||Childhood We Lived||~A ss by me and avi *Chapter2* update on page 11 - Page 5

Originally posted by: craziness05

My choco pie it was an awesome update...👏 and I hope vinu ko pasand aayega...and maine bola tha na ki sabko pasand aayega...!!😉😆

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Tu mazak kar rahi hai...Pata nahi sabko pasand aaya ya nahi...!! I should actually hang a L-Board first 😆...Me to grammatical mistakes bhi bohot karti hun..!!

Originally posted by: craziness05

Nhi main mazak nhi kar rhi hun...I am serious...par I don't think teko bahut saari galat famliya hai apne baare mein...!!😆

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

jaake ek baar padke to dekho kitne saare grammatical errors hain usme..!!

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res..!! late as always..i m not going hibernation with panadas anymore😳

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res..!! late as always..i m not going hibernation with panadas anymore😳

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res..!! late as always..i m not going hibernation with pandas anymore😳

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Kya yaar..!! Bombshell...!! You updated such an awesome first chapter😲...mujhe to chullu bhar paani me doob marna chahiye..but roza hai..Dayan aisa kuch nahi hai..!!

Tu bhi itni awesome writer hai tu pata nahi tha...Chhupi Rustam..!!!I dont know what is Chhupi Rustam 😆...Tum pagal hogayi ho..??I am still an L-Board😆Thank You So Much!!

My zainie pie is so cute re...and besharam too...😳

First chapter was AMAZING...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Abhi to I want updates jaldi jaldi Begum-e-crack...!!

Bas ek cheez ki kami thi...LAMBA/LONG UPDATE...Pleaseee long updates dena...Tumhe pata hai mene bohot scenes cut kardiya kyuki mene teen teen baar likha😭Next time se lamba update dungi!!

Ab Me chalti hu...bohot PMs hai...unka reply kar dun...

Love you two yaar...I m thoroughly impressed with prologue and Chapter-1...!!I am thoroughly impressed with your reply 😉Thank you so so much🤗

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Originally posted by: vinu127

woah..second dedication tonight

thank u avi kutti🤗You are welcome..!!

and this was a cutie pie one..Thank you so much

i loved aliya reminding zain about every thing and worrying for him

love Zakira tooThank you thank you

just one single suggestion dungi..

dialogues me baar baar naam use karna kam karo..it will help i feel IKri used 'Said Zain" "said Aliya.'Said Zakira' so many times naa..??Post karne ki baad hi realize kiya😆

pls bura math maano me bura kyun maanungi..??You are helping me Thank you soo much!!

i want you to become better and the best Thank You so much Vinu *Khushi k aanso*

love you both I Love You Too 🤗

waiting for next😃😃

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