SS -lesson from seperation.(part 5/8 added)

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Scene starts in Bhalla house  Ruhi just came from school and telling Ishita about all the masthi she did in school and all laughing at her.

Then Ishita and Ruhi go to their room and Ishita asks Ruhi to go and get ready.

Ishita then takes her mobile and is about to call Raman then she realizes even though she calls he is not going to take the call.

It is scene happening since the court room case .

Raman was trying to defend Adi while everyone mistook Raman to be supporting Shagun and boycotted him .In end everyone come to know that Raman was protecting Adi and withdrew the case but it was too long and Adi blamed Raman for everything as he could'nt save him.

Raman got devasted and left alone by his family .While court case was on no one even spoke to Raman in his own house and all ignored his presence.

Raman got a phone call from head office and he was supposed to leave to Mumbai for few days .

Raman took the opportunity and decided to go to Mumbai.He knew the work will take more than months to finish .He was in Mumbai from three months alone.

While going he just informed Ruhi that he was going to Mumbai for few days everyone heard it but no one tried to stop him.They know how much Raman was hurt by Adi's words.Ishita was in guilt that she misunderstood Raman and he always told her what ever he is doing is for Adi's sake and he will tell her everything once it finished.

Ruhi "Papa main bhee aapkey saath chalungi."

Raman "Naheen beta aapka school hain naa yaha.Aap idhar hee rahon Ishima key saath main aapko phone karoonga na ."

Ishita understood the real meaning of those words that Raman is going alone and not going to take her with him.It would be worse in that condition but worser came as she never spoke to Raman since then .

Raman calls them only to speak to Ruhi and call will end once he spoke to Ruhi.

It was a complete opposite situation from starting.Then Raman used to speak with everyone except Ruhi now he speaks with none except Ruhi.

Ishita was angry on herself that she easily misunderstood Raman eventhough he was telling that he is doing only for Adi.How could a father let his son go to jail so easily.How could he tell everyone that his son did the accident.His son was the culprit whome he was searching for days.

Back to present.

Ishita sees Raman's photo and gets sad .She misses him so much and his avoidance is tearing her apart. She cant show this to everyone and make them sad.Ruhi don't know disputes between her parents and thinks everything is normal.

It is 5'O clock and Ishita's mobile rings as if it was alarm.It was call from Raman but not for Ishita .She knows that but still hoping everything will be normal she takes call .

Ishita "Hello."

Raman "Ishita Ruhi ko phone de na."

Ishita was sad but she got habited to it as it happens every day.She gives phone to Ruhi.

Ruhi "Papa kaiso ho."

Ramana "Main theek hun aap kaisey hon."

Ruhi "Main theek hun.Aaj kaisey raha aapkey school mey."

Ruhi tells everything she did.

Ruhi "Papa aap wapas kabh aarahen hon.I miss you so much."

Usually this calls will be in speaker mode so that both Ishita and Ruhi listen the conversation.Even Raman knew that and still he continue it .

These are words of whole family of Bhalla's and Iyer's .

Raman "I miss you too."

Raman "Pehley yeh batoan kee tumhey kaunsey gifts chahiyen."

Ruhi "Gifts.Mathlab aap aarahen hon.Kabh?"

Raman "Han beta yaha kaam khatam ho gayan hain main kall waapas aa rahan hun."

Both Ruhi and Ishita gets excited and have no control over their happiness.They will be seing Raman almost after three months.

Ruhi takes call to normal mode and gives a huge list to Raman .

Ruhi "Aapko yeh sabh lana hooga.Aur Ishima key liyen bhee."

Raman "Sabkey liyen laaonga .Specially Ishima key liyen ."

Ruhi "I love you Papa ." same time toshiji calls Ruhi and she rushe outside giving phone to Ishita.

Ishita takes phone and before she speaks anything.

Raman "I love you too."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note:-
What is in above post is in Ishita point of view that she should have trusted Raman.
But it will be same in 
Raman's POV that he should have told her.
Raman leaves unable to answer question he should have told them before and why he din't trust them.But not hating his family.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous starting
Loved it
Awww raman in guilt
Ishu in guilt
So he goes away for three months and only talks to ruhi
None tries to talk to him
Waiting to see how the conversation starts between IshRa and others
Please continue soon
and pm me if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow they are both feeling guilty in perfect harmony.  I hope you are planning to continue.
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I loved it ...
Please do PM me ...
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Awnnn
Continue soon
Ishra seperated for 3 months oh goshh lol
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nice vikas...especially the end...ruhi...is really the cupid angel...carry on ur updates...will be waiting...n yes...gifts mein...ishu ke liye kya laya...do mention it...at least we will know how good hubby he is in this part...bcoz in real many hubby's are not good in choosing gifts to their partners   Edited by Raatri - 9 years ago
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Raman "I love you too.".

Ishita was shocked by listening this and was silent .Raman understood that it was Ishita online and was about to cut the call.

Ishita "Aap kall aarahe hon?"

Raman thought for a moment and decided to answer "Han kall shaam ko pahunch jaoonga.Tum sabko bathadeena.Tumhey kuch chaahiyen."

Ishita was more than happy now as Raman finally spoke to her.Ishita "Kuch naheen .Aap seedhey ghar aarahen hain yaa .."

Raman "Ghar aa aarahan hun.Tumhey baath mey phone karoonga." He cuts the call.

