Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 30

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Pampu...🤗

Zabardast update...👏👏

mana raghu ne zabardasti ki lekin aik reason say ki...😛

it was too good..👏👏

And chilly's idea saved him today...😆😆

agar yaad na ata toh raghu ko anatara say kaun bachata...👏👏👏

aww bechari chilly apni didi kayliye ro rahi thi...😭

aur woh moti aunty how dare she?😡😡😡

Antara's rage ...😡

chilly innocence...😳

raghu's madness and realization for antara...⭐️

this story is going supreme...👏

but the update was short...😭

next time big one plz...😆😆

thanks for the pm...😳

Thank u Haya for ds wondrfl chirpy inspirational review.

did u say d updt was short??

Haha dear it was too long actually. I had a fear dt nobdy is gonna read that extra lenth bt u proved me wrong.

A long update after really a very long time...

Originally posted by: Rasika9

A long update after really a very long time...

The hug part was superb...a simple warm hug can enlighten all darkness...

Overall nicely written...

Keep up the good work...

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Awesome update

Like it

The way raghu calm her was amazing

Antara was in so much scared

She just want her chilly

Wow he also calm chilly

Nice she slept in his arm

It was really a difficult task for him

He want to protect both the cute girl

Thanks for the wonderful update

Waiting for the next update

Update soon

Thanks for the pm dear

Originally posted by: Arthishefali

Lovely update dr.I love to read more. U described both of their emotions very well.i m impressed.Where is the precap? Update next part ASAP dr. Waiting

sorry for the delay madam
i am having exams
so reading it so late

so this means raghu is not happy
cracks have formed in his supposed stone heart
may be it will start melting soon
i am so happy he is thinking of her
he is not thinking her to be his target
he had forgot the money for this job
wow he hugged her with her consent
i just loved it
good that he thought and took care of her
good that he is trying to improve / change for her
wow antara started believing him now
loved the raghu chilly scene
chilly complained so sweetly
good that raghu scolded the couple
waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: pampz

OHHh ...so finally i made u impressed ...Aww it feels so beautiful ...like i have tasted triumph.

thanx dear for reading it and appreciating me this much😃

most welcome. Love you lot. Update soon dr

So finally i am here with my sara saa review...😆
First of all the chapter was as usual beautiful, wonderful, magical, intense... etc etc etc,,😛... words fell less when it comes to describe your update...😃

there are so many intriguing moment which can actually chock the breath...😛

the moment i loved most here...

1. Raghu's change in mind and his whole thought process seeing antara in that situation... u always let out the perfect piccture while describing raghu's inner mind👍🏼... thats why u r raghu PHD specialist..😆... well i can't stop saying these repetitive title always 😆 ...
Ur whole describing process made the readers understood that why there was a sudden change in raghu's behavior... this kind of part is too risky to portray... for a single wrong movement... raghu's change in mind may look abrupt... but ur throughout analysis of raghu's mind didn't make it look abrupt...👏.. well how can pampy the vampy went wrong.. NEVER.. soecially when it comes to define raghu;s mind..😎...
the words and thought that roamed in raghu;s mind and stuck his inner lost soul was absolutely a treat to watch... he is literally a STONE in every sense.. without any feeling, without any emotions... the guy who only worship money and nothing can affect him till the time an innocent girl came in his life all of sudden in the form of his deal and now that naive innocent girl is changing him... her arguments and complains are affecting him who never even mind to get a bullet, her tears affects him... the stone wall is having a crack...

2. Antara's state of shock was brilliantly described... i felt like it can't be perfect than that... after going through that nightmare and bizarre moment the way antara reacted to raghu;s each and every gesture... the numb shocked stae and her outburst... rejecting his aid to her and then getting calm by his consoling though forcefully... everything was picture perfect...

3.raghu and antara's each and every reaction and interaction to each other...it was also the perfection...the consoling hug from raghu...it was really the highlight moment of the chapter... the emotion, the feeling, the new realization and feeling of utter completeness they went through... it was totally blissful to read...

4. chilly and raghu... i absolutely love their bonding... way before antara chilly was teh one who actually throbbed the tender chord in raghu;s heart... day by day these two are becoming so adorable...😛

Aaj kee liye bas itna hii..😆.. umeed hain humne jyada nahin pakaya...🤪

Love you!! always...🤗

Mind blowing update. It was so dark dat I got goosebumps while reading it. Raghu has gone really obsessed. Lucky antara. N chilli seems so cute. D way u write her dialogues I feel like going into d story n kiss her. waiting for ur nxt update.

Waiting for the update dear