Ariya SS: Akhir kiwu

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys aaj mera mood mei ek emotional wala idea aya hai. Pata kiya huwa mujhe aaj subha se bahut low feel kar rahi hu. Koi tension hai hai sab thik hai but dil gabhra raha hai. Toh mind divert jarne ke liye yeh likh daali. Agar rubbish huwa toh bata dena i will not mind. Agar acha laga toh give yr views as 50+ views ke baad i will continue. Lol hope itna atiyachaar kaafi hai hahaha sys...


She stood up near the window and looked blankly outside and thought her life was full of happiness.acha family, dost aur ek boyfriend bhi lekin ek pal mei he sab bekhar gaya.kiya galti thi aisi meri ke aaj sab kuch mere liye ajnabi hogaye.nahi khusiya hai, nahi friends, nahi family ka saath aur nahi pyar. Akhir kiwu?   

yeh sochte sochte woh apne bed par baith gayi and started crying.

She had loved him very much aur woh bhi paheli nazar mei usne bhi mujhe propose kiya. Kitne ache se hum chale ja rahe thee.

He was the very first guy whom she had fell in love with and left everything for him par usne mujhse pyar kiya he nahi kahbi. Woh toh sirf mere jism ka. Bhuka tha aur mujhe luth kar barbaad kardiya. Meine socha ueh pyar hai par. ...

She was so lost in her thoughts when she had her name being called.
"riya di"

Riya quickly wiped her years and turned towards her sister. Who had never left her side since that dreadful night.

Riya: areh sakshi yeh kiya. Kiwu bhaag rahi ho

sakshi: di meine jaldi ajj chuti leliya hai.

Riya: kiwu

sakshi angrily looked at her: mujhe malloom tha tu bhul jayegi. Kaha dhiyaan rahta hai tera di. Ajj tumko hospital jana hai

riyas smiled vanished while sakshi looked at her and knew she was hirt but suddenly she saw her di smiling. Sakhi loves her di very much and for her she can do anything. She has left her family and came to stay in mumbai with her after that dreadful night.
She told her parents agar woh di ke kuch nahi toh woh uske kuch nahi Aur ayese he dono sisters came here. Riya for now is staying at home though she was a reseach specialist in FBI simla branch when she was back her hometown but when she came to mumbai due to her sorrows n sickness she opted to stay unemployed for few months while sakhi was crime journalist back home and then after coming to mumbai she applied in ETF and got in thus now works in etf.

Riya looked at sakshi and she knew her sister was feeling bad but she said " sakz abh kaha khoyi ho mere saath hospital jana nahi hai kiya?

Sakshi smile and knew her di is best but bas khudha uski khushiya lauta de. Kisi bhi roop mei.aur di ki jaldi se hospital se chutkara mil jaye.



Both sister went to hospital for riyas checking

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yeeehhh!!! me first
i really like it...its fresh
meri ri ko kisne dhoka diya
sakshiz is riyaz sister, hmm i like it
is riya pregnant?
awesome start
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start dear.. Loved it.. Tragic past of riya.. Hope she overcome it soon.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..Edited by unishaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: love...OMG

yeeehhh!!! me first

i really like it...its fresh
meri ri ko kisne dhoka diya
sakshiz is riyaz sister, hmm i like it
is riya pregnant?
awesome start
cont soon



heheh yap u r first 😊
thnk u 😊
m glad u liked it
hmmm thira ziyada emotional tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome start dear.. Loved it.. Tragic past of riya.. Hope she overcome it soon.. Continue soon..

thnk u di 😊 😊
m glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional Start Di..!! Toh Riya was betrayed by her love..Who is he? Sakshi is Riya's Sister and really cares about her! But hospital? Is Riya Pregnant? 😲 Continuee Soonz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
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Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Emotional Start Di..!! Toh Riya was betrayed by her love..Who is he? Sakshi is Riya's Sister and really cares about her! But hospital? Is Riya Pregnant? 😲 Continuee Soonz..

 
thanks shanaya 😊
i know thora emotional start hai ,  actually bahut hai nah 😭
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome update
Love it
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thnks zubiya 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
awesome start
love it
cont soon