Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 18

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Thanks pampu!
I love u guys yaar..
You guys proof to be my strength and encouragement in some way or the other.
Apna "Bold and Beautiful finish karlu fir aajaaongi gundi mode me yaar.
Mwaah...

Originally posted by: pampz

you know main aage se na koi bhi hint nahi dene wali ...tu toh sabkuch guess kar leti hai yediii ...hahahhhaha

Originally posted by: ifians

My guessing power is a bit strong...😆... story par ke samajh aa jati hain kii agey kya hone waala hain... but uss mein interest bhi chala jata hain kabhi kabhi..😕

Actually baat yee hain kii main iss story koo leke bahut sochti hoon,😆 iss liye bahut sare guess bhi kaar leti hoon!! kabhi kabhi guess nishane pe lagta hain.. aur kabhi kabhi nahin lagta hain!! jaise in 6th chapter i assuned that there gonna be such harsh thing coming from raghu towards antara in car, but for the 7th chap, i didn't expected kii raghu aise safely antu koo cottage mein chor dega!! mujhe too laga tha kii woo sdiha jayega aur antu koo hippo ke hawale kar dega!! that secret escorting thing wwas really surprise element!!😉 and i love to get surprised!!😆...

but yaar obviously... sirf main nahin... agar koi bahut minutely soche too samaajh aa jayega kii whose gonna fall first...a title of the story defines so many things..😉😆

But i will be ready to get surprised... please vampy jii mere koo nirash mat karna, aisa kuch likhna that is beeyond my imagination or doubt... please mujhe surprise kar do... aur sath mein baki readers koo bhi...😉😆

pyar kiss koo agey hoga yee too bhagwan jane aur jane humari vampy jii😆... but u know i would prefer kii pyar itni jaldi naa hoo... the fatal attraction between them and this some kind of hateful relationship creates spark in the story and it is the USP... and i would like to see if the spark continues throughout the story till the end... love realization agar naa hoo too bhi chalega.. but this spark should be there... raghu too antu shadi karega hii karega cchahe aise yaa waisey..😆.. but kiss situation mein antu shaadi kee liye haan kar degi yee ab mujhe dekhna hain... would she grow up feeling for him yaa fir kissi mazboori ki wajah se... i guess ki uskii koi mazboori hii hogi... afterall it is a dark story...😆.. yahan too sakuch is going to be dark...

aur ek sawal bahut dino see mere dimag mein ghoom rahaa hain.... janti hoon insane sawal hain par bina puche raha nahin gaya... guess kii kabhi antu kee dil mein yee khayal ayyein aur woo raghu see puche kii why he is hell bent on marrying her... duniya mein bahut sari larkiyan hain... fir particularly wohi kyun... tab kya raghu just like everytime... woo sach mooch honestly kahega kii woo paise kee lite uss set shadi karna chahti hain...😕.. i know agar lgically socha jayein too this thing is not possible... woo jaan boojh kee aisi bewakoofi kabhi nahin karega jiss sey antu aur bhi disagree kar jayein aur situation aur bigar jayein.. but fir bhi.. raghu too beyond logic hain yaar... uss kaa koi bhi actions and moveemeent too logically define nahin kiya jaa sakta......, aur wwaisey bhi, till now he didn't ever try to pretend for anything!! so i was thinking kii kabhi ussey antara kee iss sawal kaa saam naa karna pare too uss kaa kya reaction hoga!! as thinking kii agar out if the blue woo antu koo sach bata dee too kya halat hoga,,😆🤣

sorry just my stupid thought!!, kuch jyada hii confuse hoo rahi hoon...

and aap please mere presumption se confuse mat hoo jaiyen...😆.. it's just my thought... 😛... aap koo story jaise continue karni hain waisey hii kijiyee..🤗

Originally posted by: pampz

tension mat le yedi ...😆story to waisehi progress hogi jaise Raghu and Antara wd react to each other ...i can understand this story is making u think too much ...haha ...loving the scene that Riyu rani thinking hard sitting on her bed ...hihih...

tune jo pucha ki Antu agar wo sawal puche ki why Raghu is hell bent to marry her ...yeh sawal toh Antu usse zroor karegi ...but abhi its a too early stage ...aur ek aur bhi twist hoga usse pahle ...i mean a Raghu wd come to know something abt Antu which is very imp ...

And most importantly one day Raghu wd ask himself why he was this much hell bent to marry her...😆

and Raghu pretend kuch nahi karta ...yeh to hai but shayad tujhe yaad ho ki yeh sawal Mother ne puchatha usse ...while his exam haha u remember ...

Lastly when Mother asked him why he wanted to marry only "that girl" leaving all the lovely girls in the World...Raghu got froze for few seconds and shoved his eyes from Mother's eyes.

Mother didn't know why but felt he was masking himself slowly n coldly or he was simply engrossed into some deep worry facing her question but soon her perception changed as Raghu confessed that he found only "that girl" to be "lovely" in the whole world.


to abh bata Riyu ...kya Raghu ne sach kaha ???? ya phir jhoot ???

