||Childhood We Lived||~A ss by me and avi *Chapter2* update on page 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey aastha!
I liked the prolouge!
wow Zaya has daughter.. :)
I guess suri is positive here :)
Do pm me when you update next ok!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Pata nahi...!!...Lets wait...hum hi comment karte rahenge to kaam nahi chalega...agar comments are less to we will tell Mods to close this...aur pack up karke ghar chale jayengeπŸ˜›

No no avi pack up mat kariyo! Mujhe padhna hain.. it seems interesting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran422

Hey aastha!

I liked the prolouge!
wow Zaya has daughter.. :)
I guess suri is positive here :)
Do pm me when you update next ok!!

Hey simranπŸ€—
Yes suri is positiveπŸ˜ƒ
Plzz like the post for pm...!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: craziness05

Hey simranπŸ€—
Yes suri is positiveπŸ˜ƒ
Plzz like the post for pm...!!πŸ˜›

avi's post na?? already like kar liya hain.. do update sson if possible πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: simran422

avi's post na?? already like kar liya hain.. do update sson if possible πŸ˜ƒ

Nhi the prologue...chalo koi problem nhi...and avi will update the first chapter till thursday or friday...!!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Wow...

Nice concept.. πŸ˜†
Glad to know that Suri is not a vamp
Loved the prologue..
PM me when you update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res

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unres..!!
DANDA IN HAND..!!
U too did this together? n mujhe pata bhi nahi..??
Shame on all of us..!!
But prologue seems..CUTE...!! I am waiting for the chapter update..update fast n of course..PM ME..!!
Good work both of u...!! Proud of u both..!! My begum-e-crack and Bombshell..!!

Sorry dayan *holds ears* humne bhi kal hi plan kiya tha
Ab maaf bhi karde
Thnq...😳 yes we will update soonπŸ˜ƒ...like the prologueπŸ˜›
Thanxx dayan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Ammu1369

Wow...

Nice concept.. πŸ˜†
Glad to know that Suri is not a vamp
Loved the prologue..
PM me when you update!

Thanxx...😳 even we are happy that suri is not a vampπŸ˜†...ya sure avi will pm you...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
itna bada dokha??????😭😭😭😭
itne vaade kiye the dosti ke... ek pm tak nhi kiya...!!!!😭😭😭
kitne ff likh chuke ho????😑😑😑 mujhe ek baar batana bhi zaruri nhi samjha???
vaade thodne ke liye nhi kre jaate! zain se kuch nhi seekha abhi tk???😲😲

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
kidding dude! tum toh lgta hai serious ho gye!
really awesome prologue...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
aur aaj kl no comments on my works????😲😲
why? abhi itna bura bhi nhi likhti yaar...
bahaut accha prologue hai... jaldi update kro!
mujhse wait nhi kiya jaa rha!😳😳
itna chhota sa prologue diya hai... kanjoos!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
jaldi update kro!
aur agar nhi kiya jaldi... toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

take care
ramzan mubarak
lots of love,
-tanya.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
chutki nd chotu πŸ‘πŸΌ
nice prologue
ohh our zaya has a daughter
jaldi jaldi update karo i'm waiting nd i need pm,its a must
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