Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Pampu ji thanks for updating yaar. πŸ˜ƒ
Teri ek update ke liye I became a gundi! 😎
Abh tu dreamland me waapas entry maar sakti hai πŸ˜‰
Sar bhi khuja sakti hai πŸ˜ƒ
Coming to the update. .it was superb! πŸ‘πŸΌ
Raghu shared his sandwich yaar..he doesn't seem that bad but patah nai aagey kiya hoga
Loved the scene where raghu pulls her kurti down 😳
Wonderfully written πŸ‘
I almost stop breathing when I read your updates
A chumma for you yedi ❀️
Update soon.



thank u Sanji ...for liking the update ...ur review means a lot to me always ...and teri chumma haiii...and thank you Gundi ke tune finally mereko permission de hi di firse dream land janeko aur sar khujaneko ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

arey yaad to ayega hi re ...after all ye sari ke sare stories toh DDEJ rantara pe hi based hai na ...what a visual treat were those episodes ...ahaaa..yaad dilake humra mood off kar diya tune yedi 😑
Kaan pakar ke sorry yaar fir se yaad nahin dilaungi!!! maaf kar de!! Sowiiieee!!!!!!!😭😭

aur padeshan kya main toh tere review padke sidha cloud no 9 pe pohoch gayi πŸ˜†...tujhe aachha laga update matlap that means a looot to me yaar ...kab samjhegi ?????😭

ohh madamcloud 9 se niche aao aur jaldi jaldi next update likhna suru karoo!!πŸ˜† i am so demanding for this story!!😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
wohooo...what an update 😊..
it ws like a roller coaster ride πŸ˜›...
pta nh m kya kya soch liya tha k raghu
yeh toh nh krega woh toh nh krega 🀣...
m bh na πŸ˜†...
grt bt really felt bad fr antara..😭..
she ws about to collapse... yeh raghu toh
bda dangerous hai 😑...what is he upto ...
n on d other hand orphanage too is messed up
worrying n looking fr antara...
raghu vl exploit dis situation of antara to
make her marry him...
bt we also got to see raghus soft side..
still he cares fr her.. 😊...
he made her eat n drink...
really a grt update dear...
loved it...eventhough dark πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰...
thanks fr update ...takecare...hugsss...
😊 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

wohooo...what an update 😊..
it ws like a roller coaster ride πŸ˜›...
pta nh m kya kya soch liya tha k raghu
yeh toh nh krega woh toh nh krega 🀣...
m bh na πŸ˜†...

haha thanx Pri for loving the update ...am so glad that u enjoyed it ...
grt bt really felt bad fr antara..😭..
she ws about to collapse... yeh raghu toh
bda dangerous hai 😑...what is he upto ...

haan yaar he is very badmash n dangerous ...πŸ˜†
n on d other hand orphanage too is messed up
worrying n looking fr antara...
raghu vl exploit dis situation of antara to
make her marry him...

Pri tune kya guess mari hai ...haha ...lets see what happens ...πŸ˜‰
bt we also got to see raghus soft side..
still he cares fr her.. 😊...
he made her eat n drink...

yesss...πŸ˜†
really a grt update dear...
loved it...eventhough dark πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰...
thanks fr update ...takecare...hugsss...

huggs to you tooo dear ...n thanx so much πŸ˜ƒ
😊 πŸ˜ƒ




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

magnificent mind blowing exquisite update



thanx Rima πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

Awesome update Pampz 😳
Loved it very much !!
Continue soon 😊



thanx Anjali ..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aise update dekhkar...😳...aap karna kya chahte ho......u r out to kill d ardent readers...πŸ€ͺ...Pampy d Vampy...😈...πŸ˜†...

Waha Antara darr rahi thi...πŸ˜’...aur yaha hum...πŸ€“...bas heart-attack aana baaki tha...πŸ’”...
kitne saare emotions se update padha......iska explanation nahi hai...πŸ€ͺ..πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†....sambhalna mushkil ho gaya...❀️...πŸ₯Ί...😲...πŸ˜‰..😳..😊...lekin phir padhkar hi dum lete hain......πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜›...😎...kya samjhe...???!!!...😎....πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...

Haan Antu ki tarah behosh nahi huwe......πŸ€ͺ...πŸ€”...baaki uski saari feelings humne feel kiye...πŸ€“...πŸ˜•...πŸ˜‰...😊...😎...πŸ˜†...
yeh Raghu ka Anokha Andaaz...😎...samaj sakte hain k uske taraf se yahi tareeka tha......πŸ‘πŸΌ...Antu se baat karneka...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜›...
Jab chapter ke end tak pahunchi...tab jaake kahi calm down ho payi...πŸ˜ƒ...πŸ˜†...
Mujhe toh yeh Raghu ka Unique Dating Scene laga...πŸ˜†...πŸ˜‰...Ladki ko pehle darao...aur maze lo..πŸ˜‰....phir khana khilao...πŸ˜›...πŸ˜†...🀣...πŸ˜‰...
i bet he dint expect Antu to get unconcious...😲...πŸ˜•...n he immediately approached to aid her...😳..πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...
kuch toh chal raha hai uske dimag mein......(or rather aapke dimaag mein...πŸ˜‰...)...lagta hai lambi planning karke aayein hain...πŸ€”...πŸ€“...
yeh jaankar bhi ki...orphanage mein uthal machi hai...😳...aaraam se---phelkar letein hain janaab...πŸ€”...locha hai boss...Kuch toh gadbad hai...😲...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...
agar woh... jis raaste se Antu ko uthakar laaya...ussi taraf se pahuncha bhi de...lekin explaination kya degi Antu---sabko...πŸ˜•...(...scratching head...πŸ€”......)...

