Originally posted by: ifians
pampu darling.. main abhi thora busy hoon...kya hain na ki bvahut dino see main ani story kaa update khatam kar nee ki try lkar rahi hoon par time nahin mil raha hain... aaj time mila hain too main likhne baithi hoon...😉... maian apna update khatam kar kee ati hoon fir tera update santi see parke coment karaungi,. Think hain vampire jii..😉
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Ye loo ji pampu darling main aa gayi mera bakbak suna nee kee liye..😆.. sorry yaar kaal main unres nahin kar payi... aaj kaal main bahut busy hoon apne studies koo lee kar..... but ek baat jaan loo kiii whatever happens you will get my reply on each and every update...
Aur ek baat humesha main kaheti hoon tu maanti kyun nahin re... mujhe dark stories see koi problem nahin...😆... infact hum mein se kissi koo bhi nahin hain... cause this story is written by our one and only writer pampu joo kii ek dark story koo bhi itna attractive way mein represent kar sakti hain... and we all get lost while reading and going through each and every chapter... iss liye tujhe joo bhi likhna hain... jaise bhi iss story koo shape dee naa hain you just do that without any hesitation... i am all excited to read anything...true to say there was some magnetic power in this kinds of dark stories and when it is written by vampy tab too sone pee suhaga😳... the intensity will be worth reading...
Thank you ji Thank you😃
okk now coming to the update...
the short scene was chilly and her freinds were really sweet. she was just like the small flame of oil lamp in darkness... one of the little light who warms up in the dark story concept...
i already predicted that before that raghu would trick antara to marry him somehow regurding to chilly. cause he has already observed that how possessive antara is when it comes to chilly...i observed in ur last es that in the car scene you showed antara's worry and anxiety when chilly was in raghu;s arm... at that moment i understood that the day out trip will turn out to be like something that... raghu will trick antara to marry him and at the end antara have to agree... after all she can't win over a mind player like raghu... although she has strong will power but it was nothing in front of raghu's dominant characteristic.
and while you are focusing more on antara's worry towards chilly i was almost sure that raghu will make her agree on terms of chilly... something like, if she won't marry him somehow he will take away chilly from her... and tada..my guess went right at that point...😆
haha 😆
but there was always some unexpected moment in the update... that was raghu's option 2... true to say for some moment i was a bit shocked when raghu put the offer in front of antara... it actually doesn't go with his character... he may a dark character... cruel and cunning in some extent.. due to his circumstance and upbringing but one thing i always observed that he was not at all a wretched animal who would take advantage of a helpless girl... cause if he has some intention like that he could do it much before... for the example i was thinking about the prev night when he captivated antara inside his car... at that moment the ball was totally on his court and he can do anything with her... anything means anything... but he actually left her un scratched and unharmed... i remembered the moment while he was captivating antara in his hold and antara's kurti became disarranged and she was really in a bad condition... but raghu instead of doing anything, covered her properly... (man that was a moment of this story which i could ever forget... it shows one of the color shade of raghu's dark character which was really really unpredictable and to some extent... wonderful!)
so i was a bit chocked when he put that 2nd option in front of her... i paused at the moment for a while and tried to think what was raghu thinking at that moment,... (he he😆... silly me trying to read the most unpredictable, unreadable person in the world!!🤣) i slowly understood that he must be laying some kind of trick with antara... may be entrapping her from every where so that she didn't have any escape and she had to agree on marrying him... and he was quite confident that antara would never be agreed to do like that...(haha... i like the fact most that this SS makes me think a lot... thats why i love to read it...thank you vampy ji for bringing such a mind churning concept 😛)
But his trick hit back on his face when antara went with 2nd option... leavung him shocked and spellbound inwardly... i think it was on of the moment in raghu'slife which he would ever be able to forget... how a naive helpless girl silently hit on his face without any effort crushing up his pride and confident in front of his eye... there was so much in the silent moment... so many unexpressed words which i want to focus on,,, (so too nahin gaye naa... he he😉😆)
haha nahi ji nahi ...how can i go to sleep ...am reading ur review 😆one of the loveliest that i cherish 😃
being a girl i really understood and deeply felt that in what situation a girl can go with that option... how shameful and lifeless each and every girl had to went through in such situation when a girl had to go through such option.s.. not just for antara but each and every girl in the society... i think each and every girl wait for someone in his life to whom she can dedicate herself fully without a hesitation... give away her everything... her mind body and soul... cause a girl only needed a little assurance that the man of her life would respect her, take care of her in any situation and cherish her each and everything precious thing which she gave away to him..., and will held her hand strongly in each and every situation... protecting from the whole world... a girl wants nothing more than that... the assurance of a forever togetherness... and immense love from him off course!!
