||Childhood We Lived||~A ss by me and avi *Chapter2* update on page 11 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
firstly a bigie waala sry
thodi late ho gayi
so sorry
now about the update
it was awesome guys...
enjoyed every bit
it was beautifully written
chotu nd chutki u two rocked
chutki now waiting for ur part
chotu thnx for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE-This a big change in the story.We just ecalled the story of childhood we lived and we realised that it not more than of 10 chapters.So sorry we change it into a ss.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: crazygirl4arvi

firstly a bigie waala sry

thodi late ho gayi
so sorry
now about the update
it was awesome guys...
enjoyed every bit
it was beautifully written
chotu nd chutki u two rocked
chutki now waiting for ur part
chotu thnx for the pm

It's okk di par next time se yeh galti maaf nhi hogi๐Ÿ˜›
Thankyou so much di...yes di I will try to update it fast and I am glad that you liked first chapter...!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Thank you Akka *naa lusu mari sirichitiruken*

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: craziness05

NOTE-This a big change in the story.We just ecalled the story of childhood we lived and we realised that it not more than of 10 chapters.So sorry we change it into a ss.๐Ÿ˜Š



Aww its fine
Don't worry dear
10 parts is also good
Hope u update soon...
And pm me please when u do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Gud one... waiting for the upcumin childhud scenes... !!!
BTW I loved this... "And don't worry my girlfriends are there to help me" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
When will you people update next chap?
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: zaya-lover20

When will you people update next chap?
Please update soon

I will update the next chapter tomorrow๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Hello everyone. Sabse pehle sorry for making u all wait for so long.But I would have updated it earlier but becoz my tests and my mom I was not able to update.My mother she took away my lappy from me๐Ÿ˜ญ and plzz don't ask how I got it back that's why this is a long update. So enough of my bakbak here I go with my story.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Pending romance...!!

At barkat villa

Aliya was sitting and waiting for zain's phone call. She again and again checked her phone. Now she was fuming with anger and was think Zain might have forgotten her. He might be busy in romancing with his gf. She wanted to call him but then she thought if Zain wants to talk to her then he has to call. Chand bibi came, "Aliya madam is calling u." Aliya said, "I am coming."

In the kitchen

"Mami did u called me?" , aliya asked. "Yes I wanted to ask you, what should we make for lunch" , surraiya said. Mami u can make whatever u want to make Zain is not here...mommy mommy Zakira came running to aliya. "Zaikra how many times should I tell call me ammi not mommy". "Okk mommy, I will not call u mommy from next time", Zakira said in teasing manner. Surraiya said, "You are totally like your dad." Zakira said , "I am my daddy's princess. Aliya was awed seeing Zakira's cuteness. Mommy I want to hide somewhere otherwise saif will see me." U both again started your tom and jerry fight. No mommy we are just playing hide and seek and saif is the danner. Ohkk my sweet little princess u go and hide in the store room. Zakira was just going to store room when saif came there. "Zakira you are caught", Saif said. No saif it is cheating u were not allowed to come until and unless I call u", Zakira said. Saif said, "You take so much of time to hide and I was getting bored so I started to search for." Ohh really saif I take much time...?? Yes you do...it feels like I am waiting for my gf and she is getting ready to go on a date with. When saif said this Aliya and surraiya busted out loudly and zakira was fuming with anger. Saif and Zakira started to fight. Now it's Aliya's turn she had to stop them. "U both just stop fighting it is your house not a fish market", aliya said. She was irritated. Surraiya was laughing and zakira and saif made their faces like they had lost third world war. "Maami why are u laughing...??", aliya asked confusedly. Beta u r telling saif and zakira to stop their fights but do u have any idea how you and zain used to fight. Aliya was embarrassed saif and zakira were trying to hide their smiles. "U both why are u laughing, what is so funny in this...??" ,aliya asked angrily. "Nothing, zakira and saif said together. Nothing is funny na so go and play in the hall. Zakira and saif went out of the kitchen. "Maami can u plzz tell me how me and Zain used to fight", aliya requested hesitantly. "Yes sure why not...after 1 hour I will come to your room and I will tell u about your fights", Surraiya said with a smile.

