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Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr
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OMG Pampz...wat an update yaar...just too good...👏...mind-blowing yaar...👍🏼...loved it to d core...❤️...🤗...n even got confused n scared...😕......🤪...🤔...😆...haha thanx Andy dear !!! and so happy to know that am to some extent successfull to scare n confuse u ..hahai read it 2-3 days before...but cudn't comment...😔..may be it was 3-4 days ago..🤔...can't remember exactly though...🤓...🤔...Awwwnw abt d update...😊...
Raghu cudn't understand y it affected him...wen Antu ran away from him...refusing on his face...😳...🤔...Raghu knows dat dey cross-checked on him...🤔...i thought he will b bothered by MMs reaction atleast...🤔...Raghu knows everything what is going behind him ...he has powerful networku know ...but MM ka reaction leke wo shayad worried nahi hai ...pata hai usse wo yeda kya kar sakta hai and to what extent ...he is worry free about MM😆
oh so cutely he bonded wid chilly...😳...n even told her dat Antus angry on him...he listened to her scolding n also advice...😃...Chilly wants deir patch up...😊...den telling him hw to manao Antu n abt d cottage no. n kissing on his cheek...Raghu instantly connected wid her...😳...Raghu told Chilly to give d Lotuses to Antu...(..is Lotus ur fav. flower...???...😃...)...haha i love all the flowers on earth and just go mad with each one whn it comes to my hand...😆actually Lotus here is special for Antu ...she loves lotuses ...and our Raghu darling finds similarity bet lotus flower n her ...even he feels that she smells like a lotus flower ...actually this came in my mind when i was going through some ancient sanskrit literature (translation). i found there the ancient pandits described that a beautiful pure hearted girl should always smell like a fresh lotus...her body aroma bound to be exactly like fresh lotus... devine mild and extremely charming. thats why they called a girl with best features (physically n mentally)as PADMINI.
So i just made Raghu to inhale her ...loosing his control in the mall ...and instantly he connected her with a fresh beautiful lotus ...whose body aroma is like a lotus too...LOLZZ😆...(According to the ancient Indian gyany pandits the best girls always do hve a lotus body aromaRaghu remembering all d actions-reactions wid Antara...😊...n wanted to confront her...🤔...
i was so much cherishing while reading d way Raghu entered d orphanage...concealing himself wid his black hooded jacket to blend in d shadows......i was in full drooling mode......😳...😃...only u can describe Raghu in such a detailed manner...his each n every slightest move...captured n portrayed so marvelously...😊...👏...Awww...really Andy ?? ohh thank u somuch😃😃😆
Antu is devastated n trying to compose herself...😔...she wants to talk to mother abt it n refuse d proposal...she also came to kno abt Raghu-Chilly's meeting n dat chilly likes Raghu...😲...
Raghu found Antu...n he reverted at d last moment wen Antu was changing...😲...🤔...👍🏼...(..Again a well described scene...)...👏...haha yess yaar Raghu is dark no doubt but not a degraded animal.
OMG...wat r u planning re...???...i thot he has come to speak to her...par yeh toh Antu ko utha k legaya......n sound-proof gaadi mein bandh karliya...😲...Aakhir karna kya chahta hai yeh ladka...aise woh kaise usse shaadi k liye Haan bulwayega...😕...🤔...baat ko banaane aaya hai...ya bigaadne...???......🤪...haha yess abhi tak jo bhi Raghu ne kiya ...wo sabse he is begarofying Antu's mind more n more
Waiting...for d upcoming story...😳...u give such intricate updates...dat totally get involved in it...😃......n i wasnt feeling scared in d last car scene..may b coz i hav a feeling dat he wont do wrong wid Antu der...😊...may b he'll just speak to her...in his hatke andaaz...😉...coz Antu toh usse seedhe tarike se baat karne se rahi...😕...😆...Continue dear...😳...🤗...haha YESSS
Oh Andy thanx so much re for this wonderful chirpy and chrispy review ...loved it ...u really make me sit to write down jaldi jaldi the next update ...luv u Andyyy😃🤗
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