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Hello yedis ...am back with my next update ... am very sorry for the late but couldnt manage as am going thru a hectic schedule ...and this update is dedicated to Hinu Yedi ...the Yediest yedi of this forum ...haha ...this is a belated gift for her on her happy Birth day ...

plzz go thru it and don forget to throw ur fantastic mind blowing reviews...






PART 7

Never trust someone who lies to you.
Never lie to someone who trusts you.

- Mandy
Oh my God ...abh kya hoga?? ...wahan Matron hai !!!...wo to mujhe mar hi dalegi ...Antara murmured gulping hard. Raghu looked at her ...Matron koun ?? wo hippo jo baithi hai Mother ke bagal mein???
Haan ...wo hamari Matron hai ...bohot zyada strict hai ...Mother bhi bacha nahi payegi aaj mujhe !!! ...Antara murmured again shakily. Raghu felt her hand is getting cold and trembling within his hold.
Oye ...sun !!! itna tension nahi leneka..!!!!...Main gate chod !!...boundary wall tapak ke chalte hai orphanage ke andar...fir aramse tu pohoch jayegi tere cottage tak...kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega...Raghu assured her giving a solution in a comparatively less scary tone.
Antara shook her bent head slowly :Nnn Nahi ...mujhe nahi tapakna wall ...
Kyun ??? Raghu asked sternly squeezing her shaking hand a lil bit.
Main itni unchi diwar chad nahi payungi aur Tumhari help mujhe nai chahiye !!!...Antara raised her swollen red eyes n looked at his eyes straight and said in a firm and calm voice...mera hath chodo aur mujhe meri haal pe chod do ...chale jao tum yehanse ...
Did he hear a deep anguish n pain in her apparently calm voice ??? Raghu wondered. In the dark night in the village only moon and stars are the sourses of light which were often getting covered by clouds. Raghu tried to see her face which got clearer with the moon coming out in the sky.
She was not struggling a bit to get her hand free from his...but her calm anguished face... her reddened n swollen big innocent eyes which emanated pain n fear ... and her obstinate denial to take his help affected Raghu badly. It was completely a new feeling to him. Deep in his system it bothered him a lot. He never gave a damn to a crying face. His profession made him see and deal with endless hard and harsh scenes and actions all through his life...nothing affected his stone heart a bit.
Then what just happened to him?...Raghu was hell confused. He had never dealt with any girl this much before n not a single girl came across his way ever affected him lik this in his whole life.
Jo bhi ho...isse aise raat ko yehan orphanage ke bahar akele nahi chod sakta ...isse toh orphanage ke andar iske cottage tak pochake rahunga ...chahe isme iski marzi ho ya naho...agar firse zabardasti karna pade toh karunga ...Raghu thought again fixing his stern eyes on her swollen innocent eyes and said stubbornly..: Nahi jata ...!!! Tereko uthakar laya hun toh tere cottage tak wapas tujhe chod bhi dunga...
His words made her lose her control ...Sab ...hhh...tumhare wajese ...hua!!! hhh...Antara whimpered raising her index finger towards him... abh kuch nahi hosakta ...hhh...metron mujhe pakad hi legi ...wo kaisi hain tumhe nahi pata !...she whimpered more ...pura din mujhe wo khadi rakhegi dhoop mein ...kyunke unhe pata hai ki main khadi nahi rah sakti zyada der... hhh...khana nahi degi ...bhookhi rakhegi poore do din ...aur ...hhh...aur ...mujhe aur chot pohchane ke liye ...Chilly ko bhi bhookhi rakhe gi wo...aur Chilly kitna royegi ...tumhe pata hai kuch bhi ??? pata ho to bhi kya ? tumhe koi fark nahi padne wala ...main janti hun...hhh...
Tumhara man kiya aur zabardasti utha ke le aaye mujhe yehan ...hhh...kyunki...hhh...kyunki maine tunhe na kaha shadi ke liye isiliye na ??? haan ...hun main ek anath ladki!!!...aage piche koi nahi hai mera !!! to kya main naa nahi kah sakti kisiko ??? itna bhi haq nahi mujhe ...hhh...meri apni zindegi mein????
...mujhe abh help karneki koi zarurat nahi ...Tum Jaao..!!! ...hhh Antara again tried to free her hand from Raghu's grip...to which she felt his grip tightened more on her ...
The moon hid again in the cloud ...Raghu's face could not be seen neither Antara's. Antara's sobs got mixed with the noises of the night creatures of the village. Raghu pulled and steered her towards the woody place where the rope was hanging from the boundary wall.
Aaahh...ouch ...hhh...rukoo...hhh...Antara's painful moan stopped Raghu.
"Kya hua ...?????" Raghu asked in his deep husky voice...
Was the harshness in his voice a little bit less???...Antara wondered. "Kuch chuga mere pair mein...hhh"...she moaned...she again raised her index finger to him and whimpered...Sab kuch ...hhh...tumhare wajese ho raha hai ...hhh...nahi tum mujhe zabardasti uthate aur nahi mere chappal chut ti ...aur nahi kuch chugta mere pair mein ...hhh
Raghu looked at her sobbing complaining face n quietly sat on his knee in front of her and lit up his mobile and gave a look to her foot. He placed her hand on his shoulder to keep her balance n held her ankle up a bit and picked out a thorn from her bare foot. Antara winced n hissed in pain ...her hand on his shoulder gripped him hard to bear the pain.
Kanta chuga tha ...nikal diya ...abh chal ...wo teri hippo matron wahan gate mein zyada der nahi bathegi ...pakka wo tujhe dhundne niklegi ...usse pahle hume yeh boundary wall tapak na hai ...CHAL...Raghu stood up ... helding her hand he gave a soft tug.
Nnn nai ...tu ...tum jao ...aanedo Matron ko ...punish karne do mujhe!!! ...she said in an anguished stubborn sobbing tone ...
Wo ...Rona bandh kar!!! ...apun ne kaha na ...ke tujhe teri cottage tak pocha dunga...toh bas pohcha dunga...wo hippo ko kuch pata nahi chalega ...tension mat le ...saying this Raghu sealed the matter n again started walking helding her hand. Antara didn't dare to argue anymore with him ...he might lock her again in his car for the whole night ...and secondly he was right ...Matron might come out of Orphanage and start searching for her ...and if she did so ...she would definitely find out Raghu and Antara hand in hand. Antara couldn't guess what Matron might do with her after that. The last thing that she wanted was to take any help from Raghu to climb the wall and reach her cottage but the situation seemed going completely against her.
After a while they reached the woody place where the rope was hanging from the wall.
Raghu left her hand and grabbed the rope and started checking the hook's grip n tenacity before starting climbing up the boundary wall. Antara hastily came towards him and said in a wobbling voice ...wo ...wo main khud chad jaungi ...tum apne car wapas jao...main dekh lungi !!!..tu ...tumhara help nai chahiye...hhh...