Ishita hugs the phone and was happy.She knew one thing now.What ever happen there is always a thread of relation protecting them which will never let them separate.

Ishita just wanted to meet Raman directly and speak to him open heart and solve their dispute .She believ in herself now and her love.

She goes outside and Ruhi already told everyone that Raman is coming tomorrow .It is different from last time as Ruhi came to know that Raman is coming in end while now she knew it before anyone.

Mrs Bhalla confirms news with Ishita and they decide to have celebration but it come to halt when Raman's mood was raised.

They don't know whether Raman is still angry at them or not and if they do it against his wish he will be angry.

Ishita tells this news to Iyer's and they also feel happy.

Ishita's condition was different as she was happy one side but still worried about how Raman is going to behave .Raman speaking in phone gave her a positive hope .She started preparing their room for welcoming Raman.

In Mumbai ,Raman was in a shopping mall buying gifts for Ruhi and others.Raman was also excited that he is finally going to his house.

He then goes to a jwellary shop to select a necklace for Mrs Bhalla and other women in his house and neighbours.

Raman after shopping goes to his guest house where he has been staying for three months.He sits in a couch and remembers how Ishita cried when she thought Raman was cheating her.Raman got tears in his eyes.

Raman "Iss baar main kissey bhee tarah Ishita ko batha doonga aur maffee bhee mangoonga."

Raman was packing everything and then he gets a call from Ishita's mobile.He usually wont take the call unable to speak to Ishita properly after that incident.Because he felt the first question coming would be why he din't tell her and why he din't trust her.

This time Raman gained courage and takes the call.

Raman "Hello."

Ruhi "Papa main hoon."

Raman "Han bolo kyaa boolna hain."

Ruhi "Papa aap bahhar aon naa."

Raman "bahaar ."

Ruhi "Aaap bass bahaar aaon ." call was on speaker and Ishita was also listening.

Raman "han bahaar hun .Abh bathaaon kyaa baath hain."

Ruhi "Papa aapko mujhey ek promise karnaa hooga."

Ishita was surprised as she don't know what promise Ruhi was going to ask.

Raman"Kyaa ."

Ruhi "Pehley promise karon fir main bathaongi."

Raman "Han promise abh bathaon."

Ruhi "Papa aap waapas ayengey naa,Hum fir picnic jayengey main ,aap aur Ishima."

Ishita was shocked and happy but now eagerly waiting for reply.

Raman "nain beta .Picnic naheen ho saktha."

Ruhi becomes sad and being daughter of Raman her stubbornness always has impact.

Raman "Hum picnic aheen jayengey.Hum sabh tour pey jayengey kitney din aap donon decide karo."

Ruhi was jumping now with joy and even Ishita's happiness almost exploded as she wasn't with Raman for three months and now she is getting chance to spend time with him alone with out any professional disturbance.

Ruhi "Thankyou papa.I love you."

Raman "I love you too.Pehley yeh bathaon kee yumney bahaa kyo bulayan."

Ruhi "Papa aaj full moon hain naa."

Raman looking at stars "Han tho ."

Ruhi "Pati ney kahan kee full moon sey koi wish magengey tho who poorey kareegi."

Raman "Tho.Aapney kya  maanga ."

Ruhi "Aasey milney .who abh poora ho rahan hain."

Raman "Theek hain .Abh aap kya kar rahen hon."

Ruhi "Main Ishima key saath aapkey kamara saja raheen hon.Space banana a hain naa.Aap mujhey bahuth saarey gifts larahen hon."

Ishita dint notice about this gifts part morning but now it caught her attention.

Something catches Ruhi's attention and she goes leaving phone to Ishita.

Ishita "Aap Ruhi key baathon par jyaadha dhyan math deejiyen.Who jho bolengi sabh laaney kee jaroori  naheen hain,Bahuth jiddi ho gayeen hain."

Raman "Too late.Main khareed chka hun."

Ishita  was happy eventhough she spoke she din't expect a reply.

Ishita "Fir aap directly math deejiyen.mAin handle karoongi."

Raman "Tumhey kuch kehnaa hain?" Raman want Ishita to speak but she wants to speak directly.

Ishita "Naheen ,aap ney khaana khaaya ."

Raman "Han khaney jaa rahan hun.baath mey baath karoonga."

Raman cuts the call and sees at full moon and remembers time spent with Ishita and wishes they come back and he and Ishita back to normal.

He then thinking about Ishita sleeps there only.Where in home Ishita sleeps seing Raman's photo hung to wall.

 

Next day Raman left to airport and in Bhalla house preperations are going on to welcome Raman.Ishita told them that Raman was not angry and speaking normally butthey have their own doubt.

Ishita wants to go to airport to pickup Raman and she goes alone as everyone else are busy in one or other work.

Ishita was going in car and suddenly it starts raining and Ishita's car stops suddenly .

She gets tensed as it is time for flight and her car gets struck on was and she cant even go out to check it due to rain.She was then waiting for help.

She was waiting and all windows are filled with water and she can't see anything properly .

Then she hears a knock in her window.

 

 

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Awesome... Pls Continue... 
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Wonderful update
Chalo both raman and Ishu started talking
Awww missing each other...EPIC
Who's knowing in the window?
Hope Ishu is not in some trouble
continue soon