever. Her happpyness hiked to sky limit when Raghu said that huge white and pink soft cute teddy was all her's. It was her first ever gift from her Ragu Papa !!!!! she would show her teddy to everyone in her orphanage proudly and tell everybody that her Ragu papa had gifted it to her.
She hopped in joy holding Antara and Raghu's hand on the way towards Raghu's car. Raghu grinned seeing her innocent joy and Antara's chest became heavy thinking the consequences...she was sure Raghu would put her doll in some serious trouble in future ...Ohh God howz she gonna save her doll from this Raghu??? Howz she gonna convince Mother Dorothy against this marriage???
Raghu looked at pale tensed Antara and immediately understood what was going in her mind. He stopped and leaned on her a bit. His husky dominating voice shook Antara badly ...: kya hua??? Hmmm ??? tu pakka firse koi plan banarahi hai mere khilaf chughli karneki ...tere Mother ke pas !!! dekh koi faida nahi hai ...khalipili tu apun ka dimag garam karegi aur fir pachtayegi ...aur waisebhi yaad hai na ??? ke tu shart haar chuki hai aur maan gayee hai merese shadi ke liye ...abh zada shanpatti dikhaygi na ...toh ... Raghu leaned more on her making her bend backward and penetrated his deep eyes on her...
Toh ...toh kya ...Haan hhh???? Kk ...Kya karoge tum ..hhh...Antara cried in equal rage and nervousness.
His eyes roamed from her eyes to her parted petal lips and stuck there.
KISS kar dunga teri iss gulabi hontho ko !!! ...Raghu said flatly staring at her shamelessly ... slowly an impish smirk appeared on his face seeing Antara's reaction...then he turned his face away from her and lifted up Chilly in his arms and her teddy and strode towards his duster.
Antara was standing perplexed covering her mouth with her both hands in a reflex. Instantly her brain reminded her how Raghu was touching feeling and stroking her lips with his finger , making her still by locking her both wrists behind her back in his iron grip...just an hour ago ...!!! The rage against Raghu in her mind fuelled more by his shameless arrogant words.
Raghu reached his duster and opened the rear door of it. He kept Chilly's teddy there and turned to Antara ...: yehin ghar basaneka erada hai kya ??? wapas teri orphanage nahi jana ???
Aarghhh ...!!! Antara removed her hands from her mouth and moved hastily towards him managing her wrapped up saree.
Waise manna padega kya nayee style mein saree pahnee tune ...!!! Raghu's wicked grin burned Antara as his gaze moved from her bottom to top.
Hasna bandh karo !!!...Mmm.. mujhe saree bandhni nahi ati ...aur ...hhh ...aur Matron ne kahatha na saat bajne se pahle lotna hai ...abhi time kya hai dekho ...Antara snapped at him.
Seven fifteen !!! ...: Raghu checked his watch and looked at her.. ..he knew she will start panicking knowing the time. Dar mat kuch nahi hoga ...apun Matron ko samjha dega ...he opened the passenger door for her.
Yehanse orphanage pohochneme toh kamse kam dhai ghante lag jayenge ...!!!! Iss Raghu ke wajese najane mujhe aur Chilly ko aur kitna aaj sahna padega !!!... Antara said in her mind and sighed worriedly ... She took Chilly in her arms from Raghu and climbed the car.
Anta !!!... Momma!!! Chilly paused a little before calling her "Momma" ... poor little soul couldn't understand what her Anta Momma was going through... she raised her cute naughty eager eyes to ANtara and tried to guess she was still angry with Chilly or not. When Antara smiled at her, Chilly's heart overflowed with joy. She stated her need to Antara merrily ... Anta Momma !!!Chilly ko ninni aali hai !!!Chilly rubbed her eyes sleepily.
Han ...meri godi mein so ja ...Antara muttered softly. Little Chilly kept her little legs either side of Antara's lap and placed her sleepy head on her soft chest clutching Antara's saree on her shoulder in her little fists. Chilly for a second looked up and smiled at Antara ...calling her Momma once more she closed her eyes peacefully making herself sure that she was not going to lose her Anta Momma while sleeping.
Antara hugged her little body lovingly making little Chilly feel safe and secured and thumped her little head on her chest to make her fall asleep. Chilly took only half a minute to go in deep sleep.
Raghu started his car and left "The Nest" resort behind, and drove towards Nibholi Orphanage. Time passed and it was then around eight at night when Antara felt she was just unable to keep her eyes open even for a second more. The mental trauma she had gone through the whole day and still going through while travelling with this Raghu, had sucked out her all energy. She secretly looked at Raghu once... he was flying his car in an impassive face but she could feel that he was drowned into some deep thoughts. She took a deep breath...afterall Raghu apparently was not doing anything else except driving the car and finally with Chilly in her arms she was certainly going back to her home...to her Mother.
Aur sirf ek ghanta fir Mother ke paas pohoch jayungi...Antara thought tiredly. She closed her eyes and went into deep sleep into minutes holding sleeping Chilly securely on her chest.
Raghu glanced at her and a faint smirk appeared on his face. Antara was sleeping deeply with her lips slightly apart. Her soft tendrils caressing her innocent face. She was unaware that her saree got misplaced due to little Chilly's grasp on her shoulder and lap and a fair amount of her bare buttery skin became visible to Raghu. He stopped his car and slanted Antara's seat gently to the maximum level without disturbing her sleep. Her lying body with chilly on her chest looked so tired exhausted and pale...but still her face looked so divinely beautiful and pure. He admitted secretly to himself that those parted soft pink innocent petals were breaking his all resistances and invoking a mad desire in his stone heart just to touch them once and drown into some unknown heavenly bliss!!!!