For me... woo sach bhi nahin tha aur jhoot bhi nahin tha... in between thruth and lie there is a very thin line... and i think raghu is now standing exactly over that grey line... he was doing everything driven by his instinct... he think that it was all because he wanted to posess her as she was his precious deal.. but even his own thought was confusing him..😆

he didnt disclose about his deal to Mother ...why wd he ??? after all he is the king of dealing any damn thing in this world for money and for that i really don know to what extent he might go ...its up to him what he feels and what life make him realise by time ...till then read the story and enjoy ..but yess yehi sawal jab Antu puchegi (not now though)uska impact kuch aur hi hoga Raghu par 😆

@bold yehi too exactly mera thought hain...😆.. i know that raghu is not satyavadi maharaj yudhisthir...🤣.. he reacted cleaverly as the situation required but... jab antu kii baat atii hain too maine ussey kissi bhi situation mein pretend nahin karte dekha... for example, in their first meet.. he could easily owe her by prtending to be a veery descent and nice guy as he represented himself in fornt of mother,, but when he meet antu he was full on his own avtar🤣.. aur yahi mera sawal hain.. jab sach bata nee ka mauka ayega too tab bhi kya woo aisa hii karega!!🤓

Originally posted by: pampz

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Originally posted by: ifians

kya yaar...kitna confuse kar rahi hain... jaldi too update nahin dene wali... fir bhi aise hints dee rahi hain kii i am becoming bechain... aise cconfuse karti rahegi naa too mera dimag mein sabkuch khicchri ban jayega..... sab bhool jaungi!!!... u know kaal raat koo i was thinking to start tera sukkon's new chapter par iss story kee barein mein itna sochna suru kar di kii bhool hi gayoi kya likhne ke barein mein soch rahi thi...🤣... abhi tak yaad nahin aa rahiu hain kii kya likhne jaa raahi thi!!..

haa haa koi nahin, confuse karte raho🤪... love you!!...🤗

Originally posted by: pampz

nahiii yeh kya ho gaya ???? plzzz tere bheje ko line pe la aur sukoon likhna start kar ...NAHITO 😉

abh bhulja sathiya ko ...peelleeej

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Finally m here to comment

sowie was really busy

its ok dear ...i can understand...no probs ...i was thinking that i hv updated a tooo long chapter ...readers r running away due to this ...but Riyu Pri Sanji liana and u proved me wrong ...😃 and iam so happy for that 😊

For me hayee thanks love you..

Yedisest yedi hayee best name ever for me

haha ...who else can get such a name ...lolzz
Coming to the update

uff i have seriously never read read anything darker than this

its even darker than dark yaar

sometimes i was confused, sometimes blushing, laughing, scared sometimes guessing whts going to happen next,

The dialogues were awesome

u really have done a PHD on raghu, like the black panther lol

poor antu is so scared of him

why does raghu do all these weird things to her?? it confuses me all the time

its Raghu's char here u know ...he is dark n dangerous ...he is one of the imp part of the underworld ...his profession is weird u know ...his upbringing his lifestyle his perception about life everything is different ...he is bound to be weird ...and he never came near to any woman ...he didnt seen his mom in his life ...neither he got any mother figure ...he never dealt with any girl so far this much ...whatever girls came to him all did hv their own motives behind that ...he never got love from someone neither loved anybody else ...Machmach in his life is imp ...both remained for eachother and will remain always they knew but feeling love was far away matter ... therefore he is so weird with Antara ...he likes her ...he is hell attracted to her ...but his harshness n rudeness n weirdness comes as natural as breath

whatever feelings he was having coming close to antara was hell new to him ...he himself doesnt know what is happenening deep inside him ...wait n watch what happens to him 😉

*merese shadi karge* uff that killed me, the way he asked her was wow

raghu is definitely falling for her, call me mad but its true yaar, the way he sometimes talks to her, doesnt want to see her upset or anything else it obvious he is falling badly

Antu finds him weird horrible and dangerous

except weird and horrible he is everythingi love himm😳

i really wanna know who that person is asking for antara? i suspect the man who was there at the beginning... big conphusion😕😆 plz stay in confusion for few more days ...raaz khulne wala hai

there was romance but dangerous and cold, Haaai Hinu ...who else could define the romance in this story so perfectly ...u r 100% right ...here romance is dangerous n cold 😉

the way he climbed the wall uff i was lost in thinking about him

he was feeling content??? really??? i mean... really? yuppp ...all these feeling r very new to him ...he never tasted such feeling ever in his life ...he is confused and he doesnt know what is it...*checks her eyes* i will go and read that part again to clear my doubts🤔

seriously i have read nothing like this before, it has a different touch and taste, amazing, i lvoe this story

is there going to be a love story in this or just dark and painful?? just really curious to know😲

overall i loved the update now waiting for their first hang out together😳 for the whole day just rantara😳😳😳

Darling if there is Raghu and Antara how can it be utterly dark n painful ????😆 its a different story mixture of every emotion ...😉

raghu cares for her

i loved the excuse her gave her to save herself from matron

one more question.. sorry i know m a question ke dukaan but its important

Why cant antara stand for long as u mentioned??...OMG OMG OMG OMG ...YEDIII you r the only ONE who noticed it ...omg thank you MUYAAAH ...yes she cant stand for long ...WHY ??? i wll reveal it soon to you guys and Raghu tooo ...Raghu ko bhi iss bareme kuch nahi pata ...but abh pata chalega ...its really got my attention now

i love this dark raghu but him being weird is kinda confusing now, how will she agree to marry him seeing this side of him?? he needs to improve his ways on girls esp antu😳 its helpful u know..

yaa wohi to ...aise ladke se kounsi ladki shadi karna chahegi ...but Raghu will make her agree to marry him ... see how he makes so ...😆😆😆

i think i know whats going to happen in this story in the future,, its clear just a bit more dusting in my stupid brain

loved the update ...its a treat to me whn i get review from u ...and whn u like my updates it really makes feel in cloud 9 😃

thnks for dedicating it to me love you🤗 yuppp dear this update is wholly yours ... dark dangerous and cold romance wala update for romance ki bhookhi Hinu 😆😆😆

Now i dont have to say this but for u its becoming a habit now🤣

Please update as soon as possible... wont say jaan this time...

dear plzzz lemme finish this story as u know only ideas of this story r roaming nowadays in my head ...and don worry i wll definitly update JAAAN ...because JAAN is my JAAN .too..i can not ignore or avoid JAAN

luv u YEDI ...