Achha ??? Raghu left the rope and turned to her...Chad ke dikha...!!! Antara knew she had no option left. She knew he would not left at all until and unless she did what he had asked for otherwise he would definitely force her to take his aid to climb the wall and reach her cottage.
Antara held the rope shakily with her both hands...it felt so rough n pricking on her palm. She never in life tried or practiced ever wall climbing with a rope ...she didn't know how to climb but guessed how the process might be. She looked at Raghu once then raised her arms... grabbed the rope with both hands and tried to move upward. Raghu was standing beside her with his hands in his pockets looking at her efforts calmly. It was more dark in that place ...the moon beam couldn't enter profusely in that area due to the dense trees and plants there. Raghu's face couldn't be seen clearly but Antara was sure he was having an irritating impish smirk on his face. Antara took a deep breath and moved herself a few feet up along the wall holding the rope...but in the process the rough wall got brushed with the bare skin of her arms and bruised her n even shreded her kameez a bit. The rope bruised her palms badly as she tightly held it with her all might. She started panting n moaning due to the exhaustion n pain... n realized the task of climbing wall was hell difficult. She tried hard to climb up further but her body didn't permit her. Her weakness was prominent through her trembling feature...her grip on the rope became lose n she fell down abruptly on the ground. She let out a small shriek of pain failure n fear. She heard Raghu's soft chuckle. It made her melt on the ground in embarracement.
She covered her face with her palms and couldn't stop crying. She tried hard not to make any sound but her suppressed sound of sobs and her shaking body made it clear to Raghu that she was crying bitterly.
Raghu looked here and there and scratched his head not knowing what to do right at that moment ...he shook his head n then sat on his knees beside her ...itna ro kyun rahi hai ??? his voice sounded a bit restless.
Kyunke mere hath dukh rahe hai ...aur pair bhi ...aur yeh sab kuch Tumhare wajese hua...hhh...Antara complained in a choked voice.
Raghu removed her hands from her face and lit up his mobile ...Raghu started scanning her minutely moving his mobile from her top to bottom. She was looking like a distressed n scared fairy with her open long silky hair scattered on her front and back... She squeezed her wet long lash eyelashes at the light of his mobile. Raghu found this gesture of her very cute and adoring. Her sleeveless slender arms had few light cuts n bruises as her body got brushed with the wall... ...he flattened her palms and saw the soft skin of her palms were reddened and bruised due to the rope. Her cotton kurti was shredded a bit near her shoulder revealing her smooth fair skin and a bit of her innerwear which she was totally unaware of. Her foot from which Raghu had picked out a thorn few minutes back ...the place was swollen n bleeding a bit.
Raghu was a bit upset seeing her in that state. Her cuts n bruises and her tearful eyes affected deeply somewhere inside his system. He realized ...he never wanted this to happen to Antara...he would have never asked her to climb the wall if he had any idea that the rope and the wall could bruise her soft body this much.
He was lost looking at her with his mobile light...when abruptly he switched off his mobile and swiftly turned his face to his left. He sensed something wrong n danger approaching towards them...he stood up leaving her on the ground and cautiously looked between the dense leaves and saw Matron along with Charlie were out from the Orphanage and marching towards their direction.
Raghu was absolutely correct about matron...she was so restless to catch Antara red handed that she couldn't wait any more on the main gate...she left the main gate and started scanning the area outside the orphanage roaming her cautious unkind eyes to find out Antara as soon as possible...and unfortunately she was marching straight towards the wood...within few minutes she would reach Raghu and Antara no doubt.
Raghu bent down and in a lightening speed he held Antara and made her stand on her feet and before she could utter any word or shout he covered her mouth first with his palm and turned her to the direction where Matron and Charlie was approaching. He whispered in her ear... Dekh ...wo Hippo idharich aarahi hai ...panch minute mein hum jahan khade hain wahan pohoch jayegi ...!!! Raghu slowly removed his palm from her mouth.
Antara's knees went weak seeing Matron just few meters away from them. She felt her death was approaching her. The moon on the sky was beaming bright then ...if Raghu and Antara were not within the woody dark place ...Matron would hv noticed them easily by then.
Raghu looked at Antara and found her frozen with widened eyes. He jerked her stiffen body a bit n whispered in her ear again ...Antara !! Abh zid chod ...!!!...chal aaja...!!! Apun pohcha dega tereko...Bharosa rakh merepe!!!
Drowned in fear spell Antara looked at Raghu. He was standing just by the boundary wall gripping the rope with his right hand and his left hand stretched towards her...he gestured again Antara to come near him. Antara turned her face towards approaching Matron once ...then nervously n hasitantly took a step towards him.
Sochna bandh kar !!! jaldise paas aa jaa...aur kaske pakad mereko ...kaske nahi pakdegi toh jab upar jaunga toh tu pakka giregi ...aur pisa hua tamatar ki tarah faili hui milegi yehan ...samjhii!!! Raghu's husky harsh voice roamed in her ears.
Antara neared him a bit more and gripped the left sleeve of his jacket in her wobbling fist. Raghu looked at her grip once and then moved his eyes to her widened confused helpless innocent fearful eyes...Yedi hai kya tu ??? aise pakdegi mereko toh tu niche hi rah jayegi jab apun upad chadunga ...time waste mat kar ...chal ...aur paas aake kaske pakad mereko !!! Raghu almost ordered her lowering his voice. He could have forced her easily but Raghu didn't know why he didn't want to bully her at this state.
Antara was in hell dilemma ...she didn't know what to do ...whom to choose...on one side the deadly cruel Matron was approaching to her by every second and on the other side the most weird harsh unpredictable n horrifying person Raghu was there.
She knew very well what Matron would do with her once she got a chance and on the other hand she couldn't guess what was there in Raghu's mind.
What if he did anything weird with her ...up on the wall or made her fall right upon Matron...when she reached this place right here??????? Antara nervously shook her head thinking the consequesces.
Mundi hilana bandh kar !!!...Antara got startled by his deep husky voice...Mere jute pe pair rakh ke khadi ho ja aur apne dono hatho se mereko kaske pakad ...mere gale se latakna hai tereko!!! ...baat samajh mein ayi ??? Raghu's voice was dominating but not threatening.