He shook his head and chuckled silently seeing Antara and Chilly both sleeping so deeply and peacefully in his car...together they looked so cute !!! He again felt bad when his eyes caught Antara's injured wrists placed on Chilly's back. He raised his hand unknowingly and caressed her bruised wrist lightly with his finger. Antara stirred a bit in her sleep and moaned feebly in pain.
He sighed and started his car again. All the scenes that he had done with ANtrara the whole day were coming in front of his eyes one by one.
Bohot zyada nazuk hai !!! sala gussa bhi ayega na tabhhi isko kaske pakar nahi sakta !!!...thoda sa kaske hath kya pakra ...iski churiyan tuti ...kalai kaat gayee ...uparse kalai pura neela pad gaya ...!!! He shook his head repenting on his own misdeed. Bappa...!!! mafi dedo yaar ...aage se ispe gussa aya na to isse touch nahi karunga ..Promise !!!
Only half an hour was left to reach Nibholi village when Raghu's phone bipped suddenly. His phone screen flashed an unknown number. Something inside him alarmed him. He stopped his car and cautiously looked at Antara. Ho na ho yeh zarur uss admi ka hi call hoga jisne Antara se shadi ka deal kiya hai apun ke sath...Raghu thought and came out of his car leaving sleeping Antara and Chilly inside. He shut the door gently and then received the call...: Raghunath bolraha hun !!! His husky deep voice was calm sharp and hell professional.
Few seconds there were no response on the other side. Then a cautious suppressed sigh was heard over the phone. With a frown on his forehead, Raghu cautiously waited for the caller to speak, trying to guess and understand each single response that came over the phone.
A man spoke to him with equal professionalism and sharpness...Raghunath !!! hum wohi hain jiske sath tumhara , Antara se shadi aur fir sahi waqt par bina koi sawal kiye usse wapas karneka 5 crore ka deal hua tha !!!
Raghunath : Hmmm.
The unknown voice: Raghunath ...am sorry par wo deal hum cancel kar rahe hain ...par iske liye tumhe jo advance mein ek crore mile hain wo tumhe wapas karneki zarurat nahi. Deal ke mutabit tumhe kafi kuch kaam karna pada issliye wo ek crore tumhara hai !!! yehi Boss chahte hain.
Raghunath : Hmmm. Ladki iswaqt apunke sath hai, orphanage se thodi dur highway par. Uska kya karna hai ??? beech raste pad chod dun ???
Raghu understood there was a Boss who was the actual planner of this whole deal and the caller was not...definitely the caller was his subordinate he thought.
There was again silence on the other side. Raghu heard some whispers of few male voices. Then a new voice spoke to him restlessly : Ladki ko abhi issi waqt highway pad hi chod do !!! Aur tum nikal jao is deal se aur Nibholi Village se ...fir kabhi wapas nahi ana yehanpar !!!
Raghunath : Mother Dorothy meri address janti hai...ladki orphanage mein raat ko agar nahi pohchi to wo mere ghar pe pohoch jayengi police leke...
The new voice was a bit calm now. He said in an assuring voice : tum befikar raho !!! Mother aisa kuch nahi karengi . Main samjha dunga unhe.
A smirk appeared on Raghu's face. So this man is very well known to Mother and Nibholi Orphanage and he has a control on this orphanage...even Mother listens to him. Who could be this man in dark ...who wants Antara in such a weird secret manner ... and whats the purpose ???? ...Raghu stormed his brain.
Pata toh apun lagahi lega ...sala koun hai jo Antara ke piche aise hath dho kar pada hai ...abh tak to bhanak tak nahi milatha ...!!! Par ABH Clue mil chuka hai ...!!! yeh Admi Orphanage se juda hua hai !!! Raghu thought.
Raghu again traped the man in his words...: toh yeh deal fully cancelled !!!! Matlab abh apun free hai ...aur kaam adhura chod ke wapas Mumbai ja sakta hai !! par usse pahle ... i need a deal cancellation mail from ur end from the same mail id. Document in black and white zaruri hota hai ...jab contract dene wala aur todnewala samne nahi hota!!
The man : ...hhh ...Ok . Tumhe mail bhi mil jayegi . ...Mr. Veeral gestured Manthan to mail Raghunath right then. Manthan Noded and immediately sent him a Deal canellation mail from that same previous mail ID.
Raghunath's phone vibrated as his mailbox received a new mail. With a wicked grin on his face, Raghu checked the mail and said ...: HAN ...mil gaya hai mail ...thank you .
The unknown second voice spoke again restlessly : Raghunath !!! You are free now. Tum yeh kaam abhi isiwaqt chodo aur wapas jao. This deal is fully cancelled. Leave Antara on road right NOW and leave Nibholi village !!!
Raghu ..: OK ...fine ! ...deal abh mere taraf se bhi cancelled. ...Aur haan !!! wo advance ka ek crore mereko nahi chahiye !!! kal kisiko bhej dena mere office pe ...cash mil jayegi ...Raghunath ka usul hai ... ke bina kaam khatam kiye Raghunath ek bhi paisa nahi leta kisise !!!
With this Raghu ended the call, and took a deep and long breath and then sighed with a relief. He called up someone : tereko msg bheja hai ...wo phone number aur mail id ki puri details chahiye !!!!...His caucious alert eyes roamed around the dark highway as he stretched his arms lazily. A car with its headlights off was quite visible, about a kilometre away from his duster on the lonely dark highway.
Nazar rakh ke koi Raghunath ko rok nahi sakta ...!!! Sala jabse Nibholi aya hun, tabse yeh nautanki dekhraha hun. Abh yeh nautanki bardash karneki zarurat KHATAM !!! With a wicked grin on his face he opened his car door ... climbed in and relaxed on his seat.
To be continued...:

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Sabr ka fal meetha hota h aaj saabit Ho gya di...

The update is AWESOME

MIND-BLOWING

BLOCKBUSTER

FAADU

TODU

JHAKAAS



This update was just...

Aargghhh!!!! I have shortage of words
So

👏 👏 👏
👏 👏
👏

⭐️

Like seriously itna dimag lagaya hoga aapne usey sochney Mein...
I mean ye Astrology wala concept..
HATS OFF to you for that...

Well now come to the story...




Aww... Chilly ko mumma papa chahiye aur Vo bhi apne Rantara... 😳
She is the life of this story...

Aur Antara to mdm gussey Mein laal pili Ho rahi hai 😆
Raghu to ready hai to adopt Chilly..
Great Raghu..

Raghu's dialogue KISS KAR DUNGA... 😆😆

Par ye kya 😲
Kuch logo k iraadey bahut hi khatarnaak hain yaar...
Antara Ki shaadi ka solid panga nazar aa rha h

O Teri!!!! Deal cancelled 😲
Nahii!!! But no worries... Raghu hai na
Sab pata laga lega Vo aur I am. Sure Ki he will save Antara from that Psycho...

Please Raghu save her
She is too innocent for this mean world
The part of update which scared me was about Antara's marriage predictions.. .
Do shaadi aur Vo bhi first unsuccessful...
Yaar bas ab Raghu hi kuch Kr skta h...


