Originally posted by: neenzz
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Aww.. He broke that guy's nose for aaliya, and in that process hurt his hand, i wonder what Aaliya did then!
might have catastrated him, who knows 😆 9:
Well, girls are smarter, that's a fact!
But chem may Zain ka grade nhi btaya aapne
arre, bataya toh. A- 8:
This was hot actually, "can i join?" Woah!
I knew Aaliya secretly blushed 😉
And he also imagined her taking a shower, double woah!!
Issmay bhi gauhar aagayi?! Khair koi nhi, it only means more kitkit, leading to either cute or hot moments between Zain & Aaliya
[COLOR= Green] you are currently climbing up to become my current most favourite person in IF 😛 [/COLOR]
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Aagay? I wish u wrote these into a fan fiction, these are so goddamn cute!
man, don't even think bout that. I woll die 😛 Ossnay chocolate di k nhi? Zain nay perha k nhi? Aaliya ne help ki k nhi?
So many questions! Arghh!
But it was so cute! Like all the others i read so far :)
I'll tell na.
Nai, chocolate nai di, his assignment remained incomplete 🤣 6:
So wait! She actually kissed him?! Wow! Didn't think it would happen so soon! But thanks :)
Needless to say, but i am in love with ur writing, dude! Have u written anything else on ZaYa?
Cause i would love to read that too
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Badtameez! Aapne osmaan ko q bura bana diya? Ab Zain ka darling kon hoga? :(
I felt so sad when i read about his childhood, but then was relieved to know that he had the haider twins to get his mind off of those painful memories. At first they reminded him of his once happy family, but then, eventually, they became his family. Adorable!
Aww... He hated Aaliya just because she ranked above him in Zoobie Doobie's priority list! Even the reason is so cute, just like him :) and his relationship with Aaliya, which he isn't yet able to define 😕 because he is in denial... Loved this one as well
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Iss ch k baaray may me kya kaho, dream chapter, their food fight would have looked so nice on tv, and their kiss, hot! "But i am ur idiot" love this dialog, laughed so hard at this one, i wish they can go back to being this kitkit-ing couple again :(
oh,I wish too. I love old married couples who bicker 😛 Thank you for such an amazing chapter :)
PS, i was so happy u didn't drag this to the next chapter, she replied whom she wanted to ask her out in the same chapter, and she was the one who initiated the kiss, totally didn't expect that!
lol, I am a very atm person 😛
And my Aaliya is very bold 😆 3:
I'm starting to wonder if he even hates these reasons!
no, no he doesn't 😆 It was the best one yet. They truly understand each other. I loved their make out sessions, and then she asked him to sleep at her place, aww, super cute!
12th may he kahi shaadi karanay ka plan tou nhi haina? 😛
lol, nai 🤣 PS, aww, He calls her babe!
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The little box is the ring box, haina? *exited*
6 years?! Wah yaar abhi tk koi problem nhi aayi, acha hai!
aayi hogi, I didn't have the energy to think of any problems 😛 Hot hot hot!! I wouldn't have been able to watch that, acha hua perh rhi thi :p
Now i get what people mean when they say, "mujhse tou koi movie khatam nhi hoti" 😉
I am sure they did not mean it like that 🤣 Zain has the ring in his hands, zubair called, i know something is not right!
Aaliya ka accident?! Tauba! Yeh kya kiya sanika? Why?!
because of Emaani, blame her 😛 She'll live, right? Zain-will-propose?
1a:
U made me cry, i'm really scared now, starting to lose all hope! Sirf one last part remains, kya hoga ab, please, please, please, sub sahi ho!
1b:
For second i thought ler legs were... But good to know it was only becaused they had numbed them
Aww, she's worried about the scars, anyone would be! But zain wouldn't care now, would he?
U made me cry again! He had already put the ring on her finger, aww! He knoew she wanted to marry him, and that the proposal is just the formality. Yet, i felt his proposal was way better than anyother! (I know there was none, but whatever he said, it was to me a better than our traditional ones, and that gesture of putting the finger on her ring, so the when she wakes up, she sees it, that itself was sort of a proposal)
Yes, he doesn't care if she is scarred, all he knows and cares about is that he loves her, and she loves him back!
Baaki sub tou theek hai, but 7 kids?! Any specific reason?
What a perfect end to the series, I simply loved it.
I know it's a rather big comment, but saaray saath parhay, and i am a little late too, but i think yehi perfect timing thi, it kinda took my mind off of the current halala track.
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