After half hour

"Offo kab hoga yeh aadha ghanta pura", aliya said to herself. Should I call zain, she thought. No I will not he might be busy with his kissy ya huggy ke saath.

Zain's POV

"Ohkk Mr Khan then meet u tomorrow", Zain said with a smile. Ab I think I should talk to Mez otherwise she will burst upon me. It has been since 3 hours I have reached delhi. She might be angry. But it's ohkk mez I am your shauhar and u can't be angry with me for a long time. Zain called aliya.

Aliya's POV

"Ohh toh ab yaad aai hai janab ko meri.",aliya said in a disgusted way. I will not recive the call. Aliya tried to ignore the call but she was not able to. Just after 5 minutes she picked the call. "Mr kitkit I am picking up the call but tumhe mujhe manana padega, is baar main nhi maanne wali tumhari meethi meethi baton se ", aliya said with a light smirk on her face.

Zaya's convo

Aliya : Toh finally Mr kitkit aapko yaad aa gaya ki u even have a wife.

Zain : Aliya what are u saying how can I forget u...??

Aliya : Zain I will talk to you later now mami is here.

Zain : Aliya par listen to me...before zain could complete her sentence aliya kept the phone.

Surraiya's room

"Aliya were u and zain were talking something important??",Surraiya asked. "Mami actually we were talking something important and when u came I was just going to say byee when u came and mami can u plzz tell me about our childhood fights",aliya eagerly requested. Surraiya saw her eagerness and decided to tell them about their childhood.

Flashback starts (everything is narrated by surraiya)

When we all lived in Bhopal. You and Zain used to fight daily. You used to make two ponies and tied a ribbon on your hairs. And zain teased u saying do chotti wali Bandar do choti wali Bandar and u used to be very angry whenever zain teased u like this. You both studied in one class. When you both were in 7th standard. One fine day you both returned from the school and your hairs and your dresses everything was messed up. And even we got a call from your class teacher that u both fought very badly. You both fought because one girl kissed zain on her cheeks and u became very angry and slapped him. Zain was not also less when u slapped him and sat with another boy in anger zain spoiled your hairs. You both fought like tom and jerry that day. Even the teachers and other students were not able to stop your fight. After that one week you both did not talked to each other. Then after that usmaan sahib made u both understand and then u talked to each other.

Flashback ends

You both always used to fight every day and the next day and got patched up. This was a routine of daily. Aliya busted laughing. She was not able to control her laughter and at the same time she was embarrassed. Then Zain called her again. "Go and talk to him he is dying to talk to you",surraiya said while laughing. Aliya was blushing.

Zaya's phone convo (this will be a bit long and beshram one :P)

Zain : Mez why are u so angry...what I did...??

Aliya : First of all u stop calling me Mez.

Zain : Ohkk Mez...I mean mkb.

Aliya : Toh Mr.kitkit finally kissy aur huggy ke baad tumhe meri yaad aa hi gai. (Zain understood what was the matter)

Zain: Mkb are u jealous...??

Aliya : Mr. kitkit are u serious I will be jealous becoz of huggy and kissy. (Aliya lied inside she was burning with jealousy but she tried to be normal and controlled her jealousy)

Zain : But Mkb you should be jealous...

Aliya: (worried) What do you mean zain...??

Zain : My innocent Mkb I was going to kiss...before zain could complete his sentence aliya interrupted.

Aliya : No zain u can't kiss anyone except me. (Now aliya was embarrassed when she realized what she said)

Zain(smiling): Are my Mez first let me complete my sentence...I meant ki I saw a dream where I was kissing you but then I realized that it was just a dream...and you should be jealous of my dream.

Aliya(busted laughing): Zain u r mad...

Zain : I know Mez I am mad for u...and I am madly in love with you...and Mez do u remember the day when we got to know that you are pregnant ...and...

Aliya (blushing) : Zain stop it... you are such a big besharam...kaisi baatein kar rahe ho...

Zain: Mez main kya galat bol raha hun...I am just asking whether you remember that day or not.