Can't wait to read more
Continue soon
Love uh diii...
😳


SHIVI
Edited by jollygrl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you very much 👍🏼
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Finally you have updated. .
Thanks for the long update dr..
Loved it. .Thank god you have revealed the real reason behind this deal..valid one..
Hope raghu won't leave antara at any cost. .
Can't wait much for your next update dr..
I m addicted to your story. .
So please update soon..
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res...
Pampu i will be a bit late in unressing... a bit busy for some days... will try to unres by weekend...okk..😛

Unres...

So finally i am here with my reply... i don't have much to say about the about.. just wanna share some feeling of mine mostly on the new characters introduced on the plot... i am quite satisfied as a reader by this chapter you know..😛... I admire the detailing u out in this chapter and finally most of the thing get cleared...
For me... i loved this chapter much more than prev once... for some reasons...
1stly it was fast paced and the story finally moved forward...
2ndly finally it is revealed that why mr viral singhaniya is playing the game with an innocent orphan girl's life... though true to say as soon as u mentioned about his good looking evil son i got the indication that he somehow wanted to tie the not of his son with antara. But i was not getting why mr viral singhaniya is playing it being in dark.. he is one of the person with so much power and possession... and above all he has so much authority over an orphanage.. if he urged for antara's hand for his son mother dorothy was mostly bound to agree... and also i don't think that mother dorothy or any other person of outer world knows about ratandeep's real monstrous face under the mask... he will be surely pleased to get married to one of her dear orphan girl to such a reputed family and a reputed persons son... as i thought so...
and so i was waiting badly to know that why mr viral can't marry antara directly to his son... why he is choosing raghu to get married to antara first...
This chapter gave me the answer finally and i understood that what was the important of those astrology in the story... If someone seriously asks me i would say i won't deny or disrespect such an ancient knowledge of astrology but when with the help of some divine power people take advantage of such knowledge to destroy someones life its not at all supportable. And here they are literally going to ruin an innocent girl's life almost intentionally with a vague hope that the magic of stars may change some evil... it is eternal truth of the life that until your heart and mind decide to change and determine to leave all the evils and take the path of truth and god with all your will, u won't chage anyhow!! no one can help to change you... not a doctor, not a psychologist not an astrologer,... yes i do believe in miracles... but i also believe that miracle only happens when you try your best ti stick to ur good will... Not any power of stars but only god has the power to do miracle and he does miracle only when u are stick to goodness and kindness how much hard the path may be... In short... god helps those who helps themselves...

3rdly, i loved that u justified why they choose raghu for the work... i was even wondering that why they choose a renowned head of the gangster world for such a small reason... but u justified that properly.. cudoes to you for that...

I can truly understand the helplessness if mr viral... a helpless father who was getting tired of his all possible way to make his son come back to his normal life... he just want his son back by any means... even for that he is ready to do anything literally!... to take any risk... when u think of logical and human side his every did looks all wrong and almost a sin to hide hsi son's evil heinous crime which is literally encouraging him to do be more and more evil... but if u think of a father's POV.. .. he just can't leave his only son like that...
In this case.. i really feel that people have to be strict for greater good... its not an easy work for everyone but finally its good to accept that devil could never change he may be in disguise but soon the mask will be fallen apart.. Mr viral is going through such a dilemma...
Even feeling bad for girija.. she brought him up like a mother and going through this horrible phase... it must be so hard for her to see that her love and care couldn't withdraw the evil from his ratandeep's inside..sigh!!...

And Ratandeep... well... i am now definite that he is gonna be the most darkest and character of the story... a really true evil with all black shade...and also so much twisted... drawing such character is not an easy work... u are doing a really great job dear...

and i liked the character manthan... i feel he is the only sane character now in singhaniya house... who really knows that what a heinous act his master is going to do for the sake of his son.. he didn't want to be a part of all these but he is helpless... but even being in plan he is alert and trying ti find a ray of hope in all these.. he still think of teh innocent girl and it seemed like god has granted this only sane man's wish... see i told u naa... miracle truly happens and this time i think miracle happend through raghu...they choose the person on their own who was destined to massacre all of their superb tight gripped plan...

and kulguru maharaj jyotish baba...😡... i am sorry pampz but i really feel like beating him like hell with my jhadu and danda...😡😡... seriously man... he is the most hated character for me in this story... sare fasad ki zad...🤢... man if u have such a great knowledge of stars use it in great human works.. make other's life beautiful through ur knowledge.. knowledge is meant to make human life beautiful and developed not to ruin someone's life for other person's sake...i am seriously disgusted by this jyotish baba...😡😡. please pampu its my req... in the end of ss please somehow make this kulguru maharaj beaten up by jhadu and dand...😡😡... i will get the biggest peace of mind...

one important point.. it's mentioned that one of the girl was successful to escape from devil's clutch... they don't know if she is allive or dead, may i guess that the girl may play an important part in the story and do a comeback?!