yaar dimaag ko aur mat chakrao......aur jaldi update karo...πŸ˜†...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...
i dont think k yeh bataane ki zarurat hai...ki aapke Anokhe-detailed-Unique-Andaaz...πŸ˜ƒ...is just...too much...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...out of d world...😳...😊...just like Raghu...😳...n his Hatke Andaaz...😳...πŸ˜‰...⭐️...πŸ˜ƒ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice dear..raghu bohot denger hai..but lovely story...k
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats that ur prob with IF is solved..😊
update ke liye kya bolun main..mujhe tragic bhi lagi aur comic bhi..
raghu sunta raha sunta rha..jab use laga ki aaj wo antu ke aansuon main doob ke marne wala hai tab jakr use chup karaya.πŸ˜†...antu was sooo scared yr..sach mein raghu ne award dene layak kaam to kiya nhi hai..?πŸ˜†..the fear...captured her so strongly minute by minute she was perplexed what will he do?..what will be his next move to threaten her?.....but agr raghu sher hai..to antu bhi sherni hai..she gathered her strength n threw her frustration...what a girl?..bravo!πŸ‘
but raghu dealt with his very own way..he is so mined.but ye kya?...wo dinner main sirf sandwich khata hai kya?.πŸ˜†..ya aaj ye sab krna tah isilye proper dinner nhi kiya?...🀣.well he is going to marry with her..isiliye abhi se sharing n caring.πŸ˜‰..half sandwich se antu ka peth bhar hi gaya hoga..last scene was amazing yrπŸ˜†...dono bilkul lovers ke trah chupte chupte orphanage pahunche...hehe..but khatra gate pr ekdum charge hokr baitha hai..😈raghu will save her from this trouble..but will antu complaint about him to mother??...very curious to know more..
thanks fr updating..love u.πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Aise update dekhkar...😳...aap karna kya chahte ho......u r out to kill d ardent readers...πŸ€ͺ...Pampy d Vampy...😈...πŸ˜†...


Waha Antara darr rahi thi...πŸ˜’...aur yaha hum...πŸ€“...bas heart-attack aana baaki tha...πŸ’”...
kitne saare emotions se update padha......iska explanation nahi hai...πŸ€ͺ..πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†....sambhalna mushkil ho gaya...❀️...πŸ₯Ί...😲...πŸ˜‰..😳..😊...lekin phir padhkar hi dum lete hain......πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜›...😎...kya samjhe...???!!!...😎....πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...

Haan Antu ki tarah behosh nahi huwe......πŸ€ͺ...πŸ€”...baaki uski saari feelings humne feel kiye...πŸ€“...πŸ˜•...πŸ˜‰...😊...😎...πŸ˜†...


yeh Raghu ka Anokha Andaaz...😎...samaj sakte hain k uske taraf se yahi tareeka tha......πŸ‘πŸΌ...Antu se baat karneka...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜›...

HAhahAHAHA...what a review yaar Andy ...LOLZZZ ...i can understand yaar ...likhte waqt mera bhi wohi haal horatha ...it was Raghu isliye maine likha aur tum sab ne read bhi kiya ...koi aur nalayak hota and he doing these things with any girl ...its so much shattering n sad ...i know ...but it is Raghu so everything is fine ..πŸ˜†

Jab chapter ke end tak pahunchi...tab jaake kahi calm down ho payi...πŸ˜ƒ...πŸ˜†...
Mujhe toh yeh Raghu ka Unique Dating Scene laga...πŸ˜†...πŸ˜‰...Ladki ko pehle darao...aur maze lo..πŸ˜‰....phir khana khilao...πŸ˜›...πŸ˜†...🀣...πŸ˜‰...
i bet he dint expect Antu to get unconcious...😲...πŸ˜•...n he immediately approached to aid her...😳..πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...

YUPPP...u r right dear ...Raghu toh mazese dara raha tha Antu ko ...he dint expect she wd get unconcious...aage aage dekho Raghu kya ...kya karta hai ...πŸ˜†
kuch toh chal raha hai uske dimag mein......(or rather aapke dimaag mein...πŸ˜‰...)...lagta hai lambi planning karke aayein hain...πŸ€”...πŸ€“...
yeh jaankar bhi ki...orphanage mein uthal machi hai...😳...aaraam se---phelkar letein hain janaab...πŸ€”...locha hai boss...Kuch toh gadbad hai...😲...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...
agar woh... jis raaste se Antu ko uthakar laaya...ussi taraf se pahuncha bhi de...lekin explaination kya degi Antu---sabko...πŸ˜•...(...scratching head...πŸ€”......)...

hmmm wait and watch ...lolzz

yaar dimaag ko aur mat chakrao......aur jaldi update karo...πŸ˜†...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜ƒ...
i dont think k yeh bataane ki zarurat hai...ki aapke Anokhe-detailed-Unique-Andaaz...πŸ˜ƒ...is just...too much...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...out of d world...😳...😊...just like Raghu...😳...n his Hatke Andaaz...😳...πŸ˜‰...⭐️...πŸ˜ƒ...

thankyou dear ...loved ur anokha detailed unique andaaz review ...love to read ur review πŸ˜ƒ

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