Aliya(she was red like a tomato):Yes I remember it.

Flashback starts

ZaYa returned from the hospital after the checkup. Aliya was standing in front of mirror. She was staring at her stomach. Zain came and hugged her from back. He kept his hands on her stomach and was giving her kisses. "Zain now stop all this...what will our baby think",aliya said with a huge smile on her face. "Aliya you really can't even think how much happy I am now...this is the best day of my life...u can't even imagine ki tumne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai" Zain what do u think it will be a baby girl or baby boy...?? Umm...Mez I think it will be a girl her nose will be like me and her eyes will be like...she will have world's best smile like you...but she will be naughty and beshram like me...and one more thing she will call us mom and dad..."No zain she will call us ammi and abbu", aliya argued. They both started to fight about this. Then zain said, yeh toh tabhi dekh lenge when the baby will come...par zain...

Shhh...par war kch nhi you have given me the biggest good news of my life...and after saying this he tried to kiss aliya but aliya moved back. "Don't even try to think about this Mr kitkit", Aliya said with a naughty smirk on her face. "But why it is unfair I can't even kiss you or what...??", asked a desperate zain. No jab tak delivery nhi ho jati till then don't even think about romance. Okk mez but I will give you a peck on your cheeks. Aliya tied to stop him but before she could stop him...he gave a light peck on her cheeks. "So mez what say after your delivery we will celebrate another sr...??", Zain asked with a beshram look on his face. "Zain u r such a big beshram", aliya blushed. offo mez u and your shareefpan I am just saying let's consume our marriage once again and don't forget we have romance in pending. "Achaww...??aaj kalromance bhi pending hota hai...and btw mr kitkit humara kya romance pending hai...??" aliya asked trying to be a bit beshram. Mez lot's and lot's of romance is pending firstly our sr, our kiss, swimming pool romance, dori romance and...before zain could complete aliya stopped him in between...mr kitkit don't worry humara pending romance zarur pura hoga...we will have at least 10 to 15 kids, 20 to 25 kisses and whatever u will say we will do...ohkk...??aliya asked zain. Ohkk my mez par don't forget about this.

Flashback ends

Both aliya and zain were blushing... Zain asked so aliya do you remember about our pending romance...??aliya was blushing like a red tomato .Zain even started to think about their another sr...and aliya was still thinking about that kiss and was dreaming...they both woke up from their dreams when zakira came there

Zakira: Mommy u promised me that whenever you will talk to dad u will tell me about it...

Aliya : I am sorry my princess...I forgot to tell u about it...now u can talk to your abbu

Zakir : Abbu nhi mommy plzz say dad...

Aliya : Offo...Zain has even spoiled u...now stop all this and talk to zain...

Zakira : Ohkk mommy as u say...

Uff...now I end here...!! bas isse bada nhi likh sakti main...๐Ÿ˜†I really don't

know mujhe is chapter ke baad kitne dande padne wale hain...par I am

prepared for everything. Rotten tomatoes, chapals and all the dandas but

plz no rotten eggs becoz I am a pure veg...๐Ÿ˜† It took more than 3 hours to

write this chapter isliye kch review toh chod ke jaana. Next chapter is by avi.

Now I am going from here before u all start beating me...!!


Ps sorry for grammatical errors but I didn't read the chapter properly after

reading it becoz I am a very lazy girl...!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
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Yo unres...!!
Yah..I am first...๐Ÿ˜Ž(I know I am the best..!๐Ÿ˜›)
And wow yaar...this was such a cute chappy...I was smiling throughout the chapter...

The ZaYa convo-hayyy...besharmi zindabad...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Suri-Man..!! She is awesome...!!
And ZaYa used to fight...aww...that was so cute yaar..i m still smiling imagining about this...

Then comes that Preggy flashbackโ˜บ๏ธ...hayy...kab hoga second SR...mujhe bhi intezaar hai...
You people did awesome job here...!!!๐Ÿค—Ab next waale ke liye wait nahi hota๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kaash show me aisa kuch hota..
This whole chapter was so...cute...!!



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