Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 19

antara was scared but raghu really enjoyed it

i must say raghu is really smart here

he saved her from all the trouble

even though it was he who had caused it

antara must learn to climb walls

i am sure it will come in handy later

good that matron did not find her

haha i loved the name to her given by raghu

raghu really has a good sense of humour too

i loved the way he again tried to convince her to marry him

i am sure he is slowly developing feelings for her

at least in his sub conscious he is not aware of it yet

the way he did not like it when she was hurt

or the way he was uncomfortable when she was crying

that shows that some where the stone is melting

also in the lotus scene with chilly he was so gentle and caring

i loved also the way he warned about the creak in the window

i admired the way he convinced her that he never saw her in that way

and will never see her that way without her consent

antara believed him seeing in his eyes

she will trust him a bit from now

I wasn't commenting due to my exams and today I was fed up of studying so logged in..

An awesome progress in the story.

Raghu's character is changing..

Pampz, this story is driving me crazy...

Cant wait for them to become the rantara who are do dill ek jaan..

-Prerna

this update is adventurous and romantic as well as😊😊

plzzz update asap

Pampu...aapke updates k baare mein kya kahun...😲...*mum n mute*...m speechlesss...😳...

Kitni hulchul hoti hai......uff......Total DHAMAKA...i get hysterical/ hyper/ over-excited/ enthusiastic/ eupohoric...sahi words nahi mil rahe...😕...but i think u got d idea...😉...😃...😳...

apne aapko kitne uchal-khud karne se rokkar...updates padna...😕...😲..😃..😛...aasan nahi yaar......i hav to constantly calm down n compose myself...😆...😉...

matlab... kya story hai...aapki...👏...---totally mindblowing...👍🏼...aur kya dil-dehlane-waali scenes...dhak-dhak...dhak-dhak...ki kuch---bola hi na jaaye...😳...😆...

Woh deewaar pe chadnewaala scene...😲...MY MY...👏...👍🏼...total hosh ud gaye......

Antu---Raghu par totally balancing...😲...😳...n yeh apna HERO...❤️...😎...😲...ek haath se chad gaya...😲......woh bhi Antu ko lekar...😲......

Akele chadna hi mushkil hai...🤔...n yeh toh kitne ease se chada...😲...Antu k saath......🤪...⭐️...

Aur ek shocker...😲...Deewaar pe baithkar baatein karni hai isko......😕...woh bhi itni uunchi...😲...

...Arrey yeh kya...😲shaadi k liye poocha...???...😲......

Lekin apni Antu bhi ziddi n stubborn hai......itni aasani se control mein nahi aayegi...👎🏼...😛...

hush...finally safely pahunch gaye...😊...lekin ek aur googly......Raghu ne sab sach bataaya......🤪...abt d changing scene...😲...dint expect it at all...😕...😵...

aur jaate-jaate ek aur bouncer maara......Antu ko poore din k liye lejaane ka...😲...😉...😳...

Ab aage kya hoga...???...😕...😲......😃...😉...😆...

ohhh...Chilly bhi ja rahi hai unke saath...😳...aur mother ko Chilly-Raghu ki bonding achhi lag rahi hai...👍🏼...😳...Lekin Antu toh total bhavar mein hai......fully lost n confused...😕..n scared n worried...😔......just like us...😒...😆...😉...

n yeah erase d notion...dat v'l run away aftr reading ur updates...😃...😈...never will miss dem...though might b late in replying...😃...😛..😉...

Just Love ur updates n writing style...❤️...🤗...i can still feel d goosebumps......😉...😆...😃...

A Loophole: What abt d guard knocked out...???...😕...he clearly told dat he was attacked...????...🤔...hw come none cross-checkd dat...???...wen Antu narrated d made-up story...directed by Raghu...???!!!...😕......🤓...

yeahh it's soo long plzzz update this story😭😭