Not to say much about rantara and chillies scene was so magical... not to say nything about that... a gem scene from the update..👏👏

And fadu moment when jyotish baba made announcement that how raghu gonna be the thorn on their pathway... imagining all viral family members face was just a treat... only manthan ji's dil bole hadippa😆... and baki sab ko lag gaya sadma...🤣... kya kahoon.. ab kundo khud ke khode huye gadhe mein...😆

so mr singhaniya decided to cancell the deal... wonder what will be raghu's next step... u told me already that anything could happen in story... so i won't be shoccked if raghu actually leave antara allone on the road and go out of nivoli forever.. then i will be waiting to see that how their path crosses again...
in one word ready for anything which comes next...😆

chalo i am putting down my pen here... will be waiting for ur next update...😳




Edited by ifians - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pampu my darling! I have read the update 😃
My long comment will be coming your way by mid of next week as I'm vacationing in California right now and I'll be heading home next week. 😃
For the time being "It was a five star update" 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jollygrl

Sabr ka fal meetha hota h aaj saabit Ho gya di...

The update is AWESOME

MIND-BLOWING

BLOCKBUSTER

FAADU

TODU

JHAKAAS



This update was just...

Aargghhh!!!! I have shortage of words
So

👏 👏 👏
👏 👏
👏

⭐️

Like seriously itna dimag lagaya hoga aapne usey sochney Mein...
I mean ye Astrology wala concept..
HATS OFF to you for that...

Well now come to the story...




Aww... Chilly ko mumma papa chahiye aur Vo bhi apne Rantara... 😳
She is the life of this story...

Aur Antara to mdm gussey Mein laal pili Ho rahi hai 😆
Raghu to ready hai to adopt Chilly..
Great Raghu..

Raghu's dialogue KISS KAR DUNGA... 😆😆

Par ye kya 😲
Kuch logo k iraadey bahut hi khatarnaak hain yaar...
Antara Ki shaadi ka solid panga nazar aa rha h

O Teri!!!! Deal cancelled 😲
Nahii!!! But no worries... Raghu hai na
Sab pata laga lega Vo aur I am. Sure Ki he will save Antara from that Psycho...

Please Raghu save her
She is too innocent for this mean world
The part of update which scared me was about Antara's marriage predictions.. .
Do shaadi aur Vo bhi first unsuccessful...
Yaar bas ab Raghu hi kuch Kr skta h...


Can't wait to read more
Continue soon
Love uh diii...
😳


SHIVI



OHhh Shivi thankyou dear for this awesome support . u liked my update ...am elated yaar ...luv u keep reading and giv me ur crispy valuable comment babes ...i will be waiting ...u don know how u inspired me to write down the next part ... and thank you again for reviewing it so beautifully and being the first one to read it and comment and giving me solace ...


haha lolz 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AartShefa

Finally you have updated. .

Thanks for the long update dr..
Loved it. .Thank god you have revealed the real reason behind this deal..valid one..
Hope raghu won't leave antara at any cost. .
Can't wait much for your next update dr..
I m addicted to your story. .
So please update soon..
Eagerly waiting


ohh thanx dear ...bas dekhte jao Raghu kya kya karta hai with Antara ...he is so unpredictable u know na ... am glad yaar u read my story and liked it and most importantly u have let me know ur opinion ...thats so important ...its lik a tonic for me to write down the next chap ...
luv u 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Pampu my darling! I have read the update 😃
My long comment will be coming your way by mid of next week as I'm vacationing in California right now and I'll be heading home next week. 😃
For the time being "It was a five star update" 👏



oHhh Gundi ...my pyari Gundi i will be waiting for ur comment dear ...enjoy ur superb vacation and come back fast 😉

i will start reading ur stories that am missing for a long time ...
Edited by pampz - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

Res...
Pampu i will be a bit late in unressing... a bit busy for some days... will try to unres by weekend...okk..😛


No probs dear ...maine bhi toh kitni der lagadi teri story ka comment karne ...don worry ...take ur time 😃
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