Antara left his sleeve and came in front of him...she clutched his jacket on his chest with her both hands n put her one foot on his shoe and then another on his other. With her eyes down she wheezed nervously as she felt the deadly proximity with him...only her hands in between them was separating their torso to collide. His striking gaze ...n his masculine body warmth stroked Antara top to bottom making her tremble in fear for the unknown upshots ahead.
Mere gale se latak na hai tereko ...mere jacket se nahi ...!!! Raghu's husky voice flickered deep mischief.
Antara for the last time looked towards Matron who was about to enter the woody area and then raised her eyes to meet Raghu's which were just few inches away from her...staring at her deeply. What were those deep black eyes emanating? ...Antara tried but couldn't read them.
Antara didn't know what happen to her right at that moment ...she looked deep into his cavernous magnetic eyes in the dim moon light within the wood and forgot all her fear...she followed Raghu's instruction like a spellbound girl ...she left his jacket on his chest and rounded her slender arms around his neck withdrawing the barrier between them. She felt her soft bosoms mildly touching his rock hard chest. She shut her eyes closed.
The next second she felt Raghu encircling her waist firmly and securely with his left arm...pressing her evenly with his own body...she let out a small wheeze as she felt her softness crushed lightly on his hard frame and heard him asking softly in her ear ...Ready ???
Automatically Antara's arms got tightened on his neck.
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The moment Antara shakily stood on his shoes clutching his jacket on his chest Raghu felt good taking her weight entirely. When he asked her to hold him by his neck tightly leaving his jacket ...she hesitated first but did as she was told. She left Raghu's jacket ...looked at him with her big innocent eyes and encircled his neck with her slender arms and then closed her eyes...Raghu felt well. The feeling was not only good ...it was damn good. The reason behind it he didn't know and there was no time left to think over it.
He automatically n immediately wrapped his arm around her petite waist to held her more securely...her long silky hair brushed his arm on her waist...he heard her wheezing uneasily as her delicate body got pressed with his. The warmth of her tender body felt so soothing and her tranquil softness enthralled Raghu's soul. Savouring her lotus body aroma ...He tilted his head a bit snuggling her hair on her shoulder and whispered in her ear ... Ready???
In response Raghu heard her soft nervous wheeze and felt her arm lock on his neck got tightened.
A feeling of utter satisfaction n contentment ran through his nerves in his entire body making his each n every brain cell happy. The entire process made him smirk delightfully. Did he ever felt so content ...so delightful in his entire life ??? ...Raghu kept aside his thoughts ...he didn't have much time ...he needed to take Antara safely to her cottage ...keep her safe from her Matron. He had given his words to her and Raghunath was a man of his words...he kept his words to each n every person he dealt with, in his professional as well as personal life till date.
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Raghu yanked her body a bit up from his shoes helding her waist tightly in his left arm and placed his right boot on the wall. He rounded the rope in his right fist and left the ground. Antara gasped but remained her eyes closed and tightened her grip on him placing her head on his shoulder.
She could feel Raghu was moving up the wall like an expert leaving the ground behind carrying her with him. She wondered how he managed to take her weight along with him while climbing. His palm must be getting bruised for sure Antara thought.
Antara's trail of thoughts got interrupted...Sun !!! abh ek second ke liye apun tere kamar se hath hatayga ...wo rassi adjust karni hai isliye...mere gale se hath hataneka nahi...aur kaske pakad mereko !!! Samjhi ??? Raghu's alert calm low voice was heard. Antara felt Raghu stopped climbing n slowly removed his arm from her waist. As soon as he did so Antara's whole body was hanging from his neck. Within few seconds her arms started to ache. She realized Raghu was actually carrying her full weight by helding her waist by just his one arm and therefore she didn't feel any strain in her arms till he removed his grip from her.
Antara could hear and feel his deep breaths along with her own. After few seconds more Raghu securedly wraped her waist again with his left arm and adjusted her body on him n started climbing up...Tu thik hai ??? he asked in his typcal husky calm voice. The chorus noise of night creatures made the noise of Raghu's movement fade out completely.
Hmm...Antara wheezed feebly and slowly opened her eyes. She could see the ground below. Raghu had already climbed approximately fifteen feets high. Suddenly her eyes fell on Matron and Charlie... both reached the place where she and Raghu were standing just few minutes back. She feared Raghu and her pounding heart beats might alarm Matron about their existance above her.
Antara shuddered clinging to Raghu's body...she whimpered in his ear feebly...Rrr...Raghu...hhh...wo ...wo ...hamare thik niche ...khadi hai ...hhh...!!!
Rahne de ...!! Wo upar nahi dekhegi ...Kuch nahi hoga ...tu apni ankhen bandh kar le !!! ...Antara never heard such confident and assuring tone ever in her life.
What is this Raghu made of ???? Antara thought to herself and surprisingly her fear subsided. She forcefully removed her eyes from Matron who was scanning everywhere in the wood leaving the thirty feet high boundary wall. Matron couldn't think even in her worst nightmare that a guy carrying Antara right above her head climbing the wall so smoothly and silently. Matron searched Antara fiercely in the wood leaving no stone unturned ...then left the place and moved forward with a grumpy face along with Charlie.
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Few more minutes passed away...Antara could feel n hear Raghu was breathing heavily as he climbed up the wall. Few more seconds passed and suddenly she felt Raghu was making her sit somewhere ...Antara opened her eyes and found herself sitting on the top of the thirty feet high boundary wall with her legs hanging from her knees ...her right hand was securedly imprisoned in his left hand ...his deep back eyes gleaming in the moon light fixed on her with an irresistible smirk on his face...his sword locket glittered in the moonlight through his unzipped jacket and few unbottoned shirt enhancing his perfectly build up bare chest...few strands of his ruffled hair fell on his eyesight ...he was a bit panting n still hanging comfortably on the wall gripping the rope with his right hand ...his right boot placed on the wall firmly while his other leg hanging in the air...overall he looked damn handsome hell attractive and at the same time deadly dangerous.