true re ...each n every girl wants only that from a boy ...pata nahi pura kyun nahi hota itni simple si khoyaish...😲may be we girls often choose the wrong boy 😆
but when you have to do the same thing someone who is not even worthy of that then it becomes nightmare to the girl... cause she knew that he has no feeling, no respect of hers... he will just use you as his toy thing and throw you away when you would be broken and shattered... sucking the mist of teh life from you... and at last what happens.. the girl herself has to bear the burden for all her lifetime for someone else's wrongdoing...
true yaar ...soch ke hi rona ajata hai ...may God never put any girl in such situation that is so terribly wrong and even if God puts any girl in such a situation may God give her all the powers of Devi durga so that she can finish off those evils and protect herself.
so with the respect of some points it was shown excellently that how much disgust antara was developing for raghu... she was allowing him to do so with him... cause she was better with that... she could allow him to be the destroyer of her life.. her everything vut she couldn't let him allow to be the man of her life with whom she had to spend the whole life... in one word she really make that clear to him that he ill forever be the destroyer demon of her life, he can't be the merciful GOD to her...the owner of her life, her soul... he will only get a lifeless physical form of antara if he do so but he could never be able to get victory over the real her... Antara's heart and soul... he will be deprived of that place always...
in one word he could never own her fully.
yess that is what Antu made him realise choosing the second option ...😳 and Raghu wo realise karke ho gaya laal kala pila ...hihhihihi😆
antara just not only crushed his ride silently but to some extent stopped him down in front of his own eyes... cause he clearly understood that he just remained a loathsome character to antara who only seeks her body...which he was not obviously... he couldn't allow her to think of him like that... whatever happens... he just can't let her prove right and he decided to play his shrwed mind game with her...Actually he was not bothered at all that what Antara was thinking about him ...he never tried a single moment to be good in front of her ...what ever he is doing and what he had already done with her was naturally coming out of him ...BECAUSE HE IS LIKE THAT ONLY ...DANGEROUS UNPREDICTABLE AND RUTHLESS.
he has seen her the first time he felt a dangerous pull towards her... the fatal attraction was definitly not one sided 😳 though Antara is too much scared of him right now .
Raghu is thinking that whatever he is doing he is doing due to fulfill his deal ...soon he will realise that his behaviour towards ANtara is not driven by a mere deal only ...deep down something is there and which he can not ignore with his all might.😆😉😳
at the next moment you showed that what an expert mind game player raghu by his nerve... the moment was another type of excellence when he ordered antara at first to take of her clothes n her own and he didn't do that... at that moment i remembered the moment on the night when raghu escorted antara safely inside the orphanage saving her from matron's eyes... at that night he promised her something... i still remembered his dialouge... "Nahin dekha tujhe bin kaproke... aur kabhi dekhunga bhi nahin tere marzi kee bagair.,." that moment really flashed in front of my eyes... here also he kept his promise... thats what our raghu's character is... kuch bhi hoo... he is juban kaa pakka!!!!... he would never ever break his promise...
then the cunning nerve game started between them which was obviously be a failure for antara... she was not the girl who would ever be able to win against the expert player like raghu... she had to accept of his defeat at some point... but there was at some point i think where raghu was also driven by his instinct... when he was unable to leave her and and carried away with his unknwon deep instinct.
YESSS😆
somehow i knew that he won't do anything wrong with antara at any coast.. he did everything just to scare her so that she left her zid and wrong deccision... although he touched her really in an intimate way... YESSS it was really intimate ...first i thought that writing this wd be wrong for Raghu but then i thot Antu manegi nahi itni asani se ...thoda Raghu ke angle se socha fir thoda intimate touch scene daal diya 😆
but his touches were not loathsome and wicked like some characterless looser... and even if antara didn't agree soon... i knew he would stop after some extent... cause i knew bu nerve that he may be dark but not a characterless loosers... she can blackmail her emotionally... shattered her heart, trick her... but he won't go something so savage like that.. it was never ever his character... all he did to make antara understood the vigorous savage result of her wrong decision... may be, uss kaa tarika galat tha samjhane kaa.. par iradhe galat nahin the..
AS FOR NOW RAGHU IS WRONG NO DOUBT . HIS TARIKA KYA EVERYTHING IS WRONG ...aise koi shadi ke liye nahi manata koi ladki ko ...but here comes how he is brought up ...his values r different though he understands that a girl like antara kya kar sakti hai and what not ...he knows very well her limits and her values. Raghu has come to Antara for a deal... not to propose her or say i love you ...the situation is different.
Now... that's what i all have to say about this update... moreover it was a meaningful chater with lots of symbolism and i enjoyed reading that... chalo now bear my rants... pata nahin kya kya kahegayi...😆... don't mind lease agar kuch galat kahan too... you know naa i am big yedi,,,🤣
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