All of a sudden he winked at her making her widening her eyes and then within seconds he sat on the wall facing her hanging his both legs either side of the wall.
Antara panicked ...she couldn't guess what was going on in his mind...what he would be doing with her the next second. She felt extreamely vulnerable sitting on top of the wall middle of the night with her one hand imprisoned in the hand of the most weird and dangerous person she had ever came across in her life.
She gathered her courage and asked him feebly ...tu ...tumne kaha tha...mujhe gh...ghar pohcha doge...hhh...!!! toh tu...tum ...she couldn't finish.
Haan toh?? ...apun ne kab kaha ke tujhe ghar nahi pohchaunga??? A deep mischief was playing in his husky voice and magnetic eyes.
Terese baat karni hai !!! Raghu declared in a cold dangerous yet impish tone.
Antara shuddered top to bottom ...Yehaaan ????
Hmmm...yehaan ...idharich..!!! kyunke yehan apun logoko koi disturb nahi karne wala...he announced like a predator.
Antara knew it would be fruitless even if she pleaded to him to let her go from this awkward weird risky sitting position. She sat there bending her head and body stiffened ...her hand still imprisoned in his hand not knowing what he wanted to talk to her.
She felt Raghu shifted and came nearer to her and impishly bent his head pretty down to meet her lowered eyes. She gasped and raised her eyes.
Hmm ...abh bol ...Raghu penetrated his piercing gaze into her fearful teary eyes and asked her softly ...Merese Shadi Karegi ??? he squeezed her ice cold palm and asked again ...Haan ...YA ...Naa...???his husky voice became deadly calm ...dangerous and blood curdling. His hard face stern eyes and and his deadly grip on her hand implied he was damn serious and ferocious. Antara felt a chilled fluid ran down her spine making her whole feature tremble badly. She was sure if she said no then definitely Raghu would throw her down from the wall.
She blinked twice looking at his hypnotic orbs then looked down the wall...the ground seemed so far away from her...she will die no doubt if she fell down. But what would be her life ahead if she agreed to marry this dangerous weird guy ...each and every moment she would die living with such a dreadful person...she thought.
Iske sath shadi karke har pal marne se toh yehi achha hai ke abhi meri zindegi khatam ho jaye...kitna accha hota agar main khud hi Matron ko awaz dedeti ...unka punishment bhi iss Raghu ke aage kam lagraha hai...main kyun iske baton mein agayi ??? main kitni badi bewakuf hun jo maan liya ke ye mujhe Matron se bachake mere ghar pohcha dega...!!!...Antara closed her eyes once thinking of Chilly Mother and Nandini and then took a deep breath n opened her eyes straight looking at Raghu ...
Haan ...Ya...Naa??? He again asked her making her tremble.
Agar naa kahungi ...hhh..toh ...tu..tum mujhe yehanse niche fenk doge ...hhh...hai na ...hhh??? Terrified Antara asked Raghu.
Not a line shook in his stern face...his eyes became darker and completely unreadable ...Hmmm...Fenk Dunga...!!! His fatal intention flickered in his gravely calm and dangerous voice.
Deadly silent moments passed away...even the night creatures seemed to stop their noise and wait for the fatal event to happen right in front of them making them the only eyewitness. Raghu's grip on her hand became tighter with the passing seconds and his frown got deeper on his forehead. Antaraaa...!!! Maine pucha ...Haan ...Ya...Naaa...Raghu jerked her stiffened feature.
Naa...hhh...!!!...Antara gasped hard n broke into tears but didn't sob...she kept on looking at his hypnotic fierce eyes ...tu..tumne mujhse jhoot kaha??? ...hhh...tum mujhe ...ghar ...nn...ahi jane doge ...mm...main samajh gayi ... tum mujhe car mein nahi mara ...aur ...hhh...abhi yehan upar se dhakka marke niche fenk doge..hhh... Tumhe ...Jo Karna hai karlo ...mm...main tu...tumse shadi ...nai karungi ...Nai Karungi ...Nai karungi...hhh...Samjhe tum Raghu ???hhh...
She panted n wiped her tears with the back of her free palm and kept her terrified but stubborn gaze intact on him. Raghu could feel her body trembling...her lips turned pale again and her palm in his hand became ice cold. She was scared to death due to him but didn't change her decision even she was under his intentionally created horrible pressure.
He had seen so many brawny looking men turned to simply ash under his deadly horrifying mental pressure. But this tender fragile delicate girl was so different...she was so innocent and nave that she said what was in her mind honestly and declared she would stick to it no matter what.
Raghu's hard jaws released slowly...his frown disappeared. His eyes flickered mischief again with a deep amusement and fascination. An irresistible smirk appeared on his face...Dekhte hain !!!...teri yeh "Naah" kab tak tikti hai...shadi toh apun terese karke rahega ...Samjhiii!!! ...his husky deep voice radiated pleasure and mischief.
He gave a soft tug on her hand and said softly ...ghar nahi jana kya ??? Raghunath apna wada kabhi nahi todta ...Chal ...Antara looked at him with deep anguish but didn't respond...her teary eyes emanated utter distrust confusion and bewilderment for him.
Raghu stood up on the wall n pulled up Antara. He could feel how her whole body was in tremor due to intense fear and anxiety...she couldn't even stand properly on her legs. Raghu took her weak body up on his shoulder and jumped from the wall and landed on the few feets away school building roof safely.
He put her down softly on the roof and started towards the cottage. On the way Raghu didn't tried to talk to her further ...but he kept on giving her fleeting glances. Her hand was still in his hand and he could feel her deep anguish and fury for him in her heart ...just through helding her hand. She was not at all looking at him...she was silently walking beside him wiping her silent tears from her cheeks time to time.
After a while finally Antara reached her cottage along with Raghu. The whole orphanage was silent and dark deep in their sleep. Raghu slowly tried to open the door of her cottage but found it locked from inside. Antara understood Stela had locked the door before sleeping. Now how would she go inside her cottage ??? if she knocked the door it would be obvious that she was out from cottage and even orphanage...and Stela would definitely tell everything to Matron. She was not a friend like Nandini. She was just opposite in nature and quiet dangerous. Fresh tears came running down her cheeks ...she raised her index finger to him and said in a deep anguished tone : abh main andar kaise jaun ?? main agar knock karungi to wo Stela jag jayegi aur Matron ko sab bata degi ...yeh saab kuch TUMHARE wajese ho raha hai...hhh...
Raghu looked at her sobbing anguished face and grinned : door se nahi tu window se ghar ke andar jayegi ...chal ...he pulled her away from the main door and took her to the back of the cottage near the window of her changing room. He pushed the window and it opened wide. He turned to Antara and placed his hands on the curves of her waist and easily lifted her and made her sit on the window pane. Antara didn't even get a single second to protest against his action. Like a doll she sat on the window pane and looked down at him widening her eyes n parting her lips.
Raghu rested his both hands on her lap and looked up at her...Dekh kya rahi hai ??? pohcha diya tujhe tere ghar tak ...abh andar ja aur chupke se jake apne bed pe soja aur andar se door unlock kar de...Matron ya koi bhi puchega ke tu itna time raat ko kahan gayab thi toh bataneka ki tu changing room mein hi thi ...aur wahin so gayi thi ... baad mein nid se jagi toh bed pe aake so gayi ...baat samajh mein ayi ???
Antara moved her teary anguished eyes from him and tried to push down his hands from her lap. Raghu arrested her hands in his ...then placing a hand upon the pane he jumped up and sat beside her and simply ordered : Smile !!!
She looked at him perplexed and bemused. She had tears in her eyes ...she was hell scared and worried to death and this guy was ordering her to smile !!! Antara just couldn't believe her ears.
Achha ...chal thik hai ...rahne de ...tera abhi mood nahi hai ...tu ja ...ja ke soja ...Raghu released her hands slowly.
Antara tried to pull her legs up on the pane when Raghu again stopped her ...Sun ...!!! Wo ...sone se pahle change kar lena ...he tugged her hair behind her ear n pointed to her left shoulder...teri kapre yehan fati hui hai ... kisiko dikh gayi toh locha ho sakta hai ...
Antara twitched her neck and felt her shredded kurti ...she squeezed her eyes in embarracement and covered her left shoulder with her right palm immediately.
Haan ...aur ek baat ...aaj tu jab change kar rahithi toh apunko tera sab kuch dikharahatha iss khidki ke creek se ...aage se jab bhi change karegi tab khidki thik se bandh kar lena ...kyunke har koi Raghunath Naik NAHI hai ...jo aisa mouka jaanbuch kar miss kar dega...Samjhiii??? His naughty grin extended to his deep magnetic eyes.
Antara couldn't believe what he said right then...he saw her while changing ???? her entire face lost its natural color ...blood drooped from her face n became pale. She stiffened like a lifeless rock for few seconds then burst out like an erupting volcano. She became mad and started hitting him with her fists black n blue...left and right. The sudden outburst of her volcanic fury even made Raghu motionless n dumb for few seconds.
...Oyeee!!! kar kya rahi hai ???? sabko jagaygi kya??? Itna bharak kyun gayi??? Apun nahi dekha yaar kuch bhi ...Raghu tried to stop her n calm her down but it augmented her fury more. She started crying quiet loud n when became totally uncontrollable Raghu wraped her in his one arm locking her both hands and covered her mouth with his other hand tightly...so tight that it was even difficult to breathe for her. Her mad actions subsided in his deadly iron grip along with lack of oxygen.
She tried to break free and inhale but Raghu kept her like that for few more seconds then loosened his iron grip slowly and whispered gazing at her teary shaken humiliated eyes ...Nahi dekha tujhe bin kapro mein...kabhi dekhunga bhi Nahi teri marzi ke bagair...chala gaya tha apun wahan se jab tu change kar rahi thi ...Sacchi!!!
The truth and honesty flickered so powerfully in his voice and his eyes that Antara calmed down...Raghu slowly released her mouth and tugged her scattered hair behind her ears. She was still in his arm totally exhausted bewildered and locked up ...He slowly n softly wiped her tears from her cheeks with his thumb...and said... Sorry...!!! Wo... apun tera wo cake khaliaya tha ...aur... tereko zabardasti khilaya tha ...tu ...naraz ho ke chali gayi...isliye ...wo...apun sorry...bolneko aya tha ...!!!
Raghu jumped down from the window leaving confounded Antara there and rested his hands on her lap ...Chal... Abh tu ja aur change karke soja ...!!! Apun chalta hai ...aur haaan...
Antara's eyes again widened expecting an another upcoming shock from him ...Raghu palced his hand beneath her knees and put up her legs upon the window completely...Wo...kal subha taiyar rahna ...apun ayega ...tujhe lene ...pura dinke liye...tension mat le ...tereko uthake nahi le jaunga !!! he chukled naughtily ...Mother ka permission leke hi tujhe le jaunga ...Good night!!!
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The next morning Sun was smilling widely in the sky making the whole universe shine and charged up with his beam. Little Chilly seemed to be the happiest one in the orphanage. She hopped and hopped and hopped with excitement and then gave Raghu a huge puppy on his cheek. Raghu smirked seeing her innocent exicitement and gave a feathery punch on her chubby cheek...ja jake jaldi se taiyar hoke dour ke aaja mere pas ...teri Antara didi ko bhi sath me lana!!!
Chilly ran from Mother's cottage straight to her's. Mother smiled merrily looking at Raghu and Chilly.
Antara was sitting on the stairs of her cottage resting her back on the wall lost in her own thoughts. Last night she did as Raghu told her to do. She changed her night dress which was torn and silently came to her bed...she opened the main door lock and layed down on her bed closing her eyes. After an hour or so when she heard knock on the door she understood it was Nandini. Nandini got in and found Antara sleeping on her bed. After that everything happened as Raghu told her ...Antara stated that she was in changing room and somehow fell asleep there and when got awake she moved to her bed. As no one checked the changing room but checked the whole orphanage ...was bound to believe her what she said.
Antara was sad that she lied to Mother but she had no other option left. Everything happened due to that weird Raghu ...she thought. Mother zarur usse aaj na kah degi ...aise kaise wo mujhe bahar leke jayega ...wo bhi pura din ke liye ...Oh My God ...main kaise rahungi uss ajeeb khatarnak insaan ke sath pura din ...pata nahi kya kya karega wo mere sath !!!...main nahi jaungi ...haan !!! she consoled herself.
Anta Didiii !!!!...Chilly's happy excited voice broke Antara's trail of thoughts. Didiii Didiii...jaldi jaldi Chilly ko taiya kaddo...!!! Ragu aya hai lene !!!...Ragu ne bola Chilly aw Anta didi dono jayegi Raghu ke sath ghumne ...aw Mother ne haan bol diya ...Yeeeyyy...!!!!
To be continued...

Edited by pampz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res!!πŸ˜†... again me 1st...πŸ₯³ but at first lets celebrate ki finally pampu nee update diya.⭐️
Thank god yaar... bahut intezaar karwaya tune.😭... fir itna wait karwayegi too dekh lena.😑
coming to your update...😊
Vampy... no one can doubt about your talents..every adjective seemed meaningless in front of you. I mean it very very much... i am reading your updates for almost a year and let me declare you one thing today...😊
THIS IS THE BEST... UMMM NOT BEST... THE BESTEST UPDATE FROM YOU TILL NOW!!!
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
what can i say yaar... your updates are like a magnet... it pulled us... get us enthralled within it...drove into some other world... for a moment i really thought that i was not inside my room... i am in that same jungle in that night witnessing every moment on my own eyes...
This is something for which i am always thirsty... a story doesn't only evolves with only hero heroine's lovey dovey moments, catch trip fall... no not that... it depends on the plot, the environment, the untold emotions, the capability to go deep down in some character and peeping deep through their heart... and honestly... i get it only in some few people's writing and you are one of them...😊
seriously... u are growing day by day like a blooming flower... before this update, my fav one was ur Jaan's latest update... where u draw that deep meaningful scene of rantara in flower valley... but this update really took that place... jio vampy jii..kash hum aap ke charan sparsh kar pate...⭐️
Seriously, i was full on ready to get scared as usual... but my my!!... yeh kya tha pampz... tune too puri bandobast kar dii hain sare readers kooo dreamland bhejnee ke liye... specially our super romance kii always bhukhi hinu jii,... jinkoo aap nee yee update dedicate kiye hain... Yedi kii kya halat hone wali hain... get redy for her yediest coment...πŸ˜†
It was like a shining moonlight in dark sky... it was like a patch of another beautiful color in dark canvass... an unknown fresh wind of sweetness in this dark story...😊... for a moment i felt like i am in some fairy land witnessing some daring prince escorting her beautiful princess from crueel evil peoples... specially when raghu was going upward in the wall taking antara securely in her arms and at last while he securely departed her in her cottage, that scene... while antara was seating on the window pen and raghu at his front placing his hand on her lap... i just imagined the whole scene and understood how beautiful frame it was... a perfect posture of submission for lifetime, the lethal unbeatable king of dark world is slowly getting captured by a vulnerable innocent girl's divinity...
So many beautiful moments were there in the update...
When antara told raghu to leave but he didn't and was determined to escort her safely to her place
The way he said "Bharosa rakh mere pe.." This words are treat to listen from raghu...
Their conversation on the wall... where antara's utter stuborness made him amused a bit... he even threatened her to push down from the wall but she didn't care... and raghu even more determined to listen 'Yes' from her...
when he admited about stalking her through the window while she was changing... and how he make her believe that he didn't even glimpsed towards her while she was changing and he would never do such things...
there are countless moments shinning like a diamond... if i starts to detect each and every thing.. the list will go on...
You are a gem u know.,.. like ur updates...
God bless u and you keep blooming more and more...
and finally...
I still don't want to drown into lala land.,,πŸ˜† i know u are again going to give us another shocker in next update and make us confused... at laast it's a dark story... pata naahin kab kya hoo jaayein...πŸ˜†
Keep shining just like this... waiting for much more gems from ur magic box from future...
lots of love...πŸ€—
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pampu ji thank you for updating!
This update brought a smile to my saddened face
It was beautiful darling 😳
"Merey se shaadi karegi..that just gave me goosebumps 😳
Haan ...aur ek baat ...aaj tu jab change kar rahithi toh apunko tera sab kuch dikharahatha iss khidki ke creek se ...aage se jab bhi change karegi tab khidki thik se bandh kar lena ...kyunke har koi Raghunath Naik NAHI hai ...jo aisa mouka jaanbuch kar miss kar dega...Samjhiii??? I loved this line! πŸ˜‰
Nahi dekha tujhe bin kapro mein...kabhi dekhunga bhi Nahi teri marzi ke bagair...chala gaya tha apun wahan se jab tu change kar rahi thi ...Sacchi!!! This line gave me butterflies.
Wonderful update. .loved it a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

res!!πŸ˜†... again me 1st...πŸ₯³
tu hi first hogi yedi ...cos koi aur inni pyar se yeh story nahi read karta ...πŸ˜†

but at first lets celebrate ki finally pampu nee update diya.⭐️

Thank god yaar... bahut intezaar karwaya tune.😭... fir itna wait karwayegi too dekh lena.😑

kya karun yaar ...bohot pressure mein hun ...aajkal ...
coming to your update...😊
Vampy... no one can doubt about your talents..every adjective seemed meaningless in front of you. I mean it very very much... i am reading your updates for almost a year and let me declare you one thing today...😊
THIS IS THE BEST... UMMM NOT BEST... THE BESTEST UPDATE FROM YOU TILL NOW!!!
πŸ‘πŸ‘

Oye really ??? pata nahi yaar lagta hai ek tu hi yeh dark story read karke diwani hoti jarahi hai ...LOLZZZ but whatever it is ...i wll keep on writing this story even if only u read this in the forum...πŸ˜†
what can i say yaar... your updates are like a magnet... it pulled us... get us enthralled within it...drove into some other world... for a moment i really thought that i was not inside my room... i am in that same jungle in that night witnessing every moment on my own eyes...
This is something for which i am always thirsty... a story doesn't only evolves with only hero heroine's lovey dovey moments, catch trip fall... no not that... it depends on the plot, the environment, the untold emotions, the capability to go deep down in some character and peeping deep through their heart... and honestly... i get it only in some few people's writing and you are one of them...😊

oyehoye ...thank u Riyu Yedi...tereko sachhi me yeh update inni acchi lagi ...ohhh its a greattt feeling yaar ...u made my day as usual ...
seriously... u are growing day by day like a blooming flower... before this update, my fav one was ur Jaan's latest update... where u draw that deep meaningful scene of rantara in flower valley... but this update really took that place... jio vampy jii..kash hum aap ke charan sparsh kar pate...⭐️
Seriously, i was full on ready to get scared as usual... but my my!!... yeh kya tha pampz... tune too puri bandobast kar dii hain sare readers kooo dreamland bhejnee ke liye... specially our super romance kii always bhukhi hinu jii,... jinkoo aap nee yee update dedicate kiye hain... Yedi kii kya halat hone wali hain... get redy for her yediest coment...πŸ˜†

yess yaar iss update mein hidden romance hai ...na Raghu na Antara kisiko pata nahi ke kya horaha hai dono ke beechπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
It was like a shining moonlight in dark sky... it was like a patch of another beautiful color in dark canvass... an unknown fresh wind of sweetness in this dark story...😊... for a moment i felt like i am in some fairy land witnessing some daring prince escorting her beautiful princess from crueel evil peoples... specially when raghu was going upward in the wall taking antara securely in her arms and at last while he securely departed her in her cottage, that scene... while antara was seating on the window pen and raghu at his front placing his hand on her lap... i just imagined the whole scene and understood how beautiful frame it was... a perfect posture of submission for lifetime, the lethal unbeatable king of dark world is slowly getting captured by a vulnerable innocent girl's divinity..Hayee Riyu tere bina aur koun inni aacchi likh sakti hai...loved ur lines πŸ˜ƒ
So many beautiful moments were there in the update...
When antara told raghu to leave but he didn't and was determined to escort her safely to her place
The way he said "Bharosa rakh mere pe.." This words are treat to listen from raghu...
Their conversation on the wall... where antara's utter stuborness made him amused a bit... he even threatened her to push down from the wall but she didn't care... and raghu even more determined to listen 'Yes' from her...
when he admited about stalking her through the window while she was changing... and how he make her believe that he didn't even glimpsed towards her while she was changing and he would never do such things...
there are countless moments shinning like a diamond... if i starts to detect each and every thing.. the list will go on...
You are a gem u know.,.. like ur updates...
God bless u and you keep blooming more and more...
and finally...
I still don't want to drown into lala land.,,πŸ˜† i know u are again going to give us another shocker in next update and make us confused... at laast it's a dark story... pata naahin kab kya hoo jaayein...πŸ˜† ...tune sahi kaha ...pata nahi kab kya ho jaye ...Its a story of fatal attraction turning into love ...and love is not always flowery and free of all negativeness...its a story about the journey of knowing what is love n how much it should be valued or something else in this materialistic world will win over love ????

and am sure u wll be shocked seeing whoz gonna fall in love first...is it at all love ??? or only mere attraction which is fatal and only physical...??? or love is the need to feel protected and secured ?? i think i shd stop now ...as mera bheja satak gayela hai ...love ka postmortem karte karte ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Keep shining just like this... waiting for much more gems from ur magic box from future...
lots of love...πŸ€—

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Pampu ji thank you for updating!
This update brought a smile to my saddened face
It was beautiful darling 😳
"Merey se shaadi karegi..that just gave me goosebumps 😳
Haan ...aur ek baat ...aaj tu jab change kar rahithi toh apunko tera sab kuch dikharahatha iss khidki ke creek se ...aage se jab bhi change karegi tab khidki thik se bandh kar lena ...kyunke har koi Raghunath Naik NAHI hai ...jo aisa mouka jaanbuch kar miss kar dega...Samjhiii??? I loved this line! πŸ˜‰
Nahi dekha tujhe bin kapro mein...kabhi dekhunga bhi Nahi teri marzi ke bagair...chala gaya tha apun wahan se jab tu change kar rahi thi ...Sacchi!!! This line gave me butterflies.
Wonderful update. .loved it a lot.




First u tell me why r u sad ??? but am glad that my update made u feel better and u smiled...thats an achievement no doubt ...

luv u Sanji... be in ur GUNDI mode always ...yehi tereko suit karta hai ...don be sad yaar ...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz




<font color="#990099"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">First u tell me why r u sad ??? but am glad that my update made u feel better and u smiled...thats an achievement no doubt ...

luv u Sanji... be in ur GUNDI mode always ...yehi tereko suit karta hai ...don be sad yaar ...</font>
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Thanks pampu!
I love u guys yaar..
You guys proof to be my strength and encouragement in some way or the other.
Apna "Bold and Beautiful finish karlu fir aajaaongi gundi mode me yaar.
Mwaah...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

πŸ˜† ...tune sahi kaha ...pata nahi kab kya ho jaye ...Its a story of fatal attraction turning into love ...and love is not always flowery and free of all negativeness...its a story about the journey of knowing what is love n how much it should be valued or something else in this materialistic world will win over love ????

I think you are mentioning about the moment when raghu had to deliver antara to his dealer as he promised. I am just waiting for that part you know... thats gonna be highlight point. As u mentioned about materialistic world.. that means u are talking about money... yup i didn't forget that for raghu money matters most in his life and he can go to any limit for money and i don't think he would be changed all in a nightfall... it's not at all possible...for now, there is just some ice is melting in raghu... just like a very little crack in a unbreakable wall.. but still that crack was not a bit effective to smash down the wall totally...
I just wanna know that would he do same thing to antara as he did with his other deals. Afterall still she is nothing but a deal to him... yes he might be fatally attracted to antara... just like a little boy get attached to his new plaything, but still that feeling is not so huge that could overcome his worship of money... for now, as precaution... i am expecting worse to happen at future...πŸ˜•... but koi nahin... it is vampy's story... our vampy can make beautiful each and every crappiest thing in the world with her write ups..πŸ˜†

and am sure u wll be shocked seeing whoz gonna fall in love first...is it at all love ??? or only mere attraction which is fatal and only physical...??? or love is the need to feel protected and secured ?? i think i shd stop now ...as mera bheja satak gayela hai ...love ka postmortem karte karte ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
well who ever will fall first... either raghu and antara... both will give a shocker for me... If antara would fell for this weirdest guy of his life who used to scare her from the very first day he met.. that would be just another shocking thing.. aur raghu,. uski too baat hii mat karo yaar..πŸ˜†... as i said.. uska too abhi bhi. "apna sapna money money.." phase chal raha hain..🀣... and also the harsh and dreadful background he has, his upbringing... those things really doesn't allow him to even understand that kind of tender feeling like love or emotions.... soo uske taraf see too door door tak koi chances nahin hain...
but still looking at the title of the story.. i guess may be, antara will fall first for raghu.. as u mentioned that there will be a huge betrayal between them..the pain, rage..as he would break her heart into pices or something like that... and i think it will happen when the real reason will come out in front of antara that why raghu was hell stubborn to marry her... only because of money... ..
But u know i will love to read that if something different happened beyond my thought,πŸ˜‰ and yes pampy jii aap mere reply se affected mat ho naa... yee bas mere thoughts hain...πŸ˜†... aap jaise story koo progress karna chahte hain bilkul waisey hii kujiye... i know whatever u will think it would be the best thing!!!😳
do update whenever time permits...😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
what a lovely update dear!!!!
loved it... ❀️...
in dis update we got to see...
other side of d"dark" raghu...😊..
he s caring...jst loved d way he saved..
antar frm dat matron πŸ˜›...
n also when he said raghu apna
vaada nibhata h...
surprise package again he asked ..
antara to marry him πŸ˜‰..
here i really liked antara...hw boldly..
she refused again...though raghu remained
calm hearing dat ..i think hes confident
dat he vl win over her πŸ‘πŸΌ...
dis is sumthing different n ovely ..
really waiting fr antaras day out with raghu 😳.,
hope no gadbad happens...
thanks pamp fr lovely update dear..
do update soon n thanks..
tkcr dear...
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

what a lovely update dear!!!!
loved it... ❀️...
in dis update we got to see...
other side of d"dark" raghu...😊..
he s caring...jst loved d way he saved..
antar frm dat matron πŸ˜›...
n also when he said raghu apna
vaada nibhata h...
surprise package again he asked ..
antara to marry him πŸ˜‰..
here i really liked antara...hw boldly..
she refused again...though raghu remained
calm hearing dat ..i think hes confident
dat he vl win over her πŸ‘πŸΌ...
dis is sumthing different n ovely ..
really waiting fr antaras day out with raghu 😳.,
hope no gadbad happens...
thanks pamp fr lovely update dear..
do update soon n thanks..
tkcr dear...
hugs




thanx Pri ...inni lambi update maine ne ki ...but still u read it with ur patience ...and liked it ...it really made my day yaar